Get Back to Work

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Heres another poem i wrote a while back

Though my poems seem to work
People call me a dork
And say I should put down the fork
But I'll just smile at them and say ahem
Shouldn't you get back to work

Rate and comment im open to criticism tell me what you think.

 

[Zeref]

Not bad plus u aint no dork just keep doin wat u love 2 do,ima give u rep^

 

[Ryuzetsu]

FAILURE

Jokes, Nice job +rep

 

[ElementNami92]

I found it interesting Lol +Rep

 

[DARK BEAST ZANZA]

Not bad plus u aint no dork just keep doin wat u love 2 do,ima give u rep^

I found it interesting Lol +Rep

Thank you both ill have some of my better poems up in a little bit.

FAILURE

Jokes, Nice job +rep

Thanks but its kind of hard to see the im joking part if you make it white.