Hear Me

[ikikouchiha9668]

This one was inspired by the song Hear Me by Kelly Clarkson and the creepy forest I'm in right now. Enjoy~

I felt so closed in as my heart pounded in my ear
It beated perfectly in synch with my footsteps
That echoed in the forest that closed me in

With no way out I scream
My lungs ripped, but I still screamed with my might
Can anyone hear me?!

I'm lost in my thoughts waiting for you
Waiting for someone to listen
To everything I have to say

I know someone's there
I just have to find them
It can't be that long can it?

Interupted by you shadow that casts all around me
The trees stood tall with your sillhouette
That mocked me so easily

You feel so close but yet so far away
I see you but you are blurry
I feel you but that might be my imagination

I scream with my last breath
Left alone to rot in the woods that laugh
Can you hear me now?

 

[BlkMagk]

Very deep

 

[Gobi Bryant]

Is it more of a poem or song, either way it sounds pretty good to me. Very visual.

 

[BlueNote]

great job i here by plus rep you

 

[izinagi54]

i will be here, near and dear.
For her i will become clear, clairvoyent with sneer.
I love her i swear, if even my heart teared away

i will sway from and away.
wuth the melody she plays, contemplating.
my love for her

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

ikiko, it seems that being in the woods is doing u alot of good! ur poems are getting better and better! i love it! :ice: good job!