help please.

[BREAKD]

So hi all. I'm new and I have allready introduced myself.
Just posting this thing cause i have a question.

I posted an RP costum bio on the konoha town thread.
But some people told me it wasn't good enough and i needed
to ask help from an admin.

So can any admin lend me a hand? cause im rather not so good at this...

Cheers!

 

[Venus]

You're better off looking at the template and looking at a few other new users bio's.

Bio Template:

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Approved Bio's:

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P.S: Don't rip work, and only put in (E-Rank Jutsu basics).

 

[Gary777]

Copy paste others bio stuffs little and make few changes and make ur bio simple and edit it before it gets approved