Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XIII: Deviate

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act XIII

Deviate

Narrator: Numerous spiked shape mineral hardened sand abruptly form in mid air striking the dragons’ head. It does not pierce but rather meant to deflect causing them to lose focus.

Rahmah: (In thought) Now!

Narrator: This enables the Ghoul to then split their conjoined attacks and aim them towards both Dragons’ jaw where she attempted an injection.

Lindworm: (In thought) THAT CLEVER WRETCH!

Lindworm: (Telepathy) CLOSE YOUR MOUTH!!!

Rahmah: (In thought) Yes!

Venera: (In thought) I understand..this may require as much power as I can contribute..

Quivre: (Telepathy) I’m trying to but my insides are boiling!

Lindworm: (Telepathy) Her theory is in effect..DAMN IT!

Narrator: Every second that passed presented more and more of the aura infused sand beams into their bodies systems. Each dragon’s eyes began to drupe as drew weaker.

Lindworm: (Telepathy) III....II..caaannot....ccloooseee...myyy..

Narrator: A bright blood orange color commenced to shine through the heated up dragons’ bellies until they gave out and exploded.

Venera: What!...she protected me again..

Rahmah: Well we are part of a team aren’t we?

Venera: Hmm!

[Setting Change: Lulian’s Lair]

Bokor: Master shall I?

Lulian: The time has finally reared its ugly head..

Bokor: Understood..

Lulian: (In thought) Let us just see how much more your champions can endure..*snicker*

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Narrator: A black colored ripple formed in the stomach area of Tiberiu’s group members.

Attila: What is this?

Attila: My body is beginning to fade..

Attila: (Screams) OCTAVIAN!!! NECULAI!!!

Narrator: Cries went unheard as the others still lied unconscious and began fading as well.

Attila: (Shout) SHIT!!!

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Venera: (In thought) This seems like some kind of magic..

Rahmah: (Screams) NO!!!

Venera: You know what this means?!

Rahmah: (Raised tone) Yes and there is nothing we can do!..

Rahmah: (In thought) His Sorcerer...

Venera: I don’t believe you!

Narrator: Frustration lead the hybrid Dhampiresa to jab her hands into her abdominal area and instill her own aura.

Rahmah: (Raised tone) Are you crazy!

Venera: I’m only pouring in my aura a little at a-

Rahmah: You do not know what you are doing-

Rahmah: And you may kill yourself..

Narrator: She then abruptly ceases.

Venera: (In thought) She may be a little more informed..

Rahmah: Our leader’s main target has recruited a Bokor and I believe is the one responsible..

Venera: (Shout) Why did you not tell the leader earlier?!

Rahmah: I still was not too trusting..

Venera: Damn!..that minor issue may have lead us to our deaths..

Tiberiu: (Shout) I cannot let it end this way!

Narrator: Aura began to burst from out his body in an attempt to elude the mysterious occurrence.

[Setting Change: Lulian’s Lair]

Bokor: I see your target struggling the most..

Lulian: Oh...such a strong will..this one

Lulian: Amplify your power..

Bokor: Understood

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - Center Area]

Tiberiu: (Screams) AHHHHH!!!

Narrator: He roared as his aura began to weaken due to the depleted usage.

Tiberiu: I have exhausted my own power! *pant*

Tiberiu: (Frantic Tone) THIS CANNOT BE HOW IT ALL ENDS!

Narrator: Most of his body had disappeared as the ripples started to dissolve his face.

[Setting Change: Room]

Attila: Huh-

Attila: Where the hell am I?

Narrator: The elder vampire was one of the first to appear in the unknown structure.

Attila: (In thought) The inside looks like-

Figure I: Why hello...pleased to make your acquaintance...

[Setting Change: Room]

Figure II: Finally..you’ve come to..*blush*

Neculai: Uhhh..

Neculai: (Shouts) What!

Narrator: A cloaked being stands before the shameless vampire.

[Setting Change: Room]

Figure III: This one took quite the beating..*giggle*

Narrator: Was said as the covered individual hovered over the still unconscious bestial hybrid.

Figure III: Please hurry and wake up so we can play..hehehe

[Setting Change: Room]

Venera: What the-

Figure IV: Such a fierce creature has appeared for me..

Venera: (In thought) I’ve been stripped of all my weaponry-

Venera: Who are you and what is this about?

Figure IV: All in do time my dear..why don’t I get to know about you first? *snicker*

[Setting Change: Room]

Figure VI: (Shout) You betraying rogue!

Narrator: His voice roared with anger at the Ghoul.

Figure VI: (Shout) You’ve dared to defy our master and for that I will punish you!

Rahmah: (In thought) Why must my fate end in agony?

[Setting Change: Room]

Tiberiu: Impossib-

Lulian: What is there left to say?

Tiberiu: (Screams) YOU!!!!!

Lulian: Calm down..will you?

Lulian: Why not savor this moment as you have desired to see me so? *snicker*

Narrator: What is left of his aura surges throughout his body and rapidly surrounds the mutated vampire as he full throttled forward for an assail.

Lulian: Hahaha...I thought from all the time I gifted you-

Lulian: You would have at least known better than to come at me recklessly..

Narrator: Due to his intensive impulses, the mutated vampire was easily avoided by the pure blood.

Lulian: (Raised tone) YOU ARE PATHETIC!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA

Lulian: Why not rest yourself awhile that way we can have a significant battle?

Tiberiu: (Frantic tone) YOUR DEAD!!!!!

Lulian: *Snicker*

[Setting Change: Room]

Attila: ...A castle?

Act XIII End

Has the mutated vampire lost his virtue at the sight of his mortal enemy?

[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

In Attila/Neculai’s case, after having their leader’s aura infused into themselves later on in an emotional state invokes them to awaken heightened abilities as a result to the absorbed aura surpassing a turned vampire thus making them unique. They both in the beginning lose control as the power-up overwhelms their willpower. However, once the initial awakening stage has occurred and passed will they be able to begin controlling their new powers.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. Tiberiu’s fourth invoke for more power enforces his three appendages to extend; the initial limb black, the second blood red and the final limb which changed into a white color. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color. Her hybrid form completes as her hair grows out past her thighs, hands and fingers stretch five inches as her finger nails grow over three inches becoming claw-like, ankles elongate as her feet stretch out and toenails grow over five inches appearing claw-like as well, two slits join the single irises creating a reversed T glowing orchid in color. Strength and stamina are heightened.

[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight: Bokor]

Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

Appearance: Golden colored mist appearing in the form of a footless demon. Every Ghoul’s true form varies.

[Insight: Wyvern]

Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, single tailed creature. It’s origin is Great Britain.

Appearance: It’s body is ruby red in color, completely covered in spikes, having no arms and a barbed tail.

[Insight: Lindworm]

† Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal and single tail with a venomous bite. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: It’s body has a emerald green color, lengthy serpentine body and has parts of its body intertwined.

[Insight: Guivre]

† Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath. It’s origin is France.

† Appearance: It’s body has a sapphire blue color, long serpentine body, the single tail splits in two at the end and has five horns on the head; it’s forehead containing largest two.

[Insight: Golem]

Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak. It’s origin is Jewish.

Appearance: It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud thus the body will have a brownish color of sorts; resembling a humanoid. It has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

[Insight: Căpcăun]

Description: This is a type of ogre having the head of a dog and body of a man. It is muscular and usually carries a club of sorts. Although, sometimes it can have two heads.

Appearance: A cruel and bloodthirsty creature this is. They can range from giant to dwarf size and are strong. Their bodies’ colors vary but are usually in the brownish area. The head resembles that of a dog and the body are humanoid appearing like a muscular man.

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XIII: Deviate

One of the best you've written - an instant classic for me.
After the cool "ending" of the dragon battle, I've got intrigued by this -

Lulian: (In thought) Let us just see how much more your champions can endure..*snicker*

I thought, wait a sec, this mean that this Bokor is more than a pawn of Lulian. While I was waiting to see how my hypothesis will play out during the chapter, you surprised me instantly with the nod of approval. That was brilliant stuff. The sudden turn-over of things with Lulian's playing all this time in the shadows paid off instantaneously with brio. Hats-off to reach there so smoothly with all those chapters.
Lulian's got the best lines again in this chapter and his showoff against Tiberiu is gonna be epic, I'm sure.
I don't know if it was meant to be like that but Venera seemed to be less affected unlike the others when the spell occurred.
Also, I'd like to know the obvious - that Bokor...

† Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

...His power is supposedly to create creatures. Now, he completely manipulated/controlled Tiberiu's gang. So does that mean that he created all of them. Is he sometime of mastermind in the darkness, some really exceptional Bokor or something else? Whatsoever, this is among the best twists in your story.
I'm sure I miss quite some things in my review and my review is a bit of a mess this time. Anyways, fantastically stupendous chapter. 5/5 + Rep :)
 

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Ah, I dare say this is one of your best chapters :) And we have yet to see who those mysterious figures are and what Tiberiu and Lulian are going to do now that they are finally face to face again. Thah Bokor seems quite powerful, doesn't he? I wonder where all that power comes from, especially as Lulian told him to amplify it... Great job with the chapter, my friend :p
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act XIII: Deviate

One of the best you've written - an instant classic for me.
After the cool "ending" of the dragon battle, I've got intrigued by this -

Lulian: (In thought) Let us just see how much more your champions can endure..*snicker*

I thought, wait a sec, this mean that this Bokor is more than a pawn of Lulian. While I was waiting to see how my hypothesis will play out during the chapter, you surprised me instantly with the nod of approval. That was brilliant stuff. The sudden turn-over of things with Lulian's playing all this time in the shadows paid off instantaneously with brio. Hats-off to reach there so smoothly with all those chapters.
Lulian's got the best lines again in this chapter and his showoff against Tiberiu is gonna be epic, I'm sure.
I don't know if it was meant to be like that but Venera seemed to be less affected unlike the others when the spell occurred.
Also, I'd like to know the obvious - that Bokor...

† Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

...His power is supposedly to create creatures. Now, he completely manipulated/controlled Tiberiu's gang. So does that mean that he created all of them. Is he sometime of mastermind in the darkness, some really exceptional Bokor or something else? Whatsoever, this is among the best twists in your story.
I'm sure I miss quite some things in my review and my review is a bit of a mess this time. Anyways, fantastically stupendous chapter. 5/5 + Rep :)
I always enjoy/get excited when you give me your opinion overall about my fanfiction-seriously ;) It’s usually huge which I love and it is very insightful ^.^ Thank you, I’m pleased to see that the ending to the mini Dragon arc was a success :) I like how you actually like the dialogue of the antagonist ^.^ Again your have wicked predictions/theories (EPIC!) lol I suppose I once thought the writer is the one who decides everything. However, that is incorrect as the readers are really the ones with the control. To keep them interested and surprised one must listen to their opinions and have that play into their ideas for the following pieces of work-which has been happening to me. The reader’s opinions I think play a profound role in my writing and I really appreciate it. Regarding the Bokor; I wish I could inform you of what he is all about but I am not one for spoilers so...XD Your review was phenomenal and thanks again for it! ;)

Ah, I dare say this is one of your best chapters :) And we have yet to see who those mysterious figures are and what Tiberiu and Lulian are going to do now that they are finally face to face again. Thah Bokor seems quite powerful, doesn't he? I wonder where all that power comes from, especially as Lulian told him to amplify it... Great job with the chapter, my friend :p
Thanks! I myself thought the twist with Tiberiu and co.’s warping away was awesome (I enjoyed adding that aspect) XD I like how the Bokor is on everyone’s mind lol Next act should begin to answer some things for sure ^.^
 
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I always enjoy/get excited when you give me your opinion overall about my fanfiction-seriously ;) It’s usually huge which I love and it is very insightful ^.^ Thank you, I’m pleased to see that the ending to the mini Dragon arc was a success :) I like how you actually like the dialogue of the antagonist ^.^ Again your have wicked predictions/theories (EPIC!) lol I suppose I once thought the writer is the one who decides everything. However, that is incorrect as the readers are really the ones with the control. To keep them interested and surprised one must listen to their opinions and have that play into their ideas for the following pieces of work-which has been happening to me. The reader’s opinions I think play a profound role in my writing and I really appreciate it. Regarding the Bokor; I wish I could inform you of what he is all about but I am not one for spoilers so...XD Your review was phenomenal and thanks again for it! ;)
Thanks! I myself thought the twist with Tiberiu and co.’s warping away was awesome (I enjoyed adding that aspect) XD I like how the Bokor in on everyone’s mind lol Next act should begin to answer some things for sure ^.^
Well, it's reciprocal. I love your reviews also for my chapters. The hugeness is not deliberate though but usually tends to. Well, Lulian's dialogues are so quirky and restrained yet so astounding that it's hard not to love them. Well, without saying, it's the writer who decides everything - everything except the success. The writer's job is to strive to give good material to his readers and I have to admit that it's easier when you know what will click and what not :p But like surprises as for me and I also love twisting things up - going by the simplistic road is not my style. So yeah, don't give spoilers xD Let that Bokor indeed surprise us.
 

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Well, it's reciprocal. I love your reviews also for my chapters. The hugeness is not deliberate though but usually tends to. Well, Lulian's dialogues are so quirky and restrained yet so astounding that it's hard not to love them. Well, without saying, it's the writer who decides everything - everything except the success. The writer's job is to strive to give good material to his readers and I have to admit that it's easier when you know what will click and what not :p But like surprises as for me and I also love twisting things up - going by the simplistic road is not my style. So yeah, don't give spoilers xD Let that Bokor indeed surprise us.
Again, I love your way with words. The wording is so professional-what I strive for. I couldn’t have said it any better myself. Well, Mikey might cringe when I state this but all is good as I hate spoilers/previews and he loves them lol So no worries-questions will only be answered with the following fanfic releases XD
 

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Again, I love your way with words. The wording is so professional-what I strive for. I couldn’t have said it any better myself. Well, Mikey might cringe when I state this but all is good as I hate spoilers/previews and he loves them lol So no worries-questions will only be answered with the following fanfic releases XD
Well, Mikey is a different case.
I'll gladly take spoilers from him. Reasons are that I love his FF as he's the one who's inspired me and made me understand the Fanfics and aslo I tend to say a lot of things on his chapters. If you see my review on his chapter 15, you'll see it's pretty long but that review consist of only 25% of his chapter. He already gave me most parts to read first on MSN. Imagine the length of my review if I had to comment on everything. :p So yeah, Mikey is a different case.
 

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Well, Mikey is a different case.
I'll gladly take spoilers from him. Reasons are that I love his FF as he's the one who's inspired me and made me understand the Fanfics and aslo I tend to say a lot of things on his chapters. If you see my review on his chapter 15, you'll see it's pretty long but that review consist of only 25% of his chapter. He already gave me most parts to read first on MSN. Imagine the length of my review if I had to comment on everything. :p So yeah, Mikey is a different case.
Maybe I worded myself incorrectly, etc. I was only being sarcastic with the "Mikey cringing" thing as he loves to release spoilers/previews and I dislike them. He always tries to get me to view them aside how I feel and I eventually give in to him lol I hope you understood what I was meaning and not that it was taken misconstrued as it was never my intention and I just wanted to clear that up in case.
 

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Maybe I worded myself incorrectly, etc. I was only being sarcastic with the "Mikey cringing" thing as he loves to release spoilers/previews and I dislike them. He always tries to get me to view them aside how I feel and I eventually give in to him lol I hope you understood what I was meaning and not that it was taken misconstrued as it was never my intention and I just wanted to clear that up in case.
Nah, I didn't misunderstood you. It's just that I wanted to precise the fact that Mikey is perhaps the only guy from whom I'll take spoilers from. Except if someone needs my help.
 

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Nah, I didn't misunderstood you. It's just that I wanted to precise the fact that Mikey is perhaps the only guy from whom I'll take spoilers from. Except if someone needs my help.
Thank God!!! I was like "Oh no does he hate me now?" T_T XD
 

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I'd have to say this is one of my favorite chapters - the conclusion of the battle with the other two dragons sealed off the deal for me; the way Rahmah came through for Venera was amazing, though Venera wasn't as impressed (I quite enjoy her Tsudere personality). And finally, Tiberiu & Lulian are face to face. Tiberiu's gotta shapen up though, which sucks, since he's already exhausted; meanwhile Lulian's at full strength. (N)
 

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I'd have to say this is one of my favorite chapters - the conclusion of the battle with the other two dragons sealed off the deal for me; the way Rahmah came through for Venera was amazing, though Venera wasn't as impressed (I quite enjoy her Tsudere personality). And finally, Tiberiu & Lulian are face to face. Tiberiu's gotta shapen up though, which sucks, since he's already exhausted; meanwhile Lulian's at full strength. (N)
This was not my favorite but I really did like this one as well due to how the concluded battle transpired between both of Tiberiu's female members ^.^ Yes, Venera can be quite the female dog if you not what I mean xd You could get the feeling of a power-up coming along sooner than later but I attempt to stray from the clichéd routes as much as possible ^.^
 
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