Hermione Granger (2nd attempt)

[Snape Uchiha]

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[straightup]

you are very good at shading but i feel like her chin seems a little off. doesnt seem natural. same with the cheek bones. maybe thin it out a little and add some kind of definition to the cheek bones and youll have a regular work of art there

 

[Arian]

ok ill be honest with you.......dude this is HORRIBLE!!!! unless it was your aim to draw something picasso like and abstract....but dude...i mean like really! its nowhere near realistic looking(which was obviously your aim...) u need peactice and i dont say that to be mean...so before u post your 3rd attempt(dont even wanna see the 1st one ) you better practice some bit. ..

 

[-Best-]

I see your passion towards art! but you need a lot of improvements. if you want to improve jus PM me and I ll link you tutorials

 

[Lan Fan]

Keep it up. You should be more confident with the pen - just allow yourself freedom when you make the lines, especially the hair. It is actually entretaining.

 

[Jazzy Stardust]

Just work on shading and proportions and you should be good. Drawing portraits is mostly just shading and drawing what you see. Don't think about what you're drawing just do it and you you'll get better and better.

I should probably start drawing again..