Hayate (Dead or Alive)

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"I am the Wind!"
—Hayate


Basic Information:

Name:Hayate
Nickname:Speed demon
Age:23
Gender:Male
Clan:None


Looks:

Hayate is a young, muscular man, who has inherited his father's facial features, but mother's eye colour. In his original design, Hayate has slightly tanned skin, a slim face with a pointed chin, board shoulders, and narrow brown eyes. His hair is light brown, straight, and styled so it reaches his shoulders with a center parting. For Dead or Alive 5, he was re-vamped to have more harder-looking, mature features, including a squared chin and a lower brow. His hair has been given a small cut, so it is only as long as his jawline.
Hayate is typically seen in shinobi armor and body-suits, which could include shin and wrist guards, chainmail, and masks to cover the lower half of his face. Two recurring elements to his costumes include his sword, the Jinran-Maru, and a headband which he will wear around his forehead. He will also wear some casual, everyday clothing from time to time, in order to blend in with normal people and hide his shinobi identity.

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There is something wierd in this bio that i can't explain ._.
 

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wrong section this is konoha RP
 

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i thought you were asking whether he's alive or dead ?
 

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Definitely the wrong section...
 

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Nice bio for a first. But I would recommend a few alterations.
First, I would put the pics in image tags so that they appear as a pic rather than a link. Here is an example of the tags you will need to use.
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[IMG]Image link [/img]

Second, since your dude isnt from an official clan from the series. Delete the clan name from the clan area in the basic info area, and add it as his surname in the name field.

Third, you can't have the sharingan unless you make an Uchiha bio. Rules for making an Uchiha bio can be found

Fourth, I would reccomend putting your theme song in the youtube wrap. Again it makes it easier for someone to access the song. Without having to open another tab. Example:
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 [youtube] Video link [/youtube]

Lastly, Wrong section but GL on getting approved anyway. I don't think I missed anything but if I did I am sure someone will point it out.
 

Izuna Kakashi Senju

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Can anyone tell me where to post bios then and he is from the video game series Dead or Alive.
 

Artemis81

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...post in the RPG bios section, it's a subsection at the top of Konoha Town.
 

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Wrong section and post it in the RPG Bio Section stated by Artermis...
 

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I feel the Embarassment bro, i feel ,_,... Also ask a Mod to delete this. nvm i'll ask...
 

Excālibur1

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Ask a mod not to delete this...
Ask a mod to move it to the RPG Bios Section..
 

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You didn't even follow the template properly.
 
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