[Photoshop] Help me to improve it!

[Grim]

Hi there, here's the problem i've wasted way to much time wondering what is it im missing here, and simply cant find it..... picture is obviously unfinished atm but enough have been made to bring up whole idea i've put behind it!

C&C/Diss/advise... anything could help, I just want it to be perfect in the end, just becouse i love what im trying to achive with it in the end!

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The only stock, all the rest is mixed rubish

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[conan]

isn't a photo shop xd

 

[The Doctor]

Hi there, here's the problem i've wasted way to much time wondering what is it im missing here, and simply cant find it..... picture is obviously unfinished atm but enough have been made to bring up whole idea i've put behind it!

C&C/Diss/advise... anything could help, I just want it to be perfect in the end, just becouse i love what im trying to achive with it in the end!

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It's nice, I quite like it.

Perhaps the upper right side is a bit empty?

I see what you mean, it feels like something is missing.

I'll love to see it, once you completely finish it. o_o

 

[Trinky]

Honestly, I don't think anything is missing at all. Fantastic job.

IF you do want to add something, perhaps add some more stars in the sky. I found some awesome brushes on deviantart that I use often. Here's a few if you're interested:

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I'd love to see the final result =]

 

[hyugastyle]

whats wrong with it?

 

[Roy]

Honestly, I don't think anything is missing at all. Fantastic job.

IF you do want to add something, perhaps add some more stars in the sky. I found some awesome brushes on deviantart that I use often. Here's a few if you're interested:

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I'd love to see the final result =]

+rep for sharing those awesome brushes

OnT: It's friggin awesome O.O

 

[Trinky]

+rep for sharing those awesome brushes

Aww, thank you! ^_^
I come across tons of neat brushes. I can drop you a message when I find some more cool ones if you like :3

 

[Roy]

Aww, thank you! ^_^
I come across tons of neat brushes. I can drop you a message when I find some more cool ones if you like :3

I'd appreciate that

 

[Grim]

It's nice, I quite like it.

Perhaps the upper right side is a bit empty?

I see what you mean, it feels like something is missing.

I'll love to see it, once you completely finish it. o_o

I dont think it's empty but i do think it needs maybe shadows/or wrong light reflection from the mood or should the light of the ground be brighter.. things like that. Also maybe some good advice about the dress.... to make it look more like a dress..

Honestly, I don't think anything is missing at all. Fantastic job.

IF you do want to add something, perhaps add some more stars in the sky. I found some awesome brushes on deviantart that I use often. Here's a few if you're interested:

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I'd love to see the final result =]

Thank you for insperational reply

whats wrong with it?

That what im trying to find out, im never happy with what i've made, maybe few times but mostly im just Rrrrrange/save/post/ check what happends

 

[Viole]

first off this is sick.......of course in a good way U_U
second well i dont see any problems
third if u really really want to fix this im sure u see that there is a straight line in the upper part of her legs well the part where they are disappearing
u could fix that with liqufiy
either way the manipulation is a awesome

 

[Grim]

first off this is sick.......of course in a good way U_U
second well i dont see any problems
third if u really really want to fix this im sure u see that there is a straight line in the upper part of her legs well the part where they are disappearing
u could fix that with liqufiy
either way the manipulation is a awesome

good eye mate, will errase it thanks for that and CnC

 

[Viole]

good eye mate, will errase it thanks for that and CnC

no prob mate
and your sig rocks
i seriously need to learn to do that U_U

 

[Nathan]

Awesome man.

 

[Mercy]

The way her head blends in is kinda weird, maybe you want to do something about that?
Also, the upper right side is pretty empty like Beca said.

And it still isn't finished and I already like it a lot, can't wait for the finished piece.

 

[Sonne]

Hey dude, it's been a while, how have you been? o.o
It's nice, fantastic Job, my only worry is her head, as Mercy said, and that swirling thing around her thigh area, it looks weird the way her body is getting cut off.

 

[SoniK]

Very cool concept!

 

[Anduril]

Long time since u came along mate

For the manip..

She is trying to pull her dress up i think which is actually a black curtain and the scene switches from the night to the day time.....

I would have liked if the curtain she is pulling were more in the form of a liquid, that she is pulling up and which is dripping down as it is being pulled up with more smoother edges, rather than the smoked once that u have now .....

Another thing i think it lacks the clear distinction between day and night...

The above are purely my views and i don`t expect anyone to agree..
just sharing my thoughts .....

Thank u.

 

[Xentinel]

I think its awesome. But erm in my opinion, the background is kinda messed up the whole thing. The sky night is good, but the "safari" background. The girl wears office suit therefore it doesnt relates to the background. But as you said it is uncomplete yet and I dont think its really important. But on top of that, the effects are cool and seriously perfect. Good job.

 

[Grim]

The way her head blends in is kinda weird, maybe you want to do something about that?
Also, the upper right side is pretty empty like Beca said.

And it still isn't finished and I already like it a lot, can't wait for the finished piece.

When you look at head the blend you mean like on the moon? it's a strong light source reflection. Since shes in space her upper body is faded. Will work on it, make it perhaps lighter Thanks

Hey dude, it's been a while, how have you been? o.o
It's nice, fantastic Job, my only worry is her head, as Mercy said, and that swirling thing around her thigh area, it looks weird the way her body is getting cut off.

Not bad, trying to improve my self in all way possible, since im now on my second step of career as GD what swirling? you have to look in the concept as she lifts night as her dress to release day, and those legs.. I just love them to much as you might noticed its a same girl i always use for most of my works, one and only Julia

Long time since u came along mate

For the manip..

She is trying to pull her dress up i think which is actually a black curtain and the scene switches from the night to the day time.....

I would have liked if the curtain she is pulling were more in the form of a liquid, that she is pulling up and which is dripping down as it is being pulled up with more smoother edges, rather than the smoked once that u have now .....

Another thing i think it lacks the clear distinction between day and night...

The above are purely my views and i don`t expect anyone to agree..
just sharing my thoughts .....

Thank u.

Brilliant, I will try and make it liquid and post my result here as I get an result,
thanks mate

I think its awesome. But erm in my opinion, the background is kinda messed up the whole thing. The sky night is good, but the "safari" background. The girl wears office suit therefore it doesnt relates to the background. But as you said it is uncomplete yet and I dont think its really important. But on top of that, the effects are cool and seriously perfect. Good job.

you got it wrong mate, her dress is night, under that is day shes blended with night sky couse it's all the way fairytailish

 

[Mercy]

What I meant was, the way her head blended it. It fades out which doesn't look good.

I hope you get me =DD