[Other] Glimpses of the past

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Kishi Uzumaki

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I caught a glimpse of the past ,
while I'm going through changes of life .
i remembered how my life was in the past ,
walking through burning desert ,
hoping for rain drops to fall ,
but it never fell till i came to the end
-of the desert and i fell on my knees....

now life's changing in every way ,
but still i can see glimpses of the past .
standing in middle of harsh winds ,
like a tree that face winds that's vast ,
pain and sorrows that binds ,
gaps of good times and bad ,
although i always felt sad ,
i can't blame life because i still stands....

now I'm strong enough to face ,
anything life throw at me ,
like a huge rock in middle of a river ,
that faces currents of river one after another ,
I'll never forget those hardships ,
because it gave me strength i need ,
to stand in anything that's harsh ,
those glimpses of the past .

Enjoy guys !
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OWanime

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The imagery is there and its pretty memorable so I said it was good xd
 

Reraru

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Nice...dattebayo!
 
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