Hakoden's bio

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Basic Information

Name: Hakoden
Nickname: The Beast hidden in The blizzard
Gender: Male
Age:16
Clan: Haku's

Looks: a Ice-blue eyed man, with brown hair and his skin is as white as the moon, he has a mark on his mouth that people knows him from, wears a long cloak all over his body that hides a black long jacket under it, he ropes a battle of water on the left side of his belt on the jacket.

Personality: Evil and only cares of himself

Village Info.

Village of Birth: Yugakure
Village of Alliance: Konoha, Kaihakusei, Konoha and Kirigakure

Rank//Chakra Info.

Ninja Rank: Sannin
Specialty: Fan user and Speed
Elements: Water, Fire, Wind, Lightening and Earth
Your ninjutsu: Elements mastered, taijutsu and ninjutsu up to S rank genjutsu so far.
(Hyouton: Sensatsu Suishou) - Ice Style: 1000 Needles Of Death
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user makes Ice senbon that attack from all directions.

ice style : all direction ice shuriken explosion ( hyouton : issai shuriken haretsu )

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Offense/Defense
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 if it used as a wall or to imprison the enemy )
Damage Points: 60
Descriptions: as the user make the ice shurikens jutsu, the user make the shurikens explode with ice by expanding its size in the second it hits the enemy making the injuries expand with it, and can be used to make a wall of the ice shuriken jutsu that protect from moderate attacks, and can also be used to imprison the enemy inside the ice
- can only be used if ice shurikens was used
- can only be used twice per battle


(Katon: Gamayu Endan) - Fire Style: Toad Oil Flame Bomb
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Toad Oil Bullet to launch a streaming fireball toward the opponent. This jutsu can cover a huge area with fire.

Summoning Technique (Kuchiyose no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.


(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: �Wind Style: Rasengan� and �Water Style: Destruction Torrent� combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).
Background Info.

History:
In the Wars, An Ice user woman was kidnapped by the Hot Water Village Anbus, and there, they made experiments on her such as merrying a the leader of the village, then she got pregnant, The baby where born and was named Hakoden by his mother, but the village called him beast-kid because of his weird look and his four hands.

In the prison house where they lived together after the death of his father, A question Kept popping inside Hakoden's mind "What its like to be free?" as he asked his mother and the prison leader but he only got the same answer " There wont be any freedom for you", Being prisoned for life made Hakoden knows that the only way to find his freedom was by break from the prison, but to do that he will need a great help from his mother.

As the days based Hakodan asked his mother for help, but she told him that its none sense to search for freedom "You can't just run, they will catch you and kill you" she kept saying, but he known deep inside that his father will know him, and finally his mother accept to help ,and one day, his mother used genjutsu to foul the prisoners and run away with Hakoden but the Anbu leader found them and killed his mother while she was saying "keep running and do not look back, we will always be together" with tears fallen from her eyes.

In the forest, Hakoden kept searching for someone or somehting o help him to survive since he kept fighting against alot of animals and anbus, and he end up eating them or fleeing into the river where he searched and got his water element power, then he fill a bottle he found with the river water and get deep into the forest in the hope of finding his true freedom.

At last, he found three monsters that didn't attack him, two old tigers like and a small one, they even played with him and was more then a family, but the day had come, and the Anbus found him and tried to kill him but the two old tigers were killed while protecting him, and that was when his Ice powers came to the maximum and he froze the whole forest.

Seeing new family being killed made Hakoden more heartless then anyone can be, so he killed the Anbus and ate there bodies and used there bones to create an armor for his young monster brother "Natsume", who was still small and powerless.

Natsume grow up with his half brother and learned to be a ninja as well, and ran off to the Mist Village where they found an old man that cursed them with an immorality curse because they stole food from him, which gave them all the time in the word to power up, as it is for natsume, who trained on building his powers as a nin-dog and stamina.

Natsume were killed then by a shinobi called Kaito who also defeated Hakoden and used a genjutsu on him that made him feel the true pain but unfortunately he was found to be of the uchiha clan and the genjutsu failed to affect him and he then ran away.

Hakoden is now living in the Ice village, where he finds himself more like a normal person among the citizens.
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Battles

Won: none
Lost:none

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I don't think this would work, you'd either have to be souma no kou and just from Yukigakure or just Hakoden and from haku clan
 

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Seriously dude.... Ice+ half beast half human + suoma no ko+ immortality.....
its not happening..
It got no chance of getting approved.. Putting as many abilities into one bio decreases its chance of getting approved.
 
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Stop make so Much bio's. Let Someone help you to make a Bio and then if it is approved KEEP IT.
yeah like i did for you, you are such an epic failure, am disappointed :| .

Seriously dude.... Ice+ half beast half human + suoma no ko+ immortality.....
its not happening... declined
It got no chance of getting approved.. Putting as many abilities into one bio decreases its chance of getting approved.
Ice+ half beast half human + suoma no ko+ immortality

i don't remember that half beast is restricted and i can't say that my beast protect me or soething so its not oped, i mean there is really animal bios and its not restricted either, and immortality is not that great thing, i just like it.

U can not have two clans take out the inuzuka stuff. if u wanna have an ice bio
There is NO Inzuka stuff in this bio as i made that clear up there, if you ever see me using any of there jutsus plz ban me from rp for ever because i promise that i wont, its just an animal follower and the third hokage made it clear that there is so many ninjas that have animals to help them and the Inuzuka clan is one of them but am not in them, back in the kiba vs naruto battle. and its allowed in ninja exams, i think thats enough
if am wrong plz tell me why.

@Sonic sama:
This Bio doesn't use suoma no ko O_O, and he didn't get a shit from being in the hot water village.
 

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yeah like i did for you, you are such an epic failure, am disappointed :| .



Ice+ half beast half human + suoma no ko+ immortality

i don't remember that half beast is restricted and i can't say that my beast protect me or soething so its not oped, i mean there is really animal bios and its not restricted either, and immortality is not that great thing, i just like it.



There is NO Inzuka stuff in this bio as i made that clear up there, if you ever see me using any of there jutsus plz ban me from rp for ever because i promise that i wont, its just an animal follower and the third hokage made it clear that there is so many ninjas that have animals to help them and the Inuzuka clan is one of them but am not in them, back in the kiba vs naruto battle. and its allowed in ninja exams, i think thats enough
if am wrong plz tell me why.

@Sonic sama:
This Bio doesn't use suoma no ko O_O, and he didn't get a shit from being in the hot water village.
They are not restricted, but when you put em all in one bio, its restricted...
Its common sense, only 1 special ability or KG in one bio.
 

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yeah like i did for you, you are such an epic failure, am disappointed :| .



Ice+ half beast half human + suoma no ko+ immortality

i don't remember that half beast is restricted and i can't say that my beast protect me or soething so its not oped, i mean there is really animal bios and its not restricted either, and immortality is not that great thing, i just like it.



There is NO Inzuka stuff in this bio as i made that clear up there, if you ever see me using any of there jutsus plz ban me from rp for ever because i promise that i wont, its just an animal follower and the third hokage made it clear that there is so many ninjas that have animals to help them and the Inuzuka clan is one of them but am not in them, back in the kiba vs naruto battle. and its allowed in ninja exams, i think thats enough
if am wrong plz tell me why.

@Sonic sama:
This Bio doesn't use suoma no ko O_O, and he didn't get a shit from being in the hot water village.
Only hidan can be immortal, Take out the animals, only 1 KG, Prove to me where in the h3ll does anybody else carry around a beast thats not in the inuzuka clan. If you cant just follow the instructions given then im declining the bio
 

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They are not restricted, but when you put em all in one bio, its restricted...
Its common sense, only 1 special ability or KG in one bio.
Yea, but its not a special ability that seriously counts, like sword user.

it doesn't use any dog jutsus at all.

Only hidan can be immortal, Take out the animals, only 1 KG, Prove to me where in the h3ll does anybody else carry around a beast thats not in the inuzuka clan. If you cant just follow the instructions given then im declining the bio
ok am removing the immortality part, even thought kakuzu and madara"ok madara doesn't count" are immortal. but its more like walking with your brother and fight with him but without merging bodies ...etc. like having a car to ride.
if you still don't accept then i will edit it tomorrow.
 

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Yea, but its not a special ability that seriously counts, like sword user.

it doesn't use any dog jutsus at all.



ok am removing the immortality part, even thought kakuzu and madara"ok madara doesn't count" are immortal. but its more like walking with your brother and fight with him but without merging bodies ...etc. like having a car to ride.
if you still don't accept then i will edit it tomorrow.
Like having a car to ride O_O
I'mma make a mafia gang bio, with an armored battle tank :D
 

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Like having a car to ride O_O
I'mma make a mafia gang bio, with an armored battle tank :D
So that was suppose to be funny i guess :|

stop spamming you are a mod damn it, and I accept that I must edit it or do soemthing so wait.
moreover, Natsume is the name of character in an anime I am watching, look at my avatar and you can see him, next to the cat which is named Madara xd "really its name is Madara"
 
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.....no comment. First off, insulting MODs always come to bad consequences since after all, they ARE mods for a reason...I don't think the admins just threw random people into positions.
Immortality + more than one KG = OPed.

Simple summary. Where is the fun in Rping nowadays? Just freakin make a bio for your favorite character or something...don't make this some power-hogging society.
 

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.....no comment. First off, insulting MODs always come to bad consequences since after all, they ARE mods for a reason...I don't think the admins just threw random people into positions.
Immortality + more than one KG = OPed.

Simple summary. Where is the fun in Rping nowadays? Just freakin make a bio for your favorite character or something...don't make this some power-hogging society.
No i didn't insult any mod, Mugi uses bones so he is a bonehead and we both have agreed in that.
and am removing Natsume >.<
 

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No i didn't insult any mod, Mugi uses bones so he is a bonehead and we both have agreed in that.
and am removing Natsume >.<
*sigh* I will look forward to the day when people decide to use proper grammar and accurate spelling...forums or not.

Eh well, on second look, your bio does seem Ice/Inuzuka...though I'm wondering how you would be able to utilize your wolf in battle...though I suppose you're removing it. Making it an ice bio?

And weaponry...be more specific?

Speed doesn't matter. It's all about strategy and how you execute moves on time.
 

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*sigh* I will look forward to the day when people decide to use proper grammar and accurate spelling...forums or not.

Eh well, on second look, your bio does seem Ice/Inuzuka...though I'm wondering how you would be able to utilize your wolf in battle...though I suppose you're removing it. Making it an ice bio?

And weaponry...be more specific?

Speed doesn't matter. It's all about strategy and how you execute moves on time.
*sigh* keep looking.

and it was not ****ing Inuzuka because it couldn't use any of there jutsus.

I will edit it soon, am just busy now.
 
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