Halo: Batallion of Spartan Soldiers - Introduction

[TheVideoSoup]

"Good luck, Spartan", said Keyes as he took off in the Pelican towards the Pillar of Autumn. Noble 6 turned around and headed off towards the AA gun to give Keyes room to return to the Pillar safely with Cortana. As Noble 6 approaches the gun, he notices Emile's corpse on the ground.

Noble 6 then fired at the oncoming Phantoms and Banshees. They were proving nearly equal to the guns, but Noble 6 was a little bit stronger. He blasted the Corvette high above, and destroyed it, giving the Pillar enough cover to take off with the AI that would shape the future of the human race.

With Noble 6 all alone, he faced his fate and faded into the surface of Reach along with the other soldiers that died there.

But that's another story.

This is the story of another organization created by the UNSC to take down the rebel hackers and modders of Reach. This is the story of BOSS: The Batallion of Spartan Soldiers.

HALO: BATALLION OF SPARTAN SOLDIERS

-CHAPTER ONE COMING SOON!!-

(sorry for the short intro, guys! chapter one will be much larger!

 

[Cartera]

nice you took tought of this when playing halo reach

 

[Vayne]

nice

 

[Dr Strangelove]

Good.

 

[Urda]

I do understand that this Intro was short, but you could have added a better detailed understanding of whats to be expected in the first chapter. I am also wondering if the dialogue is going to be this short? Are you going to provide a more detailed background for the character(s) and/or his/her opposition? Overall, your FF was alright. +Reps