Help with sig pretty please with sugar on top?

[Chode]

hello everyone I was wondering if anyone could make me a better sig than I have.. Using my sig as a render Im open to anything .....

Please and thank you to who ever helps me out and I will also give you credit for the sig in my sig haha =] +rep

edit: this is the full render

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[Titania Erza]

Here is my attempt:

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[Chode]

Very nice thank you very much!!!!