Sage Of The Six Pringles
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My first ever fanfiction story hope you enjoy it please comment good or bad any review are always welcome.
Chapter 1: The Will
She froze as the car raced out of control before her eyes "get out the way!!!" the man behind the wheel screamed. The crowd watched in fear they wanted to help, as the car flipped he closed his eyes and held tight. ' Why wouldn't she move ' he fought to himself has he watched from the rooftops " here goes nothing... you stay here and treat her wounds ".
He grabbed his black coat that had the blood of the dead all over the left arm and threw it in the air, placed his right hand on the floor and somersaulted backwards swiftly putting both his arms in his coat whilst twirling in the sky, as he landed softly with his left leg he dashes towards the edge of the rooftops " I hate when it rains " speaking to himself leaving a trail of footprints on top of the water.
Has he right foot reaches the edge of the rooftop he leaps face down towards the ground with his dark brown hair flowing against the rain, he kept his eyes close jetting in and out between the buildings like it was a repeat of the pass. Just before he hit the ground he barrel landed placing his right arm on the earth, looked up and open his never before seen illuminated greenish red eyes with a little scar underneath his bottom lip.
Before his coat can follow through he bolted as fast as he can like lightning shooting through the sky avoiding the humans in his path, as he passed the car revolving in the air to the girl that froze in time, he took hold of her and gazed into her eyes and at that moment he uttered softy " close your eyes ". As he turned his head to catch sight of the man in the car they vanished into thin air " did you see that...she just disappeared " yelled the young boy who seem frightened and bewildered to his mother.
The crowd kept their mouths together they weren't sure what to do or say. " Where's the car" the police officer said to his partner " Forget the car Rin where's the girl she was hot" replied the partner with an awkward face, " Ok people move along there's nothing to see....shows over " shouts Rin has she directs the crowd. " Look! Rin it's her " running towards the girl " Sora you fool wait!! " Rin shouts out as she tags along. "Are you ok... you can open your eyes now" Sora asked her trying to catch his breath. She could only give voice to " ….umm... where is.... he " slowly opening her eye filled with tears off joy to be alive.
" Where's who " Sora replied " S....o...ra... " out off air " Sora...you sure can run for...a guy for your size " Rin sarcastically mentioned " hahaaha " laughed Sora ' why!! Rin why!! in front of her dammit why does she always say that in front off a hot a babe ' Sora thought to himself. Now Sora was a bit over the normal human weight just a few hundreds of pounds. " Where's... the guy... with the eyes " the girl muttered under her breath. ' So thats who I am the guy ' he thought to himself running up the skyscraper he hurdled over to save her.
As he belts up the building he recognised coming fast towards his face, a red crystallised blade before he can reach behind with his left hand he lost sight of it. In a flash the kick to his chest sends him flying down the skyscraper hitting the ground as lightning would. " hmm that hurt " thinking out loud as he try to get a hold of himself, As he stands up and draws for his blade with his left hand, he swings it with great might as the moonlight runs down his blade " The Will " written in the purest white at the tip off his sword which was black in colour made with the finest crystals.
He looked towards the skies the blade, the red crystallised blade heading to him " Ahh!! " calls out the man with his blade rushing through the air with no intention to miss. Before the man can him he backflipped and lands on a lump post, he stared into the man dark red eyes " Brother " he said with a grin on his face " Joins us or depart form this world Hero ".
Thanks for reading please leave a review chapter 2 out on soon
Chapter 1: The Will
She froze as the car raced out of control before her eyes "get out the way!!!" the man behind the wheel screamed. The crowd watched in fear they wanted to help, as the car flipped he closed his eyes and held tight. ' Why wouldn't she move ' he fought to himself has he watched from the rooftops " here goes nothing... you stay here and treat her wounds ".
He grabbed his black coat that had the blood of the dead all over the left arm and threw it in the air, placed his right hand on the floor and somersaulted backwards swiftly putting both his arms in his coat whilst twirling in the sky, as he landed softly with his left leg he dashes towards the edge of the rooftops " I hate when it rains " speaking to himself leaving a trail of footprints on top of the water.
Has he right foot reaches the edge of the rooftop he leaps face down towards the ground with his dark brown hair flowing against the rain, he kept his eyes close jetting in and out between the buildings like it was a repeat of the pass. Just before he hit the ground he barrel landed placing his right arm on the earth, looked up and open his never before seen illuminated greenish red eyes with a little scar underneath his bottom lip.
Before his coat can follow through he bolted as fast as he can like lightning shooting through the sky avoiding the humans in his path, as he passed the car revolving in the air to the girl that froze in time, he took hold of her and gazed into her eyes and at that moment he uttered softy " close your eyes ". As he turned his head to catch sight of the man in the car they vanished into thin air " did you see that...she just disappeared " yelled the young boy who seem frightened and bewildered to his mother.
The crowd kept their mouths together they weren't sure what to do or say. " Where's the car" the police officer said to his partner " Forget the car Rin where's the girl she was hot" replied the partner with an awkward face, " Ok people move along there's nothing to see....shows over " shouts Rin has she directs the crowd. " Look! Rin it's her " running towards the girl " Sora you fool wait!! " Rin shouts out as she tags along. "Are you ok... you can open your eyes now" Sora asked her trying to catch his breath. She could only give voice to " ….umm... where is.... he " slowly opening her eye filled with tears off joy to be alive.
" Where's who " Sora replied " S....o...ra... " out off air " Sora...you sure can run for...a guy for your size " Rin sarcastically mentioned " hahaaha " laughed Sora ' why!! Rin why!! in front of her dammit why does she always say that in front off a hot a babe ' Sora thought to himself. Now Sora was a bit over the normal human weight just a few hundreds of pounds. " Where's... the guy... with the eyes " the girl muttered under her breath. ' So thats who I am the guy ' he thought to himself running up the skyscraper he hurdled over to save her.
As he belts up the building he recognised coming fast towards his face, a red crystallised blade before he can reach behind with his left hand he lost sight of it. In a flash the kick to his chest sends him flying down the skyscraper hitting the ground as lightning would. " hmm that hurt " thinking out loud as he try to get a hold of himself, As he stands up and draws for his blade with his left hand, he swings it with great might as the moonlight runs down his blade " The Will " written in the purest white at the tip off his sword which was black in colour made with the finest crystals.
He looked towards the skies the blade, the red crystallised blade heading to him " Ahh!! " calls out the man with his blade rushing through the air with no intention to miss. Before the man can him he backflipped and lands on a lump post, he stared into the man dark red eyes " Brother " he said with a grin on his face " Joins us or depart form this world Hero ".
Thanks for reading please leave a review chapter 2 out on soon
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