Hello! a small poem dedicated to Naruto/Sasuke..

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[ronus]

Hello!
my name is mainki and Im new here.Just wanted to post a small poem that I wrote yesterday.Please comment and tell me what you think...THNX


In vain..

I'm staring down from the edge of cliff.
the heart is poulting and the breath is stiff
im searching with my hungry eyes your shape..
i know it's almost nowhere to run-
this friendship feels like rape
And me ,exhausted, waiting as a bate.
and i can't keep on crying ..i am stum

The silence.
I am falling on my knees..
oh,Sasuke, please..
let's finish all this now for I can't take no more!
And motionless i'm falling on the floor..
Remember us before?
The rush, the sorrow, dissappointments..
And all Kakashis' late appointments..
It all we shared ..and the rest.
Oh, Sasuke! Painful in my chest!
Thus suddenly..chidori light ..
and day is turning into night..
And on last moment of my life..

your hand is pearcing me with knife.

Nice work bro..
Hope to hear more from you..
+rep
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[-Jiraiya-]

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[Linear]

Hello!
my name is mainki and Im new here.Just wanted to post a small poem that I wrote yesterday.Please comment and tell me what you think...THNX


In vain..

I'm staring down from the edge of cliff.
the heart is poulting and the breath is stiff
im searching with my hungry eyes your shape..
i know it's almost nowhere to run-
this friendship feels like rape
And me ,exhausted, waiting as a bate.
and i can't keep on crying ..i am stum

The silence.
I am falling on my knees..
oh,Sasuke, please..
let's finish all this now for I can't take no more!
And motionless i'm falling on the floor..
Remember us before?
The rush, the sorrow, dissappointments..
And all Kakashis' late appointments..
It all we shared ..and the rest.
Oh, Sasuke! Painful in my chest!
Thus suddenly..chidori light ..
and day is turning into night..
And on last moment of my life..

your hand is pearcing me with knife.

interesting <3

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nice poem dude,..+rep for your work =)

 

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P.S nice poem xD

 

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And nice poems

 

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Nice poem. ^_^

 

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And nice work. :hug: