[Approved] Hanzo Uchiha -The Infernal Spirit BIO Waiting Approval

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Name: Hanzō Uchiha (うちは半蔵, Uchiha Hanzō)
Nicakname:The Infernal Spirit:
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Clan: Uchiha clan
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(うちは一族, Uchiha Ichizoku)

Looks: Hanzō wears a Black undershirt, covered with a black and white overshirt. He wears a pair of black gloves and black boots with white soles. A black band is on his right leg over his white pants that cut off at the middle of his calves. He wears a dark grey belt and a dark grey strap that hangs from his right shoulder to his left hip. He carries a chokutō that is covered in black and carries the Uchiha clan symbol on it. Like all Uchiha, his eyes and hair is black in color. Sometimes Hanzō wears a white cloth headband when he is not wearing his village headband.

Personality:
Hanzo is a relatively quiet individual with a humble demeanor whose laidback attitude has helped him develop and foster the ability to anyalze almost any sitauation at hand,he also has a very strong will and determination.During his early childhood this came in handy as he readily soaked up the information provided to him at the ninja academy always searching for another way to process the information at hand to extend his knowledge further and help him gain recognition within his clan as a powerful and honorable shinobi.

As a resident of the village hidden in the leaves,Hanzo has a deep sense of duty and obligation to protect and uphold the will and testemant of those who came before him to build the place he nows calls home.His views on justice are inexplicitly woven into his character and hihgly dislikes anyone who takes the matter lightly.Through his keen observation into his enemy,hanzo never lets his confidence in his abilities cloud his judgment and always holds his opponent in the highest respect.Hanzo heavily relies on his opponents actions never one to rush into a battle leaving little room for error and miscalculation,implementing a counter-offensive approach, allowing his opponents to strike first then exploiting a weak or blind spot by a quick assement of the situation while gauging their reaction to take advantage of them quickly.


Village Info

Village of Birth:
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Konohagakure
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Village of Alliance: Konohagakure
Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Sannin
Specialty: Fire - Would like to learn
Elements: Fire - Would like to learn
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

Part 1: A mothers love

During the following days after the Uchiha were all forced to live in a corner of the village the tension between the clan and the vilage were at and all time high. The segregation act would only ensure the constant suspicion, and discrimination that would ensue,soon giving birth to feelings of irreparable ill-will, and ultimately rekindled the clan's feelings of hatred towards the Senju-influenced government.With the looming threat of war approaching quicker then one could anticipate one uchiha named Saikano would take her child and resolve to leave the village.Saikanonknew that a civil war would only esculate into another Shinobi World War and instead of havig her child face being ostracized by the vilage through the stigmata of the clans sullied name or even worse death,Saikano set about on her way to the land of tea on the night her husband was summoned to a secret metting by the clan leader Fugaku.

Saikano would soon meet up with a fellow friend Kazuna whom she had bonded with after a mission assignemnt in which she had to protect the trade route station posted between both border of both villages.This route was shared by the land of tea and the leaf village as was one of their crucial national export buisness connections.

Kazuna would welcome her and her son refuge.Upon entrance saikano quikcly figured out that danzo's scout have already founded her.KnOwing danzo would undoubtedly kill her child sakaino left Hanzo with kazuna and had the anbu follow her to the next village over.When the anbu confronted the uchihha and accused her of light treason she engaged them in battle.After inadvertently learning that danzo was still unaware of her true reasoning for leaving the village.Saikano who was one of many operators who was tasked with memorizing all anbu's abilities working closely with danzo used ther advanced knowledge against them,grasping ahold of the oppertunity to kill all the anbu before they could make it back to inform danzo of their findings.Although not before being mortally wounded by a paralyzing seal that activated upon one of the fallen anbu on the onset of death.

With her lungs slowly collasping Saiakno set about making it back to kazuna and hanzo to see her son one last time.Unfornutely Saikano would be ambushed shortly before making it back to the tea village by Danzo the skirmish would result with saikano under a genjustu forcing her back to konoha.Knowing the fate that awaited her she opted to take her own life to ensure the saftey of her son and the Coup d'état.From here on out kazuna would raise him as her own and Hanzo would reach the age of six before ever learning of his uchiha heritage and birthland.

Part 2:Fateful meeting! Danzo,The one who knocks
[Still under Construction]


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Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0


~Approved~ have fun RPing ^^
 
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Note: It is unnecessary to place "bio awaiting approval" in the title. Caliburn is well aware which bios have yet to be approved/declined. Just because you put that in the title doesn't mean it will get approved faster. Keep that in mind when you make a new thread for your bio.

Making a bio also isn't that hard unless you are going all out with design which still isn't necessary.
 
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Note: It is unnecessary to place "bio awaiting approval" in the title. Caliburn is well aware which bios have yet to be approved/declined. Just because you put that in the title doesn't mean it will get approved faster. Keep that in mind when you make a new thread for your bio.

Making a bio also isn't that hard unless you are going all out with design which still isn't necessary.
I wasn't trying to make to get it approved faster or anything i just wanted to make sure nobody thought i was trying to set up my bio without asking permission is all
 

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There is so much wrong with this biography.
Unlike me, every single person makes a biography before checking the bios of others and getting an idea on what to do.

Well,first off i did look other bios.
Secondly,the only difference between mine and others is the placement of certain info.
Not to mention the giant caps at the bottom stating that it is UNFINISHED.
So,yeah........
 
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Firstly, please consult with for the proper format. If your bio does not adhere to the placement of info, it'll be declined.
Next, get rid of the earth affinity, as well as your entire jutsu list. Without formal training, it will be removed when checked.

Don't hesitate to VM me with any concerns/questions about biographies or the RP in general.​
 

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You picked a great character but sadly my friend you didn't follow the template the way Caliburn would like for you to follow.

Please read this when you get a chance.

Might I remind everyone of the fact that the template posted in this thread is the official template and your first priority is following it and not to make your bio appealing? As by now a lot of people just take it for granted that they can mess around the template as they see fit just so that it matches their coding. Till now I was always the one who edited it for them or let it slide when it was very minor. However recently most people started making more and more complex codings for their bio's and started to consider the basic template as something they could freely mess around with and new members just started copying them.

Henceforth I will decline bio's if they do not follow the template correctly, no matter how insignificant the problem might be and I will keep doing this until people realize again that the fundamental priority is following the template and that any kind of fancy coding is optional and that you take full responsibility for whatever problems that might cause. The only ones I give some slack are the people who made their first bio's, but anyone else who already made bio's should be aware of what the template looks like.

A few days ago I saw someone who just decided to remove their Village Info and only just said Village of Birth under Basic Information. Currently there is a coding going around that has been used in around 6 to 12 bio's and not a single one of all the persons noticed that there is a freaking huge coding error right in the middle of it and I was the one who had to edit it out and because the coding has become so complex, one tiny mistake of my part and the entire bio might look like hell. Originally when I had to edit stuff it was like playing like a child that is trying to get building blocks in the right hole, square in square, triangle in triangle. Now it feels like I'm doing surgery, making my job even harder and exhausting then it already was. A lot of people also stop counting their battles and then just minimize the Battles part of often even remove it =/

I don't care that you place smilies or N/A or whatever in the won/lost part or that you say "see bio" in the pictures part or that you don't actually post a Theme Song or that you even say in the looks part "see bio" or "see pictures"; however I'm sick of it that people's main concern is their coding and not the template.

So hereby you are warned as I'm going to decline bio's that don't follow it correctly, no matter how stupid the reason might appear to you as I'm responsible for all bio's and this is an issue that's occurring in a lot of them.
Here is the thread link for the template:

If you need a bio to be designed for you I am happy to help you. We aren't doing this to annoy you. We want you to participate in the RP with no problems and eventually grow to be a contributing member of the RP. Please follow the rules.



Oh good. Now you shouldn't have any problems. I wish you the best of luck in our RP. Share as much as you can and help others when you can. Even if you don't know much there is always a way to be helpful. Just be kind and people will eventually warm up to you.

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