Hidden Feelings [SasuNaru]

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This is an Yaoi fanfic showing the sometimes romantic sometimes violent relationship between Naruto and Sasuke. Criticisms are very welcome.

Chapter One

The both stood there. Truly amazed from what happened. Naruto was gasping and Sasuke was heavily blushed. The touch of his lips still ticked Naruto's.

"Hey ,Naruto!" Somebody called him.

He slowly turned around. Naruto didn't want to get his eyes off from Sasuke. In a second he stared Sakura in the eyes.

"She didn't see anything ,did she?" He hoped at least.

"Want to come with me for some ramen?"

Naruto sighed with relief. Sakura noticed Sasuke and winked to him. In return she got a gold stare. She looked away to Naruto who was hesitating.

"It's not like Naruto to think about ramen. What's going on?"

Naruto figured out what she was thinking and said:

"Yes! Ramen! Way to go ,Sakura! I'm hungry!"

She also sighed with relief. "Every thing's ok."

He followed her then quickly turned around to send Sasuke an air kiss. Smiling brightly, Sasuke caught it. Confused ,but nevertheless happy Naruto thought:

"What's going on?!?... Sasuke kissed me... and... I kissed back... does that mean I'm gay?"

His ramen got cold and he didn't eat it. Sakura was even more confused than him.

"His sudden personality change or whatever it is is really strange... What on earth has gotten into him?"

Surprisingly Sasuke wasn't confused. Not in the slightest. He was happy and for a little forgot about his goal. To kill his brother Itachi.

Orochimaru was confused though. Seing such happiness in his student was truly amazing. His natural curiosity made him ask:

"What's going on ,Sasuke? Why are you so happy?"

"Sensei? Whata re you talking about?"

His face expression changed from happy to indifferent. Just as it was before. A mask to fool his sensei. And he even thought he succeeded.

***

Out of breath and aroused they broke the kiss only to let some oxygen in their lungs. A surprised squeal was herd. Naruto and Sasuke were deep in the woods and didn't think that anyone could see them. Both surprised and intrigued they turned around and saw Hinata hyuga. Her eyes were wide open and she looked as if someone died.

"Hinata!... I can explain..." Naruto said. Sasuke was smiling widely.

"Hey ,Hinata! How are you?" He greeted.

Hinata ran away ,crying. For a second Sasuke thought that Naruto will follow her ,but he turned around ,laughing.

"I guess she was surprised..."

Well hidden Orochimaru was watching.

"Very interesting indeed. So that's what he's happy about."

***

"And they were kissing!" Hinata told Sakura who dropped her cup of tea on the floor.

"Kissing? You must have seen something else."

"No. I am possitive. When they heard me they turned around they were both surprised and out of breath."

"So that's why he was acting so strange..."

Sakura concluded while cleaning up the pieces of the cup from the floor.

***

"See you later..." He hesitated... calling him a name like 'sweety' would be strange so Naruto waved goodbye and went home. So did Sasuke.

Naruto found Hinata and Sakur at his place. They were both sitting on his bed.

"Hello... so what's up?"

"You are up! You kissing Sasuke!" They both angrily said.

"Ahh!" He shouted. "How do you know about that ,Sakura?"

"Who cares? The important thing is why the hell were you kissing Sasuke?"

Naruto felt the anger in his rise.

"Who are you to judge? Who are you to tell me what I can or can't do?" He shouted.

Surprised she started studdering:

"Well... we... ll it's just that..."

"What? What? You can't tell me what to do! It's my life!"

Orochimaru was wating for Sasuke to come home.

"Hello ,Sasuke."

"Hello ,sensei! What's up?"

"Oh ,nothing. Nothing as interesting as what you've been up to."

"Me? Sensei ,did you follow me?" There was fear in his voice.

"What would your big brother say?"

"Sensei ,I do not care what he would say I am disappointed. How could you follow me?"

"I thought you wanted to break your bond with Naruto. That didn't look like braking it."

"That is non of you buisness ,sensei."

"Oh ,isn't it? As my student and object of string desire I care for you."

"Desire? Bullshit! If I was an object of desire you would have done something about it."
 

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Actually YS you're quite right but its not "gay" its Yaoi... or Yaoish... Damn I hate DA for letting me know all of that... ... ... But we are all different kind of human being so no arguin on what WoL likes or what I like or what YS likes... ^^
 

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This is an Yaoi fanfic showing the sometimes romantic sometimes violent relationship between Naruto and Sasuke. Criticisms are very welcome.

Chapter One

The both stood there. Truly amazed from what happened. Naruto was gasping and Sasuke was heavily blushed. The touch of his lips still ticked Naruto's.

"Hey ,Naruto!" Somebody called him.

He slowly turned around. Naruto didn't want to get his eyes off from Sasuke. In a second he stared Sakura in the eyes.

"She didn't see anything ,did she?" He hoped at least.

"Want to come with me for some ramen?"

Naruto sighed with relief. Sakura noticed Sasuke and winked to him. In return she got a gold stare. She looked away to Naruto who was hesitating.

"It's not like Naruto to think about ramen. What's going on?"

Naruto figured out what she was thinking and said:

"Yes! Ramen! Way to go ,Sakura! I'm hungry!"

She also sighed with relief. "Every thing's ok."

He followed her then quickly turned around to send Sasuke an air kiss. Smiling brightly, Sasuke caught it. Confused ,but nevertheless happy Naruto thought:

"What's going on?!?... Sasuke kissed me... and... I kissed back... does that mean I'm gay?"

His ramen got cold and he didn't eat it. Sakura was even more confused than him.

"His sudden personality change or whatever it is is really strange... What on earth has gotten into him?"

Surprisingly Sasuke wasn't confused. Not in the slightest. He was happy and for a little forgot about his goal. To kill his brother Itachi.

Orochimaru was confused though. Seing such happiness in his student was truly amazing. His natural curiosity made him ask:

"What's going on ,Sasuke? Why are you so happy?"

"Sensei? Whata re you talking about?"

His face expression changed from happy to indifferent. Just as it was before. A mask to fool his sensei. And he even thought he succeeded.

***

Out of breath and aroused they broke the kiss only to let some oxygen in their lungs. A surprised squeal was herd. Naruto and Sasuke were deep in the woods and didn't think that anyone could see them. Both surprised and intrigued they turned around and saw Hinata hyuga. Her eyes were wide open and she looked as if someone died.

"Hinata!... I can explain..." Naruto said. Sasuke was smiling widely.

"Hey ,Hinata! How are you?" He greeted.

Hinata ran away ,crying. For a second Sasuke thought that Naruto will follow her ,but he turned around ,laughing.

"I guess she was surprised..."

Well hidden Orochimaru was watching.

"Very interesting indeed. So that's what he's happy about."

***

"And they were kissing!" Hinata told Sakura who dropped her cup of tea on the floor.

"Kissing? You must have seen something else."

"No. I am possitive. When they heard me they turned around they were both surprised and out of breath."

"So that's why he was acting so strange..."

Sakura concluded while cleaning up the pieces of the cup from the floor.

***

"See you later..." He hesitated... calling him a name like 'sweety' would be strange so Naruto waved goodbye and went home. So did Sasuke.

Naruto found Hinata and Sakur at his place. They were both sitting on his bed.

"Hello... so what's up?"

"You are up! You kissing Sasuke!" They both angrily said.

"Ahh!" He shouted. "How do you know about that ,Sakura?"

"Who cares? The important thing is why the hell were you kissing Sasuke?"

Naruto felt the anger in his rise.

"Who are you to judge? Who are you to tell me what I can or can't do?" He shouted.

Surprised she started studdering:

"Well... we... ll it's just that..."

"What? What? You can't tell me what to do! It's my life!"

Orochimaru was wating for Sasuke to come home.

"Hello ,Sasuke."

"Hello ,sensei! What's up?"

"Oh ,nothing. Nothing as interesting as what you've been up to."

"Me? Sensei ,did you follow me?" There was fear in his voice.

"What would your big brother say?"

"Sensei ,I do not care what he would say I am disappointed. How could you follow me?"

"I thought you wanted to break your bond with Naruto. That didn't look like braking it."

"That is non of you buisness ,sensei."

"Oh ,isn't it? As my student and object of string desire I care for you."

"Desire? Bullshit! If I was an object of desire you would have done something about it."
long live yaoi! lol u made this fanfic? its pretty good:)
 

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long live yaoi! lol u made this fanfic? its pretty good:)
I so did!!! yeah thanks a bunch! chapter two for you!

Chapter Two

"A secret like this won't be a secret for long when those two know it." Naruto thought.

"I am really sorry, Naruto. I shouldn't have..."

He stayed silent. This breaking into his personal life truly made him unhappy.

"You can stay as long as you like." He said and slowly dragged himself to the door. After he went out Hinata quietly said:

"Maybe we did diserve this."

***

Sasuke stayed silent too. "Sensei is toying with me."

"Sasuke, don't be like that. it doesn't matter if you have a relationship with a boy or a girl. But don't forget that girls like you too. you attract them so much. Don't you remember when you were younger? They chased you like wolves." He smiled at the thought of it.

"You are right, sensei. I must go now."

"Where?"

"I will come back soon."

***

A kunoichi. She looked his age. Green eyes, black hair.

"Pretty." He just said.

She heard him tough. No matter how silent he was. Sasuke understood his presense was so he appeared in front of her.

"Sasuke Uchiha." She mumbled. She didn't look interested, but she truly was.

"I heard that you left the Hidden Leaf Village." She continued.

"I did." He cofirmed and continued looking at her. She intrugued. "She doesn't look interested."

"So why are you?" She shouted. "Stop toying with me. I know why you're here... I think... You want to see if girls still like you... living with Orochimaru-sama... he told you that..."

His eyes widened.

"How do you know that?"

"I am not a kunoichi. I am a jounin. My name is Rain."

"Rain..." He paused. "It seems like you know Orochimaru."

She giggled.

"Oh, yes. He was my sensei too. Orochimaru was quite disappointed that i turned out good."

"Are you by any chace related to Anko?"

"Well not blood makes us close. We are friends." She smiled.

"And before you ask I'm three years older than you. So that makes me.. 18."

"I am jounin level."

"Not an actual jounin tough. So what? Am I supposed to say I am interested. Alright I am. You are sexy, smart and skilled. What else do you want me to say? Go now. He is waiting."

Part satisfied part guilty he returned home.

"Well how did it go?"

"What to say?" He thought.

***

The steam from the ramen bowl was tickling his nostrils, but he wasn't hungry.

"What could Sasuke be doing?" He truly was curious. The sudden change in their relationship amazed him. "He doesn't look different. What if Orochimaru made him?... No! He wouldn't do anything like that."

The seed of suscpicion was planted.

***

Kakshi Hatake was reading "Make-Out-Tactics" when someone knocked on his door. While mumbling:

"Who could it be?... I haven't finished the book yet.."

He went to open. Sakura Haruno was leaning on the door frame, smiling.

"Kakashi-sensei! I know something interesting!"

"You do?" He asked while fully opening the door.

"Yes!" She said and went in.

"I'm all ears."

"Well I said that I won't tell, but it's too spicy to keep for ,yself."

Kakshi closed the book and put it on the coffe table.

"Go on."

"Hinata saw Sasuke and Naruto kissing in the woods!" She blurted out at last.

Kakshi was so amazed he removed a part of his mask so Sakura could see both his eyes wide opened.

She laughed.

"That's how I reacted too."

Kakashi wasn't going to tell anyone tough.

***

"Normal." He said indifferently. "I still have it. All the bitches like em. Even Rain."

"Rain?" Orochimaru shouted. "You met rain?"

"Oh, yes. She truly is advanced. Wish I could become that good."

"Oh, you are even better. More advanced. You can even become a Sannin like me."

Sasuke smiled. "More advanced." At the thought of Naruto, Sasuke felt butterflies in his smotach. "I have to go and see him."

***

"This is such a drag." Shikamaru moaned while sweeping the floor. "Why would Asuma make me do such a thing? It's not a ninja's job to do such things." He continued moaning.

"Shikamaru!" Temari called.

He threw the broom, looked at the mirror, made sure he looks ok and opened the door.

"Hello, Temari. What's up?"

"Oh, you know. The usual. Want to go for a walk?"

"Haven't sweeping the floor yet."

She laughed, went in and with her wind jutsu sweeped the floor.

"Oh! Thank you, Temari. You're great."

Her confidence made him smile.

"She is bossy sometimes, but what beautiful eyes she has..."

He thought and looked at the clouds.

"Oh, how I wish I was a cloud."

Temari giggled.

"A cloud, huh?"

"I said that, didn't I?" He laughed.

"Anyway were are we going?"

She rolled her eyes.

"Like I said we'll go for a walk and then we can grab a snack at my place."

"Sounds like a date."

Temari blushed heavily.
 

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Its good .....interesting something different from the usual arc........you have a good imagination

coomon guys its after all a fanfic....but he had done a great job ..didn't he?
 
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you know what? no fag shit. this is confusing!!! i thought it sed sakunaru!!! then i come here and read about these to fags. sasuke is a fag. hes got a bunch of chicks all over his dick and he blows them off to live with the snake ass pedophile (oro). naruto however is a perverted kid and everyone knows he likes sakura and hopefully hinata too cuz id be pissed if he didnt after all the crap she goes through for him
 
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