[Action] Halo Fanfiction | Chapter 1 | Outpost on Sereniti

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This is my first fan fiction, so here are how things work.
*All things involving actions will be typed inside of asterisk*​



*After flying over an ocean for five hours, a Pelican carrying four marines landed on a grassy field about 100 yards away from an obstacle course and UNSC outpost. When the Pelican hatch opened, a dark skinned man wearing the standard UNSC marine armor jumped off the Pelican, landing on his feet facing the other three marines*

Sergeant Parrish: Listen you grunts! I am giving you five seconds to get off that ship! Now!

*Before the Sergeant finished his sentence, the three marines were 10 feet away from him, lined up awaiting their orders*

Sergeant Parrish: So far so good! Now let's who each and every one of you grunts are.

*Parrish pointed to a soldier who was about 6' tall, very lean, in his late teens, and had very light skin.*

Sergeant Parrish: You! Tell us about yourself cup cake!

*The soldier Parrish pointed to stood at attention and began to spoke*

Kennedy: My name is Private Kennedy sir! I am from the Missouri district on Earth, before it got blown up.

Sergeant Parrish: Ok cup cake shut it! I heard enough!

*Parrish points to a short and chubby Private who was eating on some Doritos*

Sergeant Parrish: Holy Hell what are you doing Private? Quit stuffing your face with fried foods and tell us about yourself!

*After the chubby man swallowed the rest of his Doritos, he began to spoke*

Judge: My name is Private Judge sir! I am from New Reach, before it got taken over by those damn, dirty Aliens! I fu-

*Parrish interrupts him*

Parrish: Jesus do you think we have all day? That is enough, I don't have time for sob stories.

*Parrish sits and points to the last marine in the line. She looked like she was 5'5, very toned, and had silky brunette hair*

Parrish: What is your story private?

*The girl clears her throat and begins speaking in a very soft, sweet tone*

Baker: My name is private Baker sir! I am also from New Reach.

*Parrish stands back up*

Sergeant Parrish: Ok maggots. I just want you to know something. I own you! Time to get to the Sereniti outpost. Move it!

*As the four marines get within 10 feet of the outpost, there are three explosions that go off in the base. Then a crazed marine starts running out of the base*

Marine: Run for your lives! The covenant are attacking the Sereniti outpost!! Jackals and Grunts everywh-

*Before he can finish his sentence, a bullet of plasma eats the young marines skin, until there is a hole going straight through his stomach. He then lies on the ground dead*

Judge: What the hell?

Sergeant Parrish: Dammit! Grunts are overrunning the outpost!

Kennedy: What? We are getting over run? What are we going to do! We don't have any weapons!

*Parrish pulls out his pistol and shoots the Grunt in stomach and in the shoulder, effectively killing it*

Baker: Sergeant, do you have any more weapons?

*Parrish points to the Obstacle course's armory*

Sergeant Parrish: Get locked and loaded marines! We are going in!

 
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Good fanfic so far! I love halo. I'm eager for the next chapter. While short, this had it all.
Action
Interesting Plot
Slight cliffhanger.

I like it. Good 6.5 or 7/10 so far. Only problem is the length XD
 
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Ya, I made it in about 20 minutes XD My first one got deleted on my lap top so I re-did the story. Next chapter will be way better.
 
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