Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VII: Pressure

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act VII

Pressure

Hooded Figure: (In thought) I must be mindful with this one..

Narrator: Tiberiu swiftly appears before the veiled enemy with a spherical aura in hand as he swung it at the enemy’s head. Though the figure ducks and backs away as it takes cover through the many silhouettes.

Dhampiresa: These are zombies!

[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell.

Origin: Haiti.

Octavian: (In thought) Zombies...

Attila: (In thought) For my young master to attack without any given orders must mean he is out of control..again...

Narrator: A small portion at the top part of the hood is dissolved as the enemy crouches avoiding the attack.

Hooded Figure (In thought) Fast..

Narrator: Zombies begin to flood the group as the hooded enemy backs away uphill.

Octavian: (Shouts) Woman! Do you know a way to defeat them?!

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) I’ve heard of these dreaded creatures though not enough to know their weakness!

Narrator: Whilst the group engage in battle, Tiberiu makes his way towards the leader.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) What they lack in speed they make up in their virus..

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) Do not get bitten by them for their saliva can turn you into one!

Narrator: Both vampires released their weapons through their blood. The female hybrid takes hold of her crossbow-like weapon and Octavian becomes airborne.

Neculai: (In thought) Octavian you lucky winged bastard...I was turned into a monster and now I may turn into a mindless monster..

Neculai: (Shouts) Take that!

Narrator: As he pulled back his bloodied paired staff-like weapons covered in thorns leaving three zombies torn in half at the torso.

Neculai: (In thought) Their bodies reform...

Attila: (In thought) Is there no end?

Narrator: He thought to himself as he resumed to attack with his whip-like bloodied weapon attached to a spinning chakram at the end of it. Swinging her forged crucifix long pointed end sword made of silver at a retaliating zombie; it is quickly beheaded by the Dhampiresa and its body then collapses becoming mere bones.

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) I’ve figured it out!

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) Decapitate them!

Octavian: (In thought) Perfect..

Narrator: Having the most complex question answered they began to counter attack. The bestial began hacking at the zombies necks with his wrist wing as he kept uplifted.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) We have defeated so many already and yet they continue to come..what is-

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) There’s the source!

[Setting Change: Uphill]

Narrator: The two clashed repeatedly with such speeds that their movements could barley be seen by the naked eye.

Hooded Figure: (In thought) His speed has taken a deep increase..I may not be able to keep up for much longer..

Hooded Figure: (In thought) I must end this now while I still have the chance!

Narrator: Tiberiu aims for the head however, the figure quickly avoids as it changes forms into something on all four legs. It then pounces onto the driven vampire biting his neck.

*Blood is spilled*

[Setting Change: Mid Hill]

Narrator: Everyone continues to partake in what appears to be an endless battle as the woman’s body begins to shine a purplish color.

Neculai: (In thought) What is going on with her?

Attila: (Shouts) Neculai stay alert!

Attila: ...

Neculai: Yeah yeah!

Narrator: Due to alerting his comrade a zombie ambushes him as he is then bitten on the upper left arm as the zombie army gained up on him. He then swings his weapon beheading the one who bit him.

Attila: *Panting* Shit!

Narrator: Injured and losing his senses, Attila backs away holding his bleeding arm.

Neculai: Attila you saw that one’s head fly..haha..ha..huh...

Neculai: (Screams) Attila!

Narrator: Catching sight of his wounded comrade, Neculai raced to his side. The woman sheaths the great sword behind her back and began to resonate her aura with a tear in the sky which had been continuously releasing the zombies.

Dhampiresa: *Pant* (In thought) I am not sure if this will make a difference but I have not a choice..

Dhampiresa: (Shouts) Octavian cover me! *pant*

Narrator: Her words were unfortunately not heard by the hybrid as he was in a trance of sorts with the desire to kill being his new form’s nature.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) Shit..I’m vulnerable right now..

Dhampiresa: (In thought) I can sense them coming closer...

Zombies: Ahhhhuuurrhgg...

Attila: *Panting* Our recovering abilities *pant* are not working...get..*pant*..away from me...*pant*

Neculai: (In thought) Master may be able to help but isn’t there enough time?

Narrator: Placing him onto the ground, Neculai prepares to fend off the approaching zombies.

Octavian: (Inner self voice) Get ahold of yourself!

Octavian: (Inner/outer self conversation) So you say..

Dhampiresa: It seems to be having an effect *pant*

Narrator: She continues to fire her weapon towards the oncoming enemies though ammo soon runs out. Her arm then collapses as her drained body starts to shut down.

Dhampiresa: *Panting* I don’t even....*pant* have theee..strengtthhh to replenish..*pant*

Narrator: Just as her body is about to give out she is caught by Octavian who was able to regain his composure and was warned about her current status by his inner self.

Octavian: (In thought) This is how I was..

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Drink my blood..there is no time!

Narrator: He lowered his neck to her level and she bite him gradually sucking his blood. The more she sucked the greater her aura shined although she could not control her hunger.

Octavian: *Pant* (In thought) It seems she..*pant*...cannot control herself..

Narrator: He then started to physically remove her from his neck.

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Wom..aan...I..*pant*

Narrator: Practically drained to death the woman suddenly ceases to feed and her eyes shoot open revealing the irises to have gained two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T and glowed of an orchid color.

Octavian: .....uhah...uhha..

Narrator: The hybrid Dhampiresa rises from the ground onto her feet in a rapid state in a trance as her aura is released in a wave that passed through the animated corpses in which turned them into ash and it was enough to nullify the teared sky spell. She then falls to the ground having regained her consciousness.

Dhampiresa: (In thought) I should transform back and not waste any more power..

Narrator: Having thought every ounce of power was precious to her she then reverts back.

[Setting Change: Uphill]

Hooded Figure: (In thought) Damn it! He seems unscathed..

Narrator: As Tiberiu is about to grasp his enemy by the neck, it undergoes another alteration.

Tiberiu: (Stutter) Lu..lulu...ian..

Narrator: This occurrence shocks the mutated vampire as he stares into the image he had so long craved to annihilate.

*Blood sheds*

Narrator: Upon taking the opportunity, the enemy pierces through the vampire’s neck with its bare hand which had turned into hardened sand.

Act VII End

Emotional trauma has weakened the determined mutated vampire to the point of death?


[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

† Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

† Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color.

[Insight: Zombie]

† Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

† Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act VII: Pressure

Wow, great battle! I never would have imagined we'd see zombies, too :p What a surprise it was in this chapter. Keep up the great fanfiction, Kuroi :)
 

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act VII: Pressure

HELVETES GJENFøDELS
[Infernal Rebirth]
Narrator: Tiberiu swiftly appears before the veiled enemy with a spherical aura in hand as he swung it at the enemy’s head. Though the figure ducks and backs away as it takes cover through the many silhouettes.
I'm confused about the read part, how can you have an aura in your hand? Don't you mean a spherical object?

Other than that, great story. The end is just shocking...
 

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act VII: Pressure

AHHHHH!!!! ZOMBIES!!!!!! xD Love the story! Great action going on! Keep it goin!
 

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act VII: Pressure

Wow, great battle! I never would have imagined we'd see zombies, too :p What a surprise it was in this chapter. Keep up the great fanfiction, Kuroi :)
Thanks and yes there are zombies lol I’m pleased to see that my story can still bring out amazement and I will continue ^.^

I'm confused about the read part, how can you have an aura in your hand? Don't you mean a spherical object?

Other than that, great story. The end is just shocking...
Okay, let us see if I can clear up your confusion-Tiberiu released his aura as it focused on the palm of his hand and formed into a spherical-like shape. Hope that clarifies it ;)

AHHHHH!!!! ZOMBIES!!!!!! xD Love the story! Great action going on! Keep it goin!
Thanks and it is nice to hear that the action I’ve created is satisfiable ^.^
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VII: Pressure

I was a little lost with the woman's eyes:eek: Parallel is like these two lines = right. a T forms perpendicular lines or, am I just not figuring out this part?xd And the "bear hand", too. Bear hand as in like a bear's hand with claws? Or is it supposed to bare. Like, his hand, without any weapon, clawes or anything just slit through the victim's throat?O.O I've seen scenarios like that, though (movies of course!:D)
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act VII: Pressure

this one was the best so far xd
Well I only think it will get better as they continue to release (hoping my readers will think so anyhow) lol

I was a little lost with the woman's eyes:eek: Parallel is like these two lines = right. a T forms perpendicular lines or, am I just not figuring out this part?xd And the "bear hand", too. Bear hand as in like a bear's hand with claws? Or is it supposed to bare. Like, his hand, without any weapon, clawes or anything just slit through the victim's throat?O.O I've seen scenarios like that, though (movies of course!:D)
You are completely correct and I was in the wrong. You truly are phenomenal and you saved my a** I made sure to edit that as well as the bear to bare-it was another misspelling lol I also edited the Zombies' origin ^.^ Thank you again for your extremely helpful correcting feedback! ;)
 

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Zombies. Freaking Zombies. I've always hated them, although I assumed at some point you'd include them in this. They're just as detestable as they are in every movie/cartoon I've seen - mindlessly attacking in hoards, wanting nothing more but the flesh of others to turn into their kind, ugh. Although I can't stand them, their addition was a great one for the plot - it sucks that Attila was caught off guard by them though. (N) On the other hand, their female ally sure came in handy with her 'Nuke' ability, lol. And dang, what's happening with Tiberiu; he was fighting Lulian this whole time?!
 

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Zombies. Freaking Zombies. I've always hated them, although I assumed at some point you'd include them in this. They're just as detestable as they are in every movie/cartoon I've seen - mindlessly attacking in hoards, wanting nothing more but the flesh of others to turn into their kind, ugh. Although I can't stand them, their addition was a great one for the plot - it sucks that Attila was caught off guard by them though. (N) On the other hand, their female ally sure came in handy with her 'Nuke' ability, lol. And dang, what's happening with Tiberiu; he was fighting Lulian this whole time?!
Well, I can see that you're not such a fan of monsters lol I know that zombies is one of the most recognized monsters but I just had to add them in xd Although, I'm glad at least it didn't bother you in this chapter ^.^ Yes, Attila was a victim and the woman can definitely assist with her abilities :D Next chapter should clear up some things ;)
 

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Lol. Vampires, Werewolves, & Ghouls Are Just Fine With Me - But Zombies ... Unless I'm Playing With Them In My Deck, I Want Nothing To Do With Them. This Chapter Is An Exception Though, Since They Fueled The Storyline Extremely Well. (Y)
 
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