Growing Apart

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This is a modified poem I wrote for my friend. Him and I grew apart and this is what came out of it...
I do not take this poem as completly mine since I did have help writing it but I hope you find the message the same as I did
I remember how it used to be
when nothing else matter but you and me
the rp, the friendship, and the fun.

I remember when you said how happy I made you
and you really meant it….. till now
but it was just all a lie.

I miss those days when you'd just to say "hi"
or "how are you"...the days it was so hard
just to say good-bye for a while.

I remember how wonderful it felt the first time
we met with all the joy in the world
I never thought there would be an end.

I miss the old you- and the old me
The old us that could just sit and talk for hours
and never run out of things to say.

I remember when time simply stood still-
when we would just talk truthfully
I wanted it to be...forever.

I miss us as I remember how it used to be...
when nothing else matter but you and me.
 

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Good poem. I can relate to this a lot.
 

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Holy crap your poem, avatar, and sig are all depressing as hell. But the poem was very well written, it's something we can all relate to, slowly loosing touch with a friend you care about.
 

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Pretty good
Thank you :)
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Good poem. I can relate to this a lot.

Very good.
Thank you both :)
Holy crap your poem, avatar, and sig are all depressing as hell. But the poem was very well written, it's something we can all relate to, slowly loosing touch with a friend you care about.
Thank you and sorry I am just going through a rough patch in life :)
 

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this is really good and as what the others have said, a lot of people can relate to this. i for one is among them.
keep it up :ice:
 

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I miss those days when you'd just to say "hi" ....Huh? xd

when we would just talk truthfully.... Idk the bold doesn't sound right.

Anyways good job, nobody likes to grow apart from people, but it's life. It's not about losing a friend; but walking along your path making new friends. ^_^ It's a journey, but never forget the experience and time you shared with people. :p
 

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I love the poem, It shows how you feel on missing your friendand that you want him to be back so that you both can have that friendship you both had. I do hope he sees your poem as well dave.
 

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Such a nice peom you have there, David ^^
And, hey, hey, it's a new year, my friend! Change those DPs to something cheerful :hug:
I hope you smiled tonight ^^ you look awesome when you do :) HAPPY NEW YEAR, bro :overjoy:
 
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