Give me a knife

[izinagi54]

i want to tear myself asunder
the clouds will thunder from my screams
its the darkest of dreams
forever i will sleep

my love had died
like a dove with clpped wings
never free to fly again
just to live life to die
my desire is to die

my heart shredded
my soul turned to coal
forever i will collide
with god and love

damn all the divines
below and above
for they have destroyed my love
tortured and with a glove
rip out my entrails to the sky above

i want hell and too die
with my soul dark as coal
forever i will be alone

i scream out in pain

-chris

 

[shelma]

There are spelling mistakes in a few places but the theme is gud.
And u seem to love doves...

 

[uzumaki antonia]

It is a really good poem.