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This is a short story about Lee and Gai VS Bee and A (Raikage) Have fun :)

Once upon a time in a land called Konoha, there lived a sensai named Might Guy, known as Guy. Guy was known throughout Konoha as the best Taijutsu user and was able to open the legendary 8 gates. He had bushy eyebrows and stood tall wearing green clothing. Guy also had a good taijutsu student named Rock Lee. They both were like brothers. Lee is younger, his hairstyle is the same as Guy's (Mushroom hairstyle) he also wore the same clothes, almost as Guy's. Lee works hard and he never disagrees to his teacher. Lee was also known to be able to open the 8 gates, but he'd never gone that far.
It was a Saturday evening and they both wanted to go out of town to go train. They ran 9 miles out of town and reached a land called Kumogakure, the cloud village. "Guy sensai where are we?" asked Lee. "We are in Cloud Village Kumogakure, this is where Raikage lives." replied Guy.(TIME SETTING: Right now Kumogakure just got bombed and Raikage/B are trying to see who did it) "Oh, isn't Raikage known to be fast just like Minato?" ask Lee. "Yes Lee, Raikages are the fastest human beings living, but Minato was faster. I think we should get out of here lets go." said Guy. "Yes Guy sensai!"
"Hold up, where do you think you're going!" As Guy and Lee turns around they see 4th Raikage (A) mugging them. "Oh we were just leaving Raikage xD." said Guy. "Why are you here in the first place!" yelled Raikage. "Sorry, we were jogging and we ended up here, we'll leave." Guy said. "No ! fools ya fools, you aint gonna go anywhere, because you made my people tear!" yelled B. "We are innocent we havent done anything!" yelled Lee. "SHUT THE FAWK UP LIL BIATCH." yelled A. "What did you just say ....?" asked Guy. "shut the fawk up lil biatch." replied A. "Raikage, we came here innocent we havent done a single thing. Why are you guys acting like we've done something wrong here, we are peaceful people." said Guy. "FOOLS YA FOOLS ! STOP TRYING TO LIE, OR ELSE YA GONNA DIE!" yelled B.

CHAPTER 2.

B takes out his swords and readies to fight. "Lee back away and dont fight, let me handle this." whispered Guy. "No Guy sensai i cant let you fight alone 2v1!" said Lee. "Dont worry, go back to Konoha and go tell Naruto to come, thats your duty!" yelled Guy. "As you say Guy sensai!" So as Lee runs off A also runs and intercepts Lee's way. "Where the fawkery do you think you're going lil biaatch?" asked A. "Please sir, i didn't do anything get out of my way!" yelled Lee. "If you want to leave you gotta get through me first." said A. DYNAMIC ENTRYYYYY !!!!!!!!!! Guy hits A's face! "ARRRGGHHH!!!!" as A falls down. "FOOL! YA FOOL!" B comes running with his swords and starts to hit Guy. Guy dodges and dodges, he struggles to strike. "YOU DID NOT JUST HIT MY BROTHAA, MOTHA FUCCCKAAA!" yells B. He swings his sword and it slashes Guy's knee. "If you guys want to fight, bring it on!" yelled Guy. Guy keeps dodging and dodging and he swung his nun chucks. Misses. Swings again, B ducks. Jumps up into the air and lands a couple feet away from B. Guy acts like hes sitting on a horse. "AWWWRRGGHHHHHH!!!!" he screams. (IN LEE'S MIND) "He's opening the gates!" ... to be continued.


I wont continue if it's boring. I wouldnt want to bore you guys to death, tell me what you guys think so far? Should i continue it?
 

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This should be in fanfiction i believe .
 

Guardian of the Rain

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Lol sorry but, this needs A LOT of work. Trust me, I'm a decent FF writer.
 

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Sorry! i didnt know :eek:

lol you dont have to say sorry to me . Im not one of those Internet thugs who get a rush over this stuff... I was just telling you so in the future nobody else will have to :D
 

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i cant see what he's saying cuz i kinda blocked him cuz that sig....tell me when he changes it...:p
 

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lol you dont have to say sorry to me . Im not one of those Internet thugs who get a rush over this stuff... I was just telling you so in the future nobody else will have to :D

haha okay, thanks for telling me :)
 

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just because you're scared of my picture doesn't give you the right to report me and get me banned. :sy:

true that true that....

but still dude your sig gives me nightmares.....

also you have a interesting avatar.
 
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