[Raiton] Getting even with lightening element

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(Raiton No Jutsu) - Lightning Technique
Rank: D
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Small static bolts for attack and defense.

Simply focus your lightning chakra throughout your body, and release small bolts of electricity.

-Throws a rock at you-

*i mould my chakra and focus it through out my body and manupulate it into bolts of lightening and shoots it at the rocks, the rocks shatters in to piece which are scattered in different directions*

hows that senpai?
 

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*i mould my chakra and focus it through out my body and manupulate it into bolts of lightening and shoots it at the rocks, the rocks shatters in to piece which are scattered in different directions*

hows that senpai?

A good start. However, add a bit more description on what you do. Describe more the molding, and shaping of the chakra as it is released.
 

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A good start. However, add a bit more description on what you do. Describe more the molding, and shaping of the chakra as it is released.

*i mould my lightening chakra accumulate it within my body and channel it through out my body, i could feel the energy and manupulate it into bolts of lightening and shoots it at the rocks, the rocks shatters in to piece which are scattered in different directions*
 

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*i mould my lightening chakra accumulate it within my body and channel it through out my body, i could feel the energy and manupulate it into bolts of lightening and shoots it at the rocks, the rocks shatters in to piece which are scattered in different directions*

Nice job. ^_^

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Focus your lightning chakra, and then slam a hand down on the ground. Release the chakra, and direct the lightning through the ground to shock my clone's feet.

-Creates clone-
 

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*i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body and concentrate to my hand region and slam my hand on the ground then release the concentrated chakra, i direct the lightening through the ground towards your clone. The lightening shocks the clone and sends him flings it, it lands at a short distance from its initial position and the clone disappears with a "puff" sound.

How's that sempai?
 

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*i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body and concentrate to my hand region and slam my hand on the ground then release the concentrated chakra, i direct the lightening through the ground towards your clone. The lightening shocks the clone and sends him flings it, it lands at a short distance from its initial position and the clone disappears with a "puff" sound.

How's that sempai?

Good description!

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Focus your raiton chakra and then release it outwards. Then, form the chakra onto the edges of your skin. This will form a weak electric field that will shield you from minor attacks.

-A small earth pillar rises in front of you and aims for your stomach-
 

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Good description!

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Focus your raiton chakra and then release it outwards. Then, form the chakra onto the edges of your skin. This will form a weak electric field that will shield you from minor attacks.

-A small earth pillar rises in front of you and aims for your stomach-

*as the pillar advances, i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it to form an electric sheild that covers my body, as the pillar is just about to hit me, it is shattered into pieces by the sheild, then i release my chakra and the sheild disappears*

how's that sempai?
 

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*as the pillar advances, i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it to form an electric sheild that covers my body, as the pillar is just about to hit me, it is shattered into pieces by the sheild, then i release my chakra and the sheild disappears*

how's that sempai?

You're doing great. ^_^

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Same as above, create an electric field that will surround your body using the same process. When my clone comes near this time, channel more chakra into the shield, explode it, throwing him back a little.

-Creates clone-
 

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You're doing great. ^_^

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Same as above, create an electric field that will surround your body using the same process. When my clone comes near this time, channel more chakra into the shield, explode it, throwing him back a little.

-Creates clone-


As your clone comes close to me, i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it to form an electric sheild that covers my body,then i channel more chakra into the sheild and explode the sheild, the explosion pushes the clone far backwards and it collides with a wall and vanished with a 'puff' sound.*
 

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You're doing great. ^_^

Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Same as above, create an electric field that will surround your body using the same process. When my clone comes near this time, channel more chakra into the shield, explode it, throwing him back a little.

-Creates clone-


As your clone comes close to me, i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it to form an electric sheild that covers my body,then i channel more chakra into the sheild and explode the sheild, the explosion pushes the clone far backwards and it collides with a wall and vanished with a 'puff' sound.*
 

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As your clone comes close to me, i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it to form an electric sheild that covers my body,then i channel more chakra into the sheild and explode the sheild, the explosion pushes the clone far backwards and it collides with a wall and vanished with a 'puff' sound.*

Great!

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

Focus your chakra, and then change your chakra into lightning as you release it forward. Manipulate the released chakra into a wave of small lightning bolts that you shoot at my clone.

-Creates clone-
 

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Great!

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

Focus your chakra, and then change your chakra into lightning as you release it forward. Manipulate the released chakra into a wave of small lightning bolts that you shoot at my clone.

-Creates clone-

*i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it into a wave of small bolts of lightening and shoot it at your clone, your clone is pushed backwards with a blast as the small bolt hits it and burns through its cloth, it crashed to the ground and vanishes.*
 

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*i mould my chakra, accumulate it within my body, i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it into a wave of small bolts of lightening and shoot it at your clone, your clone is pushed backwards with a blast as the small bolt hits it and burns through its cloth, it crashed to the ground and vanishes.*

Great. D-ranks are finished. What I want you to do now, is act like we are having a battle. Defend from my attack appropriately, and then attack my clone in return. Ready? We are short range. Use only the lightning techniques we have learned.

My clone begins by creating a single spike of rock in front of you, angled towards your stomach to stab you.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target
 

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Great. D-ranks are finished. What I want you to do now, is act like we are having a battle. Defend from my attack appropriately, and then attack my clone in return. Ready? We are short range. Use only the lightning techniques we have learned.

My clone begins by creating a single spike of rock in front of you, angled towards your stomach to stab you.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target

*i channel my raiton chakra to my hand and slam my hand on the ground and release my lightening chakra directed towards the spike of rock, and the rock is shattered by the lightening.*
(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground torelease a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

*then i channel my chakra to my hand again and release my lightening chakra, i manipulate the released chakra into a wave of lightening bolt and shoot it at your clone.*

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent
 
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*i channel my raiton chakra to my hand and slam my hand on the ground and release my lightening chakra directed towards the spike of rock, and the rock is shattered by the lightening.*
(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground torelease a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

*then i channel my chakra to my hand again and release my lightening chakra, i manipulate the released chakra into a wave of lightening bolt and shoot it at your clone.*

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

Try a different technique for defending against the rock pillar. Slamming your hand onto the ground to destroy the spike would take too much time. Think defense.
 

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*i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it toform an electric sheild that covers my body, as the spike of rock is just about to hit me, it is shattered into pieces by the sheild.*

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

*then i channel my chakra to my hand again and release my lightening chakra, i manipulate the released chakra into a wave of lightening bolt and shoot it at your clone.*

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent
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*i focus the chakra throughout my body and release it outwards then manipulate it toform an electric sheild that covers my body, as the spike of rock is just about to hit me, it is shattered into pieces by the sheild.*

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

*then i channel my chakra to my hand again and release my lightening chakra, i manipulate the released chakra into a wave of lightening bolt and shoot it at your clone.*

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent

Nice, much much better. Correct usages. Shall we move on?
 

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Good. First up then..

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Focus your chakra into your hands, and then release a wave of electricity onto the ground from your hands. Make the lightning travel through the air, before hitting my clone. If you have learned any water techniques, use it in combination.

-Creates clone-
 

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Good. First up then..

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 ( 5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Focus your chakra into your hands, and then release a wave of electricity onto the ground from your hands. Make the lightning travel through the air, before hitting my clone. If you have learned any water techniques, use it in combination.

-Creates clone-

too bad i haven't learnt any water jutsu.
*i mould and focus my chakra to my hands and release a wave of electricity from my hands onto the ground, i direct it towards your clone, as it comes in close range with your clone i make it leave the ground and travel in air, the wave of electricity hits your clone shocks it and swept it off the ground, it crashed to the ground at a short distance from its original position and vanished.*
 
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