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Hey ppl, this is book two of my hiddendemons fanfic, hope you enjoy reading and plz comment 
HiddenDemons
Book Two
Chapter 1 - Kyodu's Training.
Supamonsuta - Cough... Cough... I... Have finally arrived at AkumaTochi... I... have to rest...
Iruson - Hmm, what are you doing back here?!?!?!
Supamonsuta - Help me...
Iruson - Aha, why the hell would I help you? In fact, I'm gonna kill you right now!
Supamonsuta - N-no...!
Iruson - Aha, now it is payback time. - Iruson dresses his claw gloves and starts cuting Supamonsuta to make him die slowly...
...
Supamonsuta - Cough Cough. Grrr... I... Will kill you!
Iruson - Like if you could!
Suddenly, Supamonsuta gets Up.
Supamonsuta - Gahh, I may not have my arms, but I can kill you anyway!
Iruson - No... no you can not.
Supamonsuta - I... do not fight only using Shitsu, there are other techniques.
Iruson - Other Techniques?
Supamonsuta - Yes, you dont know it because you are weak, only strong fighters can develop those techniques.
Iruson - And I guess you have them?
Supamonsuta - Yes... Karada: Kyooriokuna Shotto!
Supamonsuta kicks Iruson and sends him to the ''stars''.
Supamonsuta - Eh... Weakling... I... must rest here.
Supamonsuta lays on the ground and starts sleeping... In the next day, in Jigoku...
Bereburu - Finally, I found that kid's house....... KYODU!!! KYODU!!!
...
Kyodu - ...hmph... w-wh-what?!
Bereburu - It is time to train!
Kyodu - What?! It is like... 5am!
Bereburu - Yes, this is the best hour to train.
Kyodu - But last night we only finished at 2am! I only slept 3 hours!!!
Bereburu - So did I, and I am not complaining.
Kyodu - ... ... ... Wait a minute, I will be right there...
Bereburu -
Minutes later...
Kyodu - I am... here...
Bereburu - Dont be lazy!
Kyodu - Yeah... yeah...
...
Bereburu - Ok, now that we are at the training fields, I have a new type of training to you.
Kyodu - ...
Bereburu - You have to... ... KYODU!!!... Are you even listening?
Kyodu - Hmm? What? ... oh... yeah Im listening... (you sick f*ck)
Bereburu - Ok, you have to... oh wait... I have to give you an explanation.
Kyodu - Listening...
Bereburu -Dozu gives you the power to manipulate your surroundings, so you can change the composition of the earth so it can be hard and soft, thus allowing you to create mud or dirt, allowing you to make it heavier or lighter also. It is strong against Mizu, and weak against Inazu.
Kyodu - Wow, you are so smart. (geek)
Bereburu - Well... I do my best... anyways, did you understood this?
Kyodu - Yes.
Bereburu - You see your element is not just to punch people with rocks and to protect your whole body with rocks, but it also consists in manipulating earth, rocks; you can create mud or dirt.
Kyodu - Yes, I got it... And so, what should I do?
Bereburu - Ok, see that hole over there?
Kyodu - Yes...
Bereburu - I want you to sit in there and focus your Shitsu, try to become one with the earth that surrounds you.
Kyodu - Ok!
Kyodu sits on the hole, he closes his eyes and focus his Shitsu to become one with the earth. He notices in what he was doing so far, and he decided he wanted to get stronger, so he focus more his Shitsu, connecting himself with the earth.
...
Kyodu - Wow!
Bereburu - Yes, I see you are understanding this. Now place your hands in the earth and try to pull out two chunks of earth, concentrating your Shitsu in your palms.
Kyodu - Ok!
Kyodu focus his Shitsu in his palms, then he slams his hand into the earth, he concentrates in not losing his Shitsu from his palms while kneeling, he starts feeling his Shitsu connecting with the Earth, then he quickly pulls out the requested chunks of earth.
Bereburu - Great, you have a great focus!
Kyodu - Thanks, I am really trying hard this time.
Bereburu - I can see that, now TRY to manipulate the two chunks of solid earth into something useful to you.
Kyodu - Ok. I will try...
Kyodu starts concentrating in changing the Shitsu that flows from his palms to the chunks he removed from the ground. He focus his Shitsu around the chunks, and slowly tries to compress the chunks into a shape...
Kyodu - I-I did it!
Bereburu - Yes, but... what is that?
Kyodu - --' Cant you see?! Its a hammer with spikes on top!!!
Bereburu - Oh yeah... (that seems... like... just... a ball...)
Kyodu - So... what next?
Bereburu - You have not mastered this part of the training yet. Try harder, concentrate, and try to make an hammer with spikes on top out of the other chunk.
Kyodu - I will try.
Kyodu concentrates harder then before, he creates Shitsu around the chunks, and believes he is going to make it, he starts manipulating the Shitsu into the shape of an hammer with spikes on top and kneels because he couldnt control his Shitsu yet. Slowly, the chunk starts changing shape while Kyodu sweats from all over his body. All he has in his mind is determination and confidence.
Then the chunk becomes like an hammer with spikes on top, and Kyodu cheers.
Bereburu - Nice Kyodu!
Kyodu - Y-yeah...
Bereburu - You cannot control your Shitsu that well, I'm going to take you home to rest a little, then we will have lunch and continue our training.
Kyodu - Ok! (I am finally enjoying my training!)
In the meantime, Supamonsuta wakes up...
Supamonsuta - Eheh, I feel much better, but my arms are gone, I need to eat something and then... I will kill Shite!!! That weakling doesnt know what awaits him!
THE END!
PS: I hope you like this, it was a little based on some of nb's trainings.
HiddenDemons
Book Two
Chapter 1 - Kyodu's Training.
Supamonsuta - Cough... Cough... I... Have finally arrived at AkumaTochi... I... have to rest...
Iruson - Hmm, what are you doing back here?!?!?!
Supamonsuta - Help me...
Iruson - Aha, why the hell would I help you? In fact, I'm gonna kill you right now!
Supamonsuta - N-no...!
Iruson - Aha, now it is payback time. - Iruson dresses his claw gloves and starts cuting Supamonsuta to make him die slowly...
...
Supamonsuta - Cough Cough. Grrr... I... Will kill you!
Iruson - Like if you could!
Suddenly, Supamonsuta gets Up.
Supamonsuta - Gahh, I may not have my arms, but I can kill you anyway!
Iruson - No... no you can not.
Supamonsuta - I... do not fight only using Shitsu, there are other techniques.
Iruson - Other Techniques?
Supamonsuta - Yes, you dont know it because you are weak, only strong fighters can develop those techniques.
Iruson - And I guess you have them?
Supamonsuta - Yes... Karada: Kyooriokuna Shotto!
Supamonsuta kicks Iruson and sends him to the ''stars''.
Supamonsuta - Eh... Weakling... I... must rest here.
Supamonsuta lays on the ground and starts sleeping... In the next day, in Jigoku...
Bereburu - Finally, I found that kid's house....... KYODU!!! KYODU!!!
...
Kyodu - ...hmph... w-wh-what?!
Bereburu - It is time to train!
Kyodu - What?! It is like... 5am!
Bereburu - Yes, this is the best hour to train.
Kyodu - But last night we only finished at 2am! I only slept 3 hours!!!
Bereburu - So did I, and I am not complaining.
Kyodu - ... ... ... Wait a minute, I will be right there...
Bereburu -
Minutes later...
Kyodu - I am... here...
Bereburu - Dont be lazy!
Kyodu - Yeah... yeah...
...
Bereburu - Ok, now that we are at the training fields, I have a new type of training to you.
Kyodu - ...
Bereburu - You have to... ... KYODU!!!... Are you even listening?
Kyodu - Hmm? What? ... oh... yeah Im listening... (you sick f*ck)
Bereburu - Ok, you have to... oh wait... I have to give you an explanation.
Kyodu - Listening...
Bereburu -Dozu gives you the power to manipulate your surroundings, so you can change the composition of the earth so it can be hard and soft, thus allowing you to create mud or dirt, allowing you to make it heavier or lighter also. It is strong against Mizu, and weak against Inazu.
Kyodu - Wow, you are so smart. (geek)
Bereburu - Well... I do my best... anyways, did you understood this?
Kyodu - Yes.
Bereburu - You see your element is not just to punch people with rocks and to protect your whole body with rocks, but it also consists in manipulating earth, rocks; you can create mud or dirt.
Kyodu - Yes, I got it... And so, what should I do?
Bereburu - Ok, see that hole over there?
Kyodu - Yes...
Bereburu - I want you to sit in there and focus your Shitsu, try to become one with the earth that surrounds you.
Kyodu - Ok!
Kyodu sits on the hole, he closes his eyes and focus his Shitsu to become one with the earth. He notices in what he was doing so far, and he decided he wanted to get stronger, so he focus more his Shitsu, connecting himself with the earth.
...
Kyodu - Wow!
Bereburu - Yes, I see you are understanding this. Now place your hands in the earth and try to pull out two chunks of earth, concentrating your Shitsu in your palms.
Kyodu - Ok!
Kyodu focus his Shitsu in his palms, then he slams his hand into the earth, he concentrates in not losing his Shitsu from his palms while kneeling, he starts feeling his Shitsu connecting with the Earth, then he quickly pulls out the requested chunks of earth.
Bereburu - Great, you have a great focus!
Kyodu - Thanks, I am really trying hard this time.
Bereburu - I can see that, now TRY to manipulate the two chunks of solid earth into something useful to you.
Kyodu - Ok. I will try...
Kyodu starts concentrating in changing the Shitsu that flows from his palms to the chunks he removed from the ground. He focus his Shitsu around the chunks, and slowly tries to compress the chunks into a shape...
Kyodu - I-I did it!
Bereburu - Yes, but... what is that?
Kyodu - --' Cant you see?! Its a hammer with spikes on top!!!
Bereburu - Oh yeah... (that seems... like... just... a ball...)
Kyodu - So... what next?
Bereburu - You have not mastered this part of the training yet. Try harder, concentrate, and try to make an hammer with spikes on top out of the other chunk.
Kyodu - I will try.
Kyodu concentrates harder then before, he creates Shitsu around the chunks, and believes he is going to make it, he starts manipulating the Shitsu into the shape of an hammer with spikes on top and kneels because he couldnt control his Shitsu yet. Slowly, the chunk starts changing shape while Kyodu sweats from all over his body. All he has in his mind is determination and confidence.
Then the chunk becomes like an hammer with spikes on top, and Kyodu cheers.
Bereburu - Nice Kyodu!
Kyodu - Y-yeah...
Bereburu - You cannot control your Shitsu that well, I'm going to take you home to rest a little, then we will have lunch and continue our training.
Kyodu - Ok! (I am finally enjoying my training!)
In the meantime, Supamonsuta wakes up...
Supamonsuta - Eheh, I feel much better, but my arms are gone, I need to eat something and then... I will kill Shite!!! That weakling doesnt know what awaits him!
THE END!
PS: I hope you like this, it was a little based on some of nb's trainings.