Granite learns how burn and then smolder (fire training)

[Granite]

Oh sorry your clone would collapse from the amount of heat generated by my jutsu... Is that better?-

 

[Shinta]

Better, try to keep a decent level of detail in all your replies please. It will help you out greatly in the battle to come.

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( Katon: Shōkasou ) - Fire Release: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a small short flame at the opponent. This flame is capable of making the target collapse due to the heat of the technique. This technique requires no handseals.

Snake →

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Ram →

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Monkey →

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Boar →

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Horse →

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Tiger

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Take a deep breathe of air and mix it with you katon chakra as you perform the nake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger hand seals, followed by making a ring with your thumb and index finger. As you form the ring with your fingers I want you to exhale all of your breathe mixed with the fire chakra and then shape it into a large, densely packed ball of fire. Use it on my clone to burn him to cinders.

 

[Granite]

Alright senpai- I inhale while mixing it with chakra- the I preform the snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger hand seal then I make a ring with my Thumb and index finger then exhale the breath mixed with chakra then I form it into a large dense ball of flames- it send it to your clone- it envelopes your clone when it dissipates all that is left is a burnt crisp- was that descriptive enough-

 

[Shinta]

Much better xd

I'm sure you know who uses this jutsu the most in the series xd

Could you tell me a potential problem with it? It has to do with the size of the ball.

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( Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally.

 

[Granite]

If you make the ball too large then it might burn you as well... Is that it?-

 

[Shinta]

Since the fire ball is pretty large it may obscure your sight of your opponent, leaving you unaware of their counter until if break through the fire ball. Or they sprout up from the ground and attack you from behind.

Moving on.

Take out a lighter and ignite the flame as you normally would, then through it on the ground in front of you and use your fire chakra to suddenly increase the size of the flames to create a wall of fire in front of you.

This jutsu poses the same issue as the previous one in regards to your sight on the opponent.

On another note, how could you use this offensively and defensively? Think of combinations with other elements for best results.

 

[Granite]

Alright -pulls out a lighter light it throws it on the ground- I focus my chakra on the flame enlarging it into a wall- ok this jutsu could be used defensively as a protection. But if you time it right your enemy could be the one engulfed in flames-

 

[Shinta]

It also works well to combo with other elements. You need to start thinking about how fire works in relation to the other elements xd

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( Katon: Kimuchi Amura ) - Fire Release: Wall of Flames
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first throws out a lighter that has an open flame.The user the turns the flame into a wall of fire used for protection or to burn small objects thrown towards him. This jutsu can be used with Hurricane Fist to create a combo jutsu.

Tiger

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I want you to gather your fire chakra and release it along the ground as you perform the tiger hand seal, then manipulate the fire chakra to create a stream of fire that races along the ground to surround my clone in a thin line of fire. Then cause it to race inwards from this circle directly at my clone to attack him.

Tell my the function of the two parts of this move, also tell me the two parts of this move?

 

[Granite]

Ok Senpai- I gather my chakra and while I realease it I preform the tiger hand seal- I manipulate it into a thin line encircling your clone it moves in then scorches your clone- the first part is changing the amount of fire the second part I making it encircle the clone the function of the two parts ar ment to trap the opponent.. Is that right

 

[Shinta]

On the right track, the first part it meant to trap your opponent like you said and then the second part it where the fire then shoots inwards to burn them. It is important to be able to zone (control where they move) your opponents so that you can gain the most effect out of your attacks.

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( Katon: Hibashiri ) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra, the user will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with a suitable wind technique to release a massive inferno.

Attack a long cord to one of your kunais and throw it at the tree just behind my clone. The cord should run close enough to him that he could pluck it without having to reach too far for it.

Snake

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Dragon

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Rabbit

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Tiger

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Now gather your fire chakra into your lungs while you perform the Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger hand seals, then blow a stream of fire onto the cord you threw earlier and use your chakra to direct the fire all the way along the cord. This should send the fire racing along the cord at my clone and burn him if he is not quick enough and also incinerate the tree the kunai is in.

This is a very useful jutsu as you can set up a up to three cords (You'll have to use this jutsu three times in one move then) to create a large attack to trap your opponent in.

 

[Granite]

Alright!- throws a kunai with a long cord attached in the tree nearest to the clone so he can pluck it- he gather chakra in his lungs and performs Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger hand seals- Then I blow a stream of fire on the cord and direct it throught the cord burning the tree and your clone- How was that?

(sorry for my delayed reply)

 

[Shinta]

Don't worry about the delay, I was just wondering if you were ever coming back! xd

Very good indeed.

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( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Simply perform one hand seal as you inhale a deep breath whilst gathering your Katon chakra, then release a stream of flames out at my clone, making the flames focused enough to burn him to ashes!

 

[Granite]

Okay Senpai!- gathers chakra and then performs the hand seal he then proceeds to release a stream of flames that envelop and incinerate your clone- how did I do-

 

[Shinta]

Your flames aren't focused enough. Use your katon chakra to force the flames to travel in a thin stream, slowly opening up to encompass my clones upper body.

 

[Granite]

Okay-gathers chakra and then performs the hand seal he then proceeds to release a thin stream of flames that slowly open up to envelop and incinerate your clons upper body- better

 

[Shinta]

Well, not really... Fire doesn't necessarily incinerate things on contact and as such, to achieve the desired effect, you have to manipulate the fire chakra to make it hotter... Not once have you mentioned any form of fire chakra manipulation.

I want you to always think about how you manipulate your chakra to achieve the various results, this will help you to RP better.

 

[Granite]

Okay I will be more precise this time-gathers fire chakra and then performs the hand seal he then proceeds to manipulate it to make it very hot and turn it into a thin stream of flames that he manipulates again for it to slowly open up to envelop your clons upper body and badly burn it- is this what your looking for... Or is it incorrect?

 

[Shinta]

Better.

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( Katon: Karyūdan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user exhales a flame breath from their mouth after making one handseal. This technique can be used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the projectiles fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

I want you to perform the Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger hand signs as you gather your fire chakra into your chest. I then want you to shoot a volley of five small fireballs at the same time you secretly throw a shuriken into each one of them for an extra bit of damage. Control there flight ever so slightly so that my clone cannot avoid them, do this by manipulating the fire chakra within the shuriken.

 

[Granite]

Alright thank you and I apologize for the late reply..- gathers fire chakra into his chest and it builds then he preforms the Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger hand seals after this I shoot from my mouth five small fireballs and secretly I throw one shuriken into each one of them after this I manipulate my fire chakra within the shuriken and I make it so you clone cannot avoid them three land in the chest and two in the head- Is that more what you are looking for-

 

[Shinta]

Very good response. You have nothing to apologise for so no worries. ^^

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( Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user first performs six hand seals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger and they create a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Now release a blast of fire from your mouth, making it travel through the air where it then wraps around my clone, burning him to ashes.