hated...

[izinagi54]

I can't sing... nor can i look them in the eye.
They're stare is as cold as ice.
No love to be felt... i am alone.

I have no friends that geniunely care.
all alone with no good answer.
Just a wing and a prayer.

Do i dare continue with the abuse i suffer.
Getting cursed and suffer.
Maybe in the end i am doom to die.
Maybe i am a worthless blight

 

[Shalev]

I can't sing... nor can i look them in the eye.
They're stare is as cold as ice.
No love to be felt... i am alone.

I have no friends that geniunely care.
all alone with no good answer.
Just a wing and a prayer.

Do i dare continue with the abuse i suffer.
Getting cursed and suffer.
Maybe in the end i am doom to die.
Maybe i am a worthless blight

.. ."bask in the sunlight!"
depression hurts, cymbalta can help?

 

[Reflection]

*Their
Be sure to proofread your threads, especially those of literary significance, before posting.
Failed. Edit it ASAP.

 

[Desanto]

*Their
Be sure to proofread your threads, especially those of literary significance, before posting.
Failed. Edit it ASAP.

C'mon man don't be a grammar nazi

 

[Mangekyō1]

*Their
Be sure to proofread your threads, especially those of literary significance, before posting.
Failed. Edit it ASAP.

Grammar Nazi! I like your writing though izinagi.

 

[Reflection]

C'mon man don't be a grammar nazi

In order to craft a decent poem, you must be sure not to make elementary grammar errors like this. It's vital!

 

[izinagi54]

........ i am actually being serious.....

@reflection

Grammer never makes a poem. A poem is somthing from the soul... even if the soul is cut and torn apart. Just trust me... i am sick... sick and tired of people just putting me down.

 

[Desanto]

In order to craft a decent poem, you must be sure not to make elementary grammar errors like this. It's vital!

Eh, I guess you have a point. BUT still, don't be a nazi lol

 

[LegendarySwordsman]

So random poem or does it really mean something for you ?

 

[izinagi54]

........ it means somthing to let go of my emotions.

 

[Cruciatus]

Nice as always Chris

 

[NeverEnding]

Pretty DEEP in a Emo way! But it's real DEEP!

 

[Crow.]

Good, sad, but good. You really know how to express your pain with your words man. It's pure talent you have there.

 

[Rorasa]

Chris :hug: I've always told you to not give a damn about people that are not worth it. (myself included...)

 

[Hori]

Wow nice poetry

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