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Its the first time i tryed to do a story, i think it's bad, plz comment ... 
HIDDEN DEMONS
Chapter 1 - Intro
(Once upon a time, on an mythical land named Jigoku, there was a boy, his name was Shogun, and he made great things, let me tell you his story …)
Pilot Characters – Shogun (male) ; Nanoko (female, friend) ; Kyodu (male, friend ) ; Kotei(male, emperor) ; other secondary characters …
Shogun – Come on Nanoko-San, Kyodu-Kun, we are going to get late to our first mission!
Kyodu – Hold on, im tired!
Shogun – Stop being lazy and hurry up!
(Minutes later)
Shogun - Finnaly, we have arrived to Kotei’s office …
Kotei – Oh, I can see you have arrived, Welcome to my office …
Shogun – Thank you Emperor, may I ask, what is our mission?
Kotei – This is your first mission, so it isn’t going to be an hard one, you and your team are going to be sent to the forest, your objective is to capture the tail of a werewolf!
Shogun – Hmm, Sounds Hard.
Kotei – Don’t worry, it isn’t.
Nanoko – Im going to take care of the werewolf after we take his tale off …
Kyodu – Gahh, Nanoko, always the same attitude, why can you just let the werewolf still?!
Nanoko – Oh Shut Up Kyodu …
Kotei – Well well, don’t need to start fighting, now go… you have to do your mission, Yorishi-San (secondary character, irrelevant) is going to guide you to the forest, once you get there, she will leave.
Yorishi – LETS GO!
(Arriving at the forest…)
Yorishi – Okay Kids, we have arrived, now go and finish your mission … (disappears)
Shogun – Lets go Kyodu, Nanoko, we have to leave a good impression to the Emperor!
Nanoko – Ahhh, whats that ?!?!?!
?????? – GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Kyodu – Aw, it seems like a giant worm :/
G.Worm – GRRRRRRRR! DINNER!!!
Shogun – Oh shit, run!!
Nanoko – Wait… he might be friendly.
Shogun – Didn’t you just heard what he said ? He wants to eat us!!!
Nanoko – Oh, okay RUN!!!
(After hiding themselves into some bushes)
Kyodu – Uff, I think he is gone …
Shogun – Yeah, let’s go on with our mission!
Kyodu – Calm Down, I have to rest, we spent hours running away from that
monster!
Shogun – Shut Up, let’s go!
Kyoku – Okay Okay, don’t destroy my ears …
Nanoko - … I think that there is a wolf right over there!
Shogun – You are right, let’s hunt him!
Shogun *Takes off sword and goes after the wolf*
Shogun – You can run, but you can’t hide! I will end up getting you!
Wolf – Ahhh …
Shogun - *Cuts off the wolf’s tail*
Kyodu – He ran away Nanoko, it seems u are not going to heal him Ah Ah Ah !
Nanoko – -.-
Shogun – Okay, lets head back to the Emperor’s office !
(Arriving at the Emperor’s office…)
Shogun – We have completed our Mission !! Mister emperor !
Kotei – Oh, good, show me the werewolf’s tail.
Shogun – Here it is…
*Hands the tail to the Emperor*
Kotei – Hmm, how strange… I think this is … yeah… this isn´t and werewolf’s tail, it is a WOLF’S tail !!! S-Sh-Shogun !!!!
Shogun - Oh crap !
Kotei – YOU FAILED THE MISSION !!! GET OUT OF MY OFFICE !!!
Shogun - ;(
Kyodu - ;(
Nanoko - ;(
THE END (of the pilot episode)
HIDDEN DEMONS
Chapter 1 - Intro
(Once upon a time, on an mythical land named Jigoku, there was a boy, his name was Shogun, and he made great things, let me tell you his story …)
Pilot Characters – Shogun (male) ; Nanoko (female, friend) ; Kyodu (male, friend ) ; Kotei(male, emperor) ; other secondary characters …
Shogun – Come on Nanoko-San, Kyodu-Kun, we are going to get late to our first mission!
Kyodu – Hold on, im tired!
Shogun – Stop being lazy and hurry up!
(Minutes later)
Shogun - Finnaly, we have arrived to Kotei’s office …
Kotei – Oh, I can see you have arrived, Welcome to my office …
Shogun – Thank you Emperor, may I ask, what is our mission?
Kotei – This is your first mission, so it isn’t going to be an hard one, you and your team are going to be sent to the forest, your objective is to capture the tail of a werewolf!
Shogun – Hmm, Sounds Hard.
Kotei – Don’t worry, it isn’t.
Nanoko – Im going to take care of the werewolf after we take his tale off …
Kyodu – Gahh, Nanoko, always the same attitude, why can you just let the werewolf still?!
Nanoko – Oh Shut Up Kyodu …
Kotei – Well well, don’t need to start fighting, now go… you have to do your mission, Yorishi-San (secondary character, irrelevant) is going to guide you to the forest, once you get there, she will leave.
Yorishi – LETS GO!
(Arriving at the forest…)
Yorishi – Okay Kids, we have arrived, now go and finish your mission … (disappears)
Shogun – Lets go Kyodu, Nanoko, we have to leave a good impression to the Emperor!
Nanoko – Ahhh, whats that ?!?!?!
?????? – GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Kyodu – Aw, it seems like a giant worm :/
G.Worm – GRRRRRRRR! DINNER!!!
Shogun – Oh shit, run!!
Nanoko – Wait… he might be friendly.
Shogun – Didn’t you just heard what he said ? He wants to eat us!!!
Nanoko – Oh, okay RUN!!!
(After hiding themselves into some bushes)
Kyodu – Uff, I think he is gone …
Shogun – Yeah, let’s go on with our mission!
Kyodu – Calm Down, I have to rest, we spent hours running away from that
monster!
Shogun – Shut Up, let’s go!
Kyoku – Okay Okay, don’t destroy my ears …
Nanoko - … I think that there is a wolf right over there!
Shogun – You are right, let’s hunt him!
Shogun *Takes off sword and goes after the wolf*
Shogun – You can run, but you can’t hide! I will end up getting you!
Wolf – Ahhh …
Shogun - *Cuts off the wolf’s tail*
Kyodu – He ran away Nanoko, it seems u are not going to heal him Ah Ah Ah !
Nanoko – -.-
Shogun – Okay, lets head back to the Emperor’s office !
(Arriving at the Emperor’s office…)
Shogun – We have completed our Mission !! Mister emperor !
Kotei – Oh, good, show me the werewolf’s tail.
Shogun – Here it is…
*Hands the tail to the Emperor*
Kotei – Hmm, how strange… I think this is … yeah… this isn´t and werewolf’s tail, it is a WOLF’S tail !!! S-Sh-Shogun !!!!
Shogun - Oh crap !
Kotei – YOU FAILED THE MISSION !!! GET OUT OF MY OFFICE !!!
Shogun - ;(
Kyodu - ;(
Nanoko - ;(
THE END (of the pilot episode)
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