Hawk, The lone wolf.

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Basic Information

Name: Hawk.
Nickname: Lone wolf.
Gender: Male.
Age: 23.
Clan: Inuzuka

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Personality: Hawk loves to be alone, and works very poorly with others. Hawk is cool and collected, as well as can stay calm under pressure. But because of his terrible social skills, he has always been treated as an outcast. as Hawk says: "I'm just a man of few words."

Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure.
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure.

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: chuunin.
Specialty: /
Elements: Suiton - needs training.
Your ninjutsu:
basic E rank.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




Background Info/history Hawk grew up in Konoha and was raised buy his Father, his mother having died of disease when he was 9. Hawk had very strong bonds with his mother and father and they were very close. He was always a very mature kid, but was bullied at the ninja academy because he had no friends. Though even though he was treated so bad, he still came up at the top of his class. when Hawk was 16 his father died of a disease and he and his younger brother had to fend for themselves. When Hawk was 18, he was out on border patrol when he saw 2 strangers wearing black cloaks with red clouds on them pass by. they were both wearing hats, but one of them took off his hat to reveal the strangest eyes Hawk had ever seen.he was with his brother, who was then 15. the man with the Red eyes suddenly dashed at Hawk, but hawk was saw it coming. In an instant hawk had impaled the man with his katana. but suddenly, the man began to flicker, and to Hawks horror, his little brother was standing there with a katana through his heart. The man with strange eyes wore an unreadable expression, and that expression was the last thing hawk saw as he was knocked out by a man with blue skin. Hawk was left alone with his 2 dogs, Ryouken and Yari. From that day forth Hawk obsessively trained to one day best the man he heard was named Itachi. About 4 years later, the news struck him. Uchiha Sasuke had killed Itachi. Hawk was thrown into a rage at Sasuke, swearing to hunt him down and kill him for "destroying his rightful kill." Soon, hate and darkness took over Hawk, he and his dogs left Konoha to train. After the loss of all he loved, his one and only goal is to kill Sasuke Uchiha.



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Theme Song and Background Music:
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Battles

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Lost: ----

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Nice bio, you will need to add a bit more details and pictures.
 

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Which character is this one from?

I like the story but I wish you would develop it more. Good luck in the RP.
 

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Which character is this one from?

I like the story but I wish you would develop it more. Good luck in the RP.
it's from a video game called fable 2, but the character is never developed so i decided to give him a personality and story,
 

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it's from a video game called fable 2, but the character is never developed so i decided to give him a personality and story,

Wow that's pretty an awesome story. Hopefully on your next update you can add some more. One thing I tell people who do custom histories is to flesh out the story. Such as....

- Where were you born?
- Who were your parents before your birth? How do you perceive them (Do you look up to them or hate them? Why)?
- Any friends growing up? Describe them like their character and appearance.
- People you looked up to? How did they influence you?
- How was growing up for our character?
- How is your character now? (Depends on what age you said your character is)
- Any fights you had? Go into details and make it intense.
- What motivated your character to become a shinobi? Were you forced or was it a conscious choice?
- How did your character do in the academy and after?
- How hard was your training or was it natural for you?

Those are just some questions to answer if you really want to develop your character. Some people like to base the character on themselves and their own struggles only in a more narutoverse viewpoint. I hope you do well in the RP but don't forget to have fun and enjoy the experience with friends. Your experience will be more whole if you make some rp friends and share your experiences. That's why most people have really ever been here that long.

^___^
 

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Wow that's pretty an awesome story. Hopefully on your next update you can add some more. One thing I tell people who do custom histories is to flesh out the story. Such as....

- Where were you born?
- Who were your parents before your birth? How do you perceive them (Do you look up to them or hate them? Why)?
- Any friends growing up? Describe them like their character and appearance.
- People you looked up to? How did they influence you?
- How was growing up for our character?
- How is your character now? (Depends on what age you said your character is)
- Any fights you had? Go into details and make it intense.
- What motivated your character to become a shinobi? Were you forced or was it a conscious choice?
- How did your character do in the academy and after?
- How hard was your training or was it natural for you?

Those are just some questions to answer if you really want to develop your character. Some people like to base the character on themselves and their own struggles only in a more narutoverse viewpoint. I hope you do well in the RP but don't forget to have fun and enjoy the experience with friends. Your experience will be more whole if you make some rp friends and share your experiences. That's why most people have really ever been here that long.

^___^

thanks, ill add it:)
 
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