[Predictions] god among men

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Naruto lies helpless on the ground. Minato quickly arrives as the first at his side.

MINATO: My son , This is all my fault

The other kage quickly arrive at his side including Sakura

sarutobi: Dont overwealm yourself he will be fine he is of Uzumaki bloodline he will just need some healing, right?

tsunade : Actually the Uzumaki were good carriers of the bijuu for reason of bearing strong seals however only a few were known to have survived extraction also his bloodline has been diluted and he will almost certainly die unless we can think of something quickly.

Minatos eyes open wide with the look of astonishment. He begins to make hand seals faster than any shinobi ever noted.
his hand open his fingers of one hand press against his chest then turn counterclockwise. The seal within minato ignites a brilliant light as the seal is now visable on his chest.

meanwhile sasuke attacks madara.his sword makes astonishing display every movement a display of perfection not an once of energy wasted as every attack becomes a fluid motion into the next, however madara dodges all. Madara eventually strikes back with one attack an open palm to sasukes chest. Sasuke is sent sliding across the battlefield gasping for breath

MADARA: Its apparant your skills exceed that of obito but i can sense your holding back young uchiha that will only make your death arrive sooner if you want to stop me you mustnt play games.

Sasuke attacks again and is quickly sent across the battlefield again this time crashing to his knees.

KARIN: Are you ok sasuke

SASUKE: This isnt working but Ive got an idea

BLACK ZETZU: Why dont you help your student Kakashi,Do you not care if he dies,are you not concerned

OBITO: Dont listen to him Kakashi quickly use kamui on my rinnegan destroy it

Kakashi: That would kill you

OBITO: Im already dead,your only delaying the inevitable, if Madara retrieves it knoone will survive DO IT THEN GO SAVE NARUTO

Kakashi uses kamui and it backlashes soon his eyes begin to bleed perfusely then kakashi collapses.

Kakashi: my eye i can barely see ehh!

black zetzu removes the rinnegan and melts off of obito.
obito swipes at black zetzu as he falls to the ground.
zetzu disolves into the soil
obito struggles to arrive to kakashi
upon arrival obito quickly inspects kakashis eyes

OBITO: your sharingan is intact however your other eye was unable to withstand the jutsus backlash

sasuke stands with juugo and orochimaru

SASUKE: DO IT!! Im ready

Oro bites sasuke reveiling his cursemark then sasuke uses his sword to cut connecting the punctures

SASUKE: JUUGO!!

Juugo pumps his chakra into sasukes cut
juugo is soon a child again
and sasuke is engulfed in marking from his cursemark

SASUKE: now i can go further

sasuke rushes to madara
with his sword and chidori running through it striking with lightining precision and move after move until madara kicks sasukes chest but in counter sasukes sword cuts through the face on madaras chest .

madara: it appears youve a few tricks up your sleeve ,young uchiha .Dont forget ive still a few up mine.

madara becomes covered in flames as his sasanoo constructs around him .the kages faces show fear as the memories unfold within each of their minds.the sasanoo perfects as sasuke constructs his sasanoo .sasukes stands just a few feet shy of the height madaras their swords clash and wind spews past all the shinobi knocking a few over.sasukes sasanoo strikes a massive blow demolishing one arm of madaras sasanoo.
black zetzu rises to madaras level within and hands him the second rinnegan.

madara: now it will be finished young uchiha

he puts the eye in its socket and with one blow sasukes sasanoo crashes to the ground .
sasukes coughs blood spews from his mouth sasanoo soon becomes warped as the cursemark pull back into sasuke they pull sasanoo in aswell but rather than go back to the origin of the cursemark they cover his face then move away and vanish his eyes open to reveal the red of his sharingan spinning and the white of his eyes now completley black .the spinning spread out as it spirals his eyes close and reopen as rinnegan

sasuke rises to his feet with rinnegan
kakashi rises with two sharingan

kakashi: thank you my friend be at peace

naruto rises with kyubi cloak

they all stand facing madara

what will become of the battlefield
when it is full of god among men
 
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I liked it up until you gave Sasuke the Rinnegan and Kakashi, 2 sharigan.

Kakashi would die almost immediately if he had 2 sharingan, and Sasuke isn't able to awaken the Rinnegan because he doesn't have Senju DNA ( unless he somehow obtained when Oro bit him, even then he wouldn't be able to awaken it right away ).

Other than that, I liked it, especially how you put Madara and Sasuke against each other.
 

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I liked it up until you gave Sasuke the Rinnegan and Kakashi, 2 sharigan.

Kakashi would die almost immediately if he had 2 sharingan, and Sasuke isn't able to awaken the Rinnegan because he doesn't have Senju DNA ( unless he somehow obtained when Oro bit him, even then he wouldn't be able to awaken it right away ).

Other than that, I liked it, especially how you put Madara and Sasuke against each other.
I was thinking the same thing with kakashi when writing but I was like screw it he's survived over exhorting that eye through this whole war arc don't get me wrong he's one of my favorite char but based on what we knew about overuse of sharingan he should have died a long time ago so why not right.
 

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I liked it up until you gave Sasuke the Rinnegan and Kakashi, 2 sharigan.

Kakashi would die almost immediately if he had 2 sharingan, and Sasuke isn't able to awaken the Rinnegan because he doesn't have Senju DNA ( unless he somehow obtained when Oro bit him, even then he wouldn't be able to awaken it right away ).

Other than that, I liked it, especially how you put Madara and Sasuke against each other.
as for sasuke he needs a power up to match naruto and I was giving him rinni based on chakra I figured it would suffice as a reasonable explanation. I was debating between that and making sasuke the great grandson of madara yet chose to dispose of the latter but who knows what kishi will really do lol.
 
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