Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act IV: Crisis

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act IV

Crisis

Narrator: The bestial hybrid in a matter of seconds managed to pass by the two vampires inflicting a barrage of slashes onto them.

*Octavian eerily shrieks*

Octavian: (Inner voice) Stop!

Narrator: His inner self finally began to take over, forcing the rampaging form to get distance from the others. Feeling assured he was separated enough, he then struggles within himself to transform back.

Octavian: Uh..uhuh...*gasp*...I am responsible.....

Octavian: (In thought) Damn that werewolf who bit and turned me into this monster!

Octavian: (In thought) After the first full moon passed..I was able to transform freely and in control but this new form seems untameable...

Narrator: A giant orb of light appears before the fallen vampires and two spheres of its own light is released onto each body respectively which is then absorbed.

Octavian: I need to make this right!

Narrator: Nearing the area where he lost control, Neculai and Attila’s bodies are seen shinning and lying in a pool of blood with what seemed to be someone submerged in an orb of light that levitated in between the two.

Octavian: ...Tiberiu..is tha-

Narrator: A long limb-like appendage; blood red in color begins to protrude upwards from behind the orb as the light began to retract. Gradually, Tiberiu was revealed to be the one in the orb as his aura drew back within his body.

Octavian: I knew it...

Narrator: His body then lowered onto the ground as the bestial hybrid made his way towards the three.

Octavian: (In thought) ...I was out of control and the one who harmed them though they are recovering at a fast rate..was this due to Tiberi-

Octavian: Is this a transformation he undergoes to power up or is it done without his consent...is he out of control like me..

*Tiberiu panting*

Tiberiu: uhhhhahhhah....

Octavian: You all need to take it easy.....it was my fault after all..

Tiberiu: I’m...okay..just tired....I thought something like this might happen only it was worse but somehow I was able to stop their bleeding?

Octavian: Yes...they are resting..

Narrator: Suddenly the limb-like appendage began to retract into his upper back.

Octavian: (In thought) Is he informed of that thing that is withdrawing?

Tiberiu: I cannot afford to lose anyone.....my purpose must be fulfilled at any cost..

Octavian: ...

Tiberiu: Help me place them into their coffins

Octavian: As you wish

[Setting Change: Brasov City, Mountain Side]

Narrator: An ordered Octavian helps his new leader with his comrades. They then rest their backs behind the lying coffins in a mountainous area nearby the burnt village.

Tiberiu: We will camp out here for tonight..

Octavian: Remember you wanted me to tell you what happened in my village?

Tiberiu: Yes I did..

Octavian: Well I desire to avenge my family and the rest of the victims from my village..

Octavian: He and his group appeared and began to feast on anyone they could sink their filthy fangs into and the rest were most likely murdered if not sucked to death..

Octavian: I was not there at that time but when I returned I heard screaming and saw them biting or murdering the remainders of the villagers...

Octavian: So I transformed and attempted to stop them but..they tortured me for a long time after I had weakened from battling them..

Octavian: Their leader...called them off and stated that I wasn’t good enough for them to feast over then I had to helplessly witness them set my village on fire and left me to die..

Tiberiu: And you would have from those wounds...but your hate enabled you to continue to survive I would know because it is what compels me...

Octavian: I blacked out and when I awoke..I desperately searched for water with the last of my strength but I was so weak and it wasn’t enough to quell the spreading flames

Tiberiu: Do you remember how many?

Octavian: It all happened so fast..maybe six or seven...aside their leader

Tiberiu: ...

Octavian: I need to train this new form so that I can extract vengeance!

Tiberiu: You are already half way as I can see that you are adept to training your body..

Octavian: Why do you say?

Tiberiu: For if you truly lost control of your body completely...

Tiberiu: There would have been nothing left of your new comrades after that attack as they are only merely turned vampires..

Octavian: And you?

Tiberiu: .....I..am one...as well..

Octavian: Can you not tell that you differ from turned vampires?

Tiberiu: (Raised voice) I will hear no more of this!

Octavian: What about that body part growing from your bac-

Tiberiu: (Screams) NO!!!

Narrator: Sweat drops began to slide down the mutated vampire’s forehead and he trembled as flashes from the past quickly flooded his mind.

Tiberiu: ..I must survive.....until I finish it..

Octavian: Calm do-

Tiberiu: (Shout) GO!

Tiberiu: Go train yourself to control the new species you’ve become..

Octavian: ...As you wish

Narrator: Realizing that his leader desperately needed to be alone, he distanced himself into a remote part of the mountain and began training to master the dangerous form for the deration of the night and throughout the next day.

Neculai: *Yawning* Now that was a good sleep

Attila: You idiot..do you not remember?

Neculai: Um...

Attila: We were a-

Tiberiu: Attacked by Octavian

Attila: Young master

Tiberiu: It was as I had anticipated...your comrade cannot fully control that form however he is off somewhere attempting to harness it

Neculai: Why don't you get rid o-

Attila: I’m sorry young master

Tiberiu: It is fine...if you do not like the way I lead then by all means you do not have to follow however...

Tiberiu: I cannot let you free as my enemy will use the opportun-

Neculai: (Shout) Have it your way! I just thought having him around would hurt us later on..

Tiberiu: That is for me to decide..

Neculai: Whatever..if that is how you want it..

Narrator: A few moments later Octavian can be seen coming out from a high mountain trial.

Tiberiu: Octavian..do you need more time?

Octavian: I have dominance more or less over this form and I’ve even named it..

Tiberiu: Have you...

Octavian: Lythimpir

Tiberiu: That is an interesting name and it will be remembered by many in due time-

Tiberiu: Let us gather everyone and head out as his stench lurks still far beyond this village!

Octavian: As you wish

[Setting Change: Abrud Town outskirts, Alba County]

Narrator: The group of four end up in a mountainous town.

Tiberiu: He is close...

Tiberiu: There!

Attila: Which one young master?

Tiberiu: The hooded one just ahead!

Tiberiu: (In thought) That is the same dark-red hooded coat from that time...

Tiberiu: (In thought) You will not escape once again!

Narrator: Tiberiu began to tear the streets in pursuit of the figure he believed to be his target.

Act IV End

Can it be the one who stole everything from him?


[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.[/B]

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act IV: Crisis

Nice, so Octavian is a Lythimpir :) You still have some things to reveal though, like what Tiberiu can do because he is unusual, too. Looking forward to your next chapter, as always :p
 

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act IV: Crisis

Nice, so Octavian is a Lythimpir :) You still have some things to reveal though, like what Tiberiu can do because he is unusual, too. Looking forward to your next chapter, as always :p
Yes, I’m glad that someone isn’t taken back with this made up hybrid name XD Correct, there are many things still unanswered and discovered as well. Thanks for the support ;)
 

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<div class="bbWrapper"><b>Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act IV: Crisis</b><br /> <br /> Hey, I liked it.</div>
 

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<div class="bbWrapper"><b>Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act IV: Crisis</b><br /> <br /> Who wouldn't</div>
 

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Re: Helvetes Fødsel [Infernal Birth] Act IV: Crisis

Nice! I could imagine the orb of light as it appeared and turned into Tiberius. But what was that thing in his back? The one that Octavian noticed? So, Octavian is still wolf-like in appearance?
 

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Hey, I liked it.
Who wouldn't
Thanks for the support and I suppose you've read my work since the beginning?
Nice! I could imagine the orb of light as it appeared and turned into Tiberius. But what was that thing in his back? The one that Octavian noticed? So, Octavian is still wolf-like in appearance?
I don't mean to come off as sounding like as a** which is not my intention at all but the main character's name is Tiberiu as there is no s at the end of it XD I only corrected you in case you thought his name was originally spelled that way. Now, if it was a slip of the finger, then I understand that as well ;) Well, Octavian's new form is yet to be completely revealed; appearance wise as well as for his new abilities but look out for it :)

nice..keep on with it xd
Thanks and will do! ;)
 

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VERY NICE!! Liking this ff more and more everytime I read it! Btw, I love the Lythimpir xD I think the name works quite well :D well, until next time, Haka. :D
 

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Good chapter once again my friend, and it looks like things are really starting to heat up now. So it seems like Octavian was a Werewolf before Lulian attacked... interesting. Many details going around now, and it seems like the story still is inn it's develouping stage, as it somehow reminds me to be right around the corner of Sasuke meeting Itachi again when they came to Konoha. Something is going to happend soon now, I just can feel it. Keep going;)
 

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VERY NICE!! Liking this ff more and more everytime I read it! Btw, I love the Lythimpir xD I think the name works quite well :D well, until next time, Haka. :D
I am pleased ^.^ That is great that you like the the madeup hybrid term for a half Lycanthrope/hybrid vamp XD Until next time indeed ;)

Good chapter once again my friend, and it looks like things are really starting to heat up now. So it seems like Octavian was a Werewolf before Lulian attacked... interesting. Many details going around now, and it seems like the story still is inn it's develouping stage, as it somehow reminds me to be right around the corner of Sasuke meeting Itachi again when they came to Konoha. Something is going to happend soon now, I just can feel it. Keep going;)
Thanks! Cool-I’m glad to have had that reaction ^.^ Yes he was indeed a Lycanthrope before Lulian blew into his village ;p Nice comparison and I don’t want to spoil but you always have a knack for thinking ahead. I will be sure to head your words ;)
 

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I don't mean to come off as sounding like as a** which is not my intention at all but the main character's name is Tiberiu as there is no s at the end of it XD I only corrected you in case you thought his name was originally spelled that way. Now, if it was a slip of the finger, then I understand that as well ;) Well, Octavian's new form is yet to be completely revealed; appearance wise as well as for his new abilities but look out for it :)
Oh, you sure sounded like one:/ Hehe, JK!xd:D
Actually, the very first time I've set my eyes on it, it kept ringing with an "s" in my head!xd Have been careful in mentioning it in the prev chaps though (if I did?xd) and seems like this time around I did slipxd
Well, I've been meaning to find out what his form is so, better hurry with that.:)
 

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Thanks! Cool-I’m glad to have had that reaction ^.^ Yes he was indeed a Lycanthrope before Lulian blew into his village ;p Nice comparison and I don’t want to spoil but you always have a knack for thinking ahead. I will be sure to head your words ;)
Hehe, I'll be waiting for your next chapter my friend, keep up the good work;):)
 

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Bravo! First of all, I wish i could be like you! They say you are like a natural-born writer and I agree. This fiction really filled with pure-ideas, original concept and a creatively made plot. I wonder how you came up with this idea, the character's name, their role . It is totally awesome.

Good job :)
 

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Hehe, I'll be waiting for your next chapter my friend, keep up the good work;):)
Thank you!
Bravo! First of all, I wish i could be like you! They say you are like a natural-born writer and I agree. This fiction really filled with pure-ideas, original concept and a creatively made plot. I wonder how you came up with this idea, the character's name, their role . It is totally awesome.

Good job :)
The comedic thing is that I actually believe that you are like me. I mean we both write fanfictions-which you need to give me a link as I would like to be a reader of yours ;) Also, we like a lot of the same things, e.g. our like over Sasuke! XD ^.^ :) Thank you so much for taking time for my work and for all the wonderful compliments. Well, the character’s names come from their race, for e.g. Octavian is a Romanian name which is his race-whereas I did think was cool to incorporate into my characters ^.^ I did borrow from many various folklores for the monsters, etc. and the plot mainly revolves around revenge. However, I did try my best to not copy from any other novels, movies, etc. which isn’t very easy to accomplish at all lol Anyways, thanks again friend ;)
 

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'Lythimpir' - Very creative fusion. (Y) A bit more was revealed of Tiberiu's wingmen, which was well-deserved, since it's easier to add a character to them now. On to the next chapter, but I doubt the target is actually Lulian.
 

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'Lythimpir' - Very creative fusion. (Y) A bit more was revealed of Tiberiu's wingmen, which was well-deserved, since it's easier to add a character to them now. On to the next chapter, but I doubt the target is actually Lulian.
Thank you and I was very happy with the title I choose for the lycan's hybrid form lol Yes character development is very important I just hope that I give enough. I like the way you think my friend xd
 
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