Kyuoken
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Yeah I seem to notice that lately. I had a friend from another country, who read over my story ever since I first met up with him at 14 or 15 years old.
I would always get told about things, like grammar and stuff like that. But over the years I've known him, he always likes the way my story turns out. Heck he is even saying that I'm improving. Even till this day, he still reads my story XD
At the time, my problem was...Probably qoutation's aka, characters interaction (Forgetting to space between this and the paragraphs seperately). While now out of that phase. Seems to me, that..Well I can't see it just yet. But probably sentence placement now. I'll post up an old Idea I had, for Naruto tomorrow. Then I will explain there.
I would always get told about things, like grammar and stuff like that. But over the years I've known him, he always likes the way my story turns out. Heck he is even saying that I'm improving. Even till this day, he still reads my story XD
At the time, my problem was...Probably qoutation's aka, characters interaction (Forgetting to space between this and the paragraphs seperately). While now out of that phase. Seems to me, that..Well I can't see it just yet. But probably sentence placement now. I'll post up an old Idea I had, for Naruto tomorrow. Then I will explain there.
