[Other] Helpless

Hakairyoku

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I have never felt so small.
I can’t stand the cruelty of it all.
There’s nothing I can say, nothing I can do,
And my inability only hurts you.

I cherish you more than anything,
And you have always given me everything.
Yet I can only watch your life digress.
I have never felt so helpless.

You fake your happiness and that smile,
But you still feel pain all the while.
You somehow take every day in stride,
And my hand still remains at my side.

If only I could reach out to you
And hold you like I used to do.
Yet every part of you fades to black.
Now there’s no way I can get you back.
 

Magatsu Izanagi

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Wow. Didn't know you were a poet. This was beautiful.
I can relate a little :T_T:
 
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Six Paths

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The base has nearly everything. And now the poets keep getting even better. I quite frankly relate to it a lot and I like it as well.
 

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Is this about Sakura I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!
 

Hakairyoku

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Wow. Didn't know you were a poet. This was beautiful.
I can relate a little :T_T:

Eh, sometimes. :sweat: But thank you, Magatsu! :O <3 I see. :T_T: Well, we’ve all probably felt like this at some point or another. :/

The base has nearly everything. And now the poets keep getting even better. I quite frankly relate to it a lot and I like it as well.

Wow, this is only the second poem I’ve posted here, and I get a comment like this. :blush: Thank you. ^^ And yet another person who can relate. ;_;

Is this about Sakura I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!

Haha, I could see where this could be coming from Sakura’s POV, but no. XD I’m glad you like it though!

simply brilliant U_U

Thanks a lot. *_*
 

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... TEAR JERKER. :T_T: that was amazing!!!
 

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That was beautiful. :'( Thank you for writing that poem and sharing it with the base. U_U Much appreciated.
 

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Nice work. I like it.
 

Hakairyoku

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Awesome poem man :)

Thank you. =D

... TEAR JERKER. :T_T: that was amazing!!!

Thanks, Beep! :T_T:

That was beautiful. :'( Thank you for writing that poem and sharing it with the base. U_U Much appreciated.

Thank you, Chie. :NO: And you're welcome. Again, it's only the second one I've posted, so I ought to post others I've written. ^^

Nice work. I like it.

Thanks a lot. :)
 

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It was great. I hope it was about me, as you never msg me :|
 
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