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not bad for a begginer,

you need to work on blend and lighting :) - right now it looks like some renders pasted into a bg, try and make it so it looks like the render is blended with the signature.
Also using 2 renders as a begginer is very hard but if your going to do it then i suggest you make the lighting on them the same so u can have one light source rather than trying to make em both fit awkwardly.

To me the signature lacks flow, try and give the sig a direction or movement to it, the two renders work in contradicting ways - one coming forward and the other moving to the side.

Lastly - colour and background effects need some work - try using a lot of different images to create a bg rather than one stock, lso let the colours fit the render a bit more as it looks a bit too green for my liking :)

Overall, a nice try but work on these things ^^
 
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not bad for a begginer,

you need to work on blend and lighting :) - right now it looks like some renders pasted into a bg, try and make it so it looks like the render is blended with the signature.
Also using 2 renders as a begginer is very hard but if your going to do it then i suggest you make the lighting on them the same so u can have one light source rather than trying to make em both fit awkwardly.

To me the signature lacks flow, try and give the sig a direction or movement to it, the two renders work in contradicting ways - one coming forward and the other moving to the side.

Lastly - colour and background effects need some work - try using a lot of different images to create a bg rather than one stock, lso let the colours fit the render a bit more as it looks a bit too green for my liking :)

Overall, a nice try but work on these things ^^
thanks for the advice :D il try my best next time ^^
 
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