[Horror] Hell Is The Place

[Cyanide Addiction]

There's a place for people like you
It's beyond any dream or nightmare
It's the place you go to after turning blue
It's the place you go when you stop breathing air

Oh no it's hell!
How did I end up in this wretched place?
You'll ask this but no one but no one will tell
You already know it's because of your own disgrace!

Hell is the place for people who wrong the right
Hell is the place for people who deny that which is true
Hell is the place where you go after the wrong fight
Hell is the place for people just like... YOU!

Oh Lord whatever have I done wrong!?
How did I end up in this place?
Ask this as you hear the devil playing this song
And the flesh begins to melt off your pitiful face

Hell is the place for people who lie to hide what's right
Hell is the place for people who lust for success and cheat
Hell is the place for hypocrites like you who get lost at night
And Hell is the place for those lost in their own deceit

Yes there's a place for your individual self proclaimed "class"
It's a lake of fire where you'll burn through the never
In the end your weren't a Saint.. Just a God damned @$$!
Now it's time you fell to hell to suffer your fate forever.​

 

[Darth Vader]

Good message all together, but the flow of the poem is just... Not there...

 

[Cyanide Addiction]

Good message all together, but the flow of the poem is just... Not there...

was meant to be more of a song. :|

 

[Glovoc]

Songs are just poems with a rhythm But other than that, it sounds good

 

[Cyanide Addiction]

And I listen to a lot of Thrash Metal. Sooooo....

 

[fahadkurama]

when you say song, u mean rock? because i couldn't get the rhythm

 

[Cyanide Addiction]

No, I meant Polka. :|
In all actuality I was listening to some old school Metallica when I wrote this.