[Other] Heart ache.

[Paramour]

Where there is a right, there is no wrong.
I've always thought he was so strong.
But .. Her time flew right by.
There wasn't a chance to say Good bye

After awhile he couldn't go on. His tears start rolling down.
He was damaged and emotionally blown.
All of his hopes were broken and destroyed.
He couldn't remember the days they enjoyed.

Only — Sadness and sorrow, he understood. No happiness came from that day, for good.

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[Yanks]

Neat-O Lol
I kinda like this one

 

[D R E X]

It's terrible , sorry to be blunt but it is .

I'm just being sagacious .
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[Αizen]

Wow that's deep, but it's Awesome!

 

[rakitha]

Where there is a right, there is no wrong.
I've always thought he was so strong.
But .. Her time flew right by.
There wasn't a chance to say Good bye

After awhile he couldn't go on. His tears start rolling down.
He was damaged and emotionally blown.
All of his hopes were broken and destroyed.
He couldn't remember the days they enjoyed.

Only — Sadness and sorrow, he understood. No happiness came from that day, for good.

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fine nice Zzz

 

[Six Paths]

I liked it.

 

[dark legion]

want my opinion ... to deep ... to much emotions ... far away from my likes .... but anyway good job =D

 

[- J AV -]

Nice..... Poem...

 

[Itachi Uchiwa]

where i'm from, this is called mohn.. !
but yeah why not, it's nice

 

[KING KISAME]

Oh a poem how sweet... In my ms. Trenchbol voice

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

I know that feeling for some extent although my one didn't die . she just went away without saying goodbye

and i was like that for months .

 

[darkprince]

very neatly written.
great job.