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Gray Paradigim
Speak chains around me, and I'll believe they're in use
bound in steel to give me an excuse
I love these chains so the real me don't breakthrough
So when I fall you can't blame me when I blame you
Love life living every day with nothing left until i'm dead to rights
red and blue lights make purple faces at night
with a gasp after a flash and new news to write
Don't tell me this issue ain't black and white.
Tell your son I'm his enemy he'll believe your gun.
passed down from a generation and weights that scale to tons
fall heavy on the heart of the new black widow
so I do the same and preach the hate you bestow
so the children lose innocence over things they never should've known
seeds you plant are the fruit that grow
so an eye for an eye bears bloody nectar but we can't get enough
I must admit I'm quite addicted...
I hate you...but its your fault
I hate people like you...and its your fault
faults are beneath the surface and I can taste
the last days of the next generation I create
flip a coin and choose death or a stripped window
and zebra printed pajamas so you know I'm from Africa
Real freedom is not outside a cell
outside a cycle, and system that burns beautiful people in a real world hell
you only vote republican because#racism....yeah they got problems
but how wrong are they when I don't even know why I voted Obama
I'm not perfect....you're not perfect
but guns, badges, and slander never made it worth it
I'd sooner bury myself and sacrifice me
then be a slave to a cycle of the death of we.

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No 3D between two one dimensional people
I got choices chosen by others just below the heavens
not stars but stars and stripes that keep me corrected
I ask you...what is freedom?





 
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Gray Paradigim
Speak chains around me, and I'll believe they're in use
bound in steel to give me an excuse
I love these chains so the real me don't breakthrough
So when I fall you can't blame me when I blame you
Love life living every day with nothing left until i'm dead to rights
red and blue lights make purple faces at night
with a gasp after a flash and new news to write
Don't tell me this issue ain't black and white.
Tell your son I'm his enemy he'll believe your gun.
passed down from a generation and weights that scale to tons
fall heavy on the heart of the new black widow
so I do the same and preach the hate you bestow
so the children lose innocence over things they never should've known
seeds you plant are the fruit that grow
so an eye for an eye bears bloody nectar but we can't get enough
I must admit I'm quite addicted...
I hate you...but its your fault
I hate people like you...and its your fault
faults are beneath the surface and I can taste
the last days of the next generation I create
flip a coin and choose death or a stripped window
and zebra printed pajamas so you know I'm from Africa
Real freedom is not outside a cell
outside a cycle, and system that burns beautiful people in a real world hell
you only vote republican because#racism....yeah they got problems
but how wrong are they when I don't even know why I voted Obama
I'm not perfect....you're not perfect
but guns, badges, and slander never made it worth it
I'd sooner bury myself and sacrifice me
then be a slave to a cycle of the death of we.

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No 3D between two one dimensional people
I got choices chosen by others just below the heavens
not stars but stars and stripes that keep me corrected
I ask you...what is freedom?





god, that just made me feel good! I'm showing this around to people. Hell, I'm printing this. Keep doing what you do
 
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god, that just made me feel good! I'm showing this around to people. Hell, I'm printing this. Keep doing what you do
Glad that something I wrote could influence someone in a postive way man! ^^ and that's gotta be one of the highest praise I ever got for one of my poems. I really appreciate and feel humbled by that. I really see good poems here and enjoy the messages they send. Not to mention the feeling I get when I write down my own thoughts that might touch others. Its a great feeling. I don't know many that come around this section but I think more should check it out.
 
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Glad that something I wrote could influence someone in a postive way man! ^^ and that's gotta be one of the highest praise I ever got for one of my poems. I really appreciate and feel humbled by that. I really see good poems here and enjoy the messages they send. Not to mention the feeling I get when I write down my own thoughts that might touch others. Its a great feeling. I don't know many that come around this section but I think more should check it out.
Man I just read this again. It's genius. It's not difficult to understand to not to easy for certain people who well, wouldn't understand it. But this poem is true. I think you should get this seen by a lot of people. I mean if this is what you just do in your free time I'd love to see what you do when you try your hardest and put your all into it. But I feel this poem. I feel it
 

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Man I just read this again. It's genius. It's not difficult to understand to not to easy for certain people who well, wouldn't understand it. But this poem is true. I think you should get this seen by a lot of people. I mean if this is what you just do in your free time I'd love to see what you do when you try your hardest and put your all into it. But I feel this poem. I feel it
Again bro thanks man. I'm naturally a humble unselfish person so I really appreciate those comments man. I'll take you up on that offer and try and get this seen by more people. I'm not going to spam your profile LOL, but I will link some of my past stuff on my profile so if you want you can check out my past poems. Most of them are all done on the spot once I get some inspiration as I freestyle a bit in RL and was even apart of some on base cyphers, so I kinda just put down what I'm feeling in the moment then make a few edits without compromising the raw integrity of what I wrote. I really liked this one because of the reasons you said. I had a few complicated ones in the past but I think the best poems are the ones that are not so simple that its distasteful to an intellect or average person, but no so complicated that your message is skewered. I'm kinda expired to get to work now on more stuff now. xD
 

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Again bro thanks man. I'm naturally a humble unselfish person so I really appreciate those comments man. I'll take you up on that offer and try and get this seen by more people. I'm not going to spam your profile LOL, but I will link some of my past stuff on my profile so if you want you can check out my past poems. Most of them are all done on the spot once I get some inspiration as I freestyle a bit in RL and was even apart of some on base cyphers, so I kinda just put down what I'm feeling in the moment then make a few edits without compromising the raw integrity of what I wrote. I really liked this one because of the reasons you said. I had a few complicated ones in the past but I think the best poems are the ones that are not so simple that its distasteful to an intellect or average person, but no so complicated that your message is skewered. I'm kinda expired to get to work now on more stuff now. xD
Yeah only a humble person could write poems that good. I'll check out your page and look at the other poems
 
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