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if i haver raped before?
thats...well...i'm still a virgin miss. Sorry...couldn't help it.
Yup. I've Mastered the basic 5, Regular Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, and i'm being trained in Kaito's Taijutsu, Fuuinjutsu and Mokuton. I am also a sensei.
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-_-if i haver raped before?
Sorry...couldn't help it.
Sure you are. It's nice to have a vivid imagination
Anywho, let's begin!!!
What's the Byakugan?
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Sure you are. It's nice to have a vivid imagination
Anywho, let's begin!!!
What's the Byakugan?
you so mean...The byakugan is one of the 3 great dojutsu (eye techniques) known in Narutoverse. It a pupiless eye with a grey/white appearance that allows its user to see (like all other dojutsu) the flow of chakra and chakra. However, Byakugan has the best visual ability. It can see not only the chakra flow and chakra, but also the chakra circulatory system and even the tenketsu (points the that system were chakra can be expelled). Aside from that, the Byakugan can also enable the user to see through matter and in a spherical field of about 360º all around with the exception of a small blind spot above the...*insert number* cervical vertebrae and spanning backwards. This means a Byakugan user can see anything happening within the range of his "vision". Strong and high ranked members also seem to be able to possess some degree of telescopic vision sometimes up to several kms away. Like the sharingan (but not the Rinnegan in Nagato...as madara also had to do so) it requires it to be activated. Once activated, the blood vessels in the temporal regions and around the eyes bulge and the "pupil" becomes more visible. It has been seen that while not activated, the vision of a byakugan user is, albeit being a bit wider and detailed, similar to that of a normal ninja.
Byakugan is a bloodline limit genetically passed down in the Hyuga clan of konoha but it has been successfully implanted in other ninjas (like Ao) despite all of the efforts of the clan and the village to ensure it wasn't.
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The byakugan is one of the 3 great dojutsu (eye techniques) known in Narutoverse. It a pupiless eye with a grey/white appearance that allows its user to see (like all other dojutsu) the flow of chakra and chakra. However, Byakugan has the best visual ability. It can see not only the chakra flow and chakra, but also the chakra circulatory system and even the tenketsu (points the that system were chakra can be expelled). Aside from that, the Byakugan can also enable the user to see through matter and in a spherical field of about 360º all around with the exception of a small blind spot above the...*insert number* cervical vertebrae and spanning backwards. This means a Byakugan user can see anything happening within the range of his "vision". Strong and high ranked members also seem to be able to possess some degree of telescopic vision sometimes up to several kms away. Like the sharingan (but not the Rinnegan in Nagato...as madara also had to do so) it requires it to be activated. Once activated, the blood vessels in the temporal regions and around the eyes bulge and the "pupil" becomes more visible. It has been seen that while not activated, the vision of a byakugan user is, albeit being a bit wider and detailed, similar to that of a normal ninja.
Byakugan is a bloodline limit genetically passed down in the Hyuga clan of konoha but it has been successfully implanted in other ninjas (like Ao) despite all of the efforts of the clan and the village to ensure it wasn't.
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It's probably all wrong either way xd
Btw, about your telescopic vision, being a Sannin should allow you to see up to 5km or more. It's a nice thing to add to your bio.
Okay, Byakugan aside, with our eyes comes a very interesting style, the Gentle Fist. The Gentle fist is about using chakra along with our taijutsu, to deal internal damage to the internal organs directly, instead of external damage.
I'll give you Gentle Fist training in 3 phases. The first one is about using your palms, charging chakra through them to release chakra blasts as you strike your opponent.
This is nice to affect a wide area on the opponent's body, able to affect entire organs and systems, depending on the power you put in the blast. It is also great to cause spread out blunt damage, or create farther ranged attacks.
What I want you to do is charge chakra on your hand. Then I want you to quickly extend the arm, palming the air in front of you. Once in the limit, release all the chakra you stored on your hand, preforming a chakra blast from your palm. Retract the hand, and do the same with the other hand. Repeat until you feel good
Right!
*I charge chakra into my left palm while holding it slightly back and with the forearm retracted. I then push it forward with speed and release the chakra from the whole palm into a small "blast" in the form of an invisible (to others) small shockwave. As i did this movement i was actually also charging chakra into my right palm in the same manner and once my left palm was extended, i retract it while extending my right palm, doing the same procedure and releasing chakra from it once the forearm is fully extended.*
like that? ^^
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Yes, exactly
You can train your muscles, which will make them harder and shield your better from physical attacks. But you can't train the heart or other vital organs. What Gentle fist users do is strike the organs directly, by releasing chakra along with their thrusts. So basically what seems to be a simple touch from a Gentle Fist User, inside the body it's like the organs were punched or slapped directly. When you attack your opponent, your main objective is to strike the body in areas where the chakra can go to the organs.
So now I want you to create 2 different combos, where you disarm a dummy and strike it down. I want you to aim for actual organs and tell me what the damage wuld be if the strikes connected for real.
Right!Yes, exactly
You can train your muscles, which will make them harder and shield your better from physical attacks. But you can't train the heart or other vital organs. What Gentle fist users do is strike the organs directly, by releasing chakra along with their thrusts. So basically what seems to be a simple touch from a Gentle Fist User, inside the body it's like the organs were punched or slapped directly. When you attack your opponent, your main objective is to strike the body in areas where the chakra can go to the organs.
So now I want you to create 2 different combos, where you disarm a dummy and strike it down. I want you to aim for actual organs and tell me what the damage wuld be if the strikes connected for real.
*Creates 2 clones. As i approach my first clone i'm charging chakra into my Left Palm and focusing strength into my whole left arm, unleashing a lower open palm hit into the Left Upper Quadrant of the Abdomen, releasing chakra into the body of the clone. This would bruise the spleen and pancreas, which are easily bruisable and fragile, leaving the clone with an internal bleeding. As i stroke this area, the clone instinctively curves forward. As he does this i already anticipated it and i focused chakra into my Right Palm but this time i aim for the throat, delivering a Palm Thrust directly into the throat and releasing chakra into it. As i do this, the carotid arteries and traquea are severely bruised internally, blocking the passage of blood to the brain and the passage of air to the lungs*
Ohh...clone puffed!
*I face the other clone and rush to him at full speed. As i'm approaching him i slide into his feet, knocking him into the air. As i slide beneath him i trust my left hand into the ground, getting up, while spinning to the left, and thrusting my Right Palm to deliver a strong palm thrust into the clone. As i get him from behind i actually aim at the lower back region which would now be exposed. By releasing my chakra into him on point of contact i bruise and fracture the kidneys of the clone, leaving him in pain, internally bleeding and with toxins and fluids quickly building on his body, poisoning from within. This would make him fall to the ground flat face. As he is on the ground i focus chakra into my legs to jump above the clone while focusing chakra into my left hand which i have retracted into a lower position. As i descent upon the clone i aim for the middle of his back. I strike him with a strong palm slam that releases a large amount of chakra into his spinal cord. This conducts itself through his nervous system leaving him paralyzed, numbed, unable to move (in a tetraplegic state) and gasping for air as his voluntary muscles are unable to expand and contract his lungs perfectly, leaving his breathing shallow and ineffective. Another side effect is the stimulation of the lower vagus nerve which leads to low heart rate and low blood pressure, losing to lost of conscience*
Hum...how was that? ^^
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:whoa: That was brilliant, best reply yet!
You made sure that your blows don't cut, you made sure your blows affect large areas, you made sure everything was in order! Two perfect combos and you didn't even aim for the most obvious places O_O
Anyway, you can aim for the heart and lungs directly, collapsing lungs, causing hearts to stop. And you can also hit the brain, causing a butt load of effects but the most efficiently being instant knock-out. I trained you in Taijutsu so I think I've mentioned the Occipital Ridge already xd
Anyway, I even feel foolish replying after your combo, it's feels more like you're teaching me than me teaching you. xD
Moving on, this are the technique that employ this 1st Form. I'm teaching you like this because the combos you just did can be achieved with description alone, you don't need any technique, thus conserving the 3 Jutsus per battle. The techniques will allow you to enhance the power of your strikes in order to run through higher ranked jutsus.
List time:
But this actual jutsus use this same form:
(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their heart.
Use this by palming the heart and releasing your chakra.
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Use this by throwing several palm strikes at your opponent. You can aim anywhere you want, by describing your movements correctly.
(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
This will work similarly, but it projects the punch. It will do more external damage than internal damage, as it is mainly to blow your opponents away, yet areas like the neck, the belly, the sternum, the face, etc are tender areas and will still cause damage, even with external damage. (Such as asphyxiation, blindness, etc)
(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.
Use this with palm strikes and you'll have a clear path to the kidneys, the lungs and the back of the head (occipital ridge/brain)
(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.
Emty Palms, palm strikes, it's the same thing. Btw, a burst of fire of empty palms doesn't mean you palms catch fire, so don't even think about using this jutsu to burn your opponents.
(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style: White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high-speed strikes before charging they chakra into their hands and releasing it in a burst.
Use palm strikes for the series, and then final blow with more chakra, to affect several organs at once and blow your opponent backwards.
(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may jump from a high distance and palm the foe continually until all chakra points blast.
Same thing...
(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike with a powerful hit with their palm.
(Hakke Saikou Kaze) – Eight Trigrams Ultimate Wind
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user will strike the enemy with Eight Trigrams Empty Palm three times, sending them crashing into a plateau of stone, before using it again to collapse the plateau onto the enemy.
(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralyze an opponent.
Same thing...
(Hakke Hazangeki) - 8 Trigrams Mountain Crusher
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A(+65 if used as an attack)
Description: An up close attack were the user pushes a huge amount of chakra into there opponents body that destroys the internal organs and can level any wall.
(Hakke Kūhekishō) - Eight Trigrams Air Wall Palm
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A variant of the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm. Where two gentle fist users attack alongside each other sending a wave of chakra from their palms with great force.
Note: Can be used with a clone to make the second user.
Same thing, just more powerful. Remember if you touch the opponent, no matter the characteristic of the technique, it will affect the opponent internally (and may also affect externally). If you don't touch, it will most likely only affect externally.
(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.
You know where all the gates are? Tell me.
(Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then thrusts them forwards at the opponent in a spinning motion to confuse and throw off the opponents aim before striking them.
(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.
(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.
This are all basically the same as others above, just more flashy and more powerful. Btw, draining the chakra means your opponents' chakra is cut short, it doesn't mean you suck them like Zetsu.
(Hakke Hazan Hogeki) – Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user strikes the enemies vital area whiles discharging chakra within the enemies body until it bursts from his back into the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra.
Nice, eh?
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their heart.
Use this by palming the heart and releasing your chakra.
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Use this by throwing several palm strikes at your opponent. You can aim anywhere you want, by describing your movements correctly.
(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
This will work similarly, but it projects the punch. It will do more external damage than internal damage, as it is mainly to blow your opponents away, yet areas like the neck, the belly, the sternum, the face, etc are tender areas and will still cause damage, even with external damage. (Such as asphyxiation, blindness, etc)
(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.
Use this with palm strikes and you'll have a clear path to the kidneys, the lungs and the back of the head (occipital ridge/brain)
(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4 Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.
Emty Palms, palm strikes, it's the same thing. Btw, a burst of fire of empty palms doesn't mean you palms catch fire, so don't even think about using this jutsu to burn your opponents.
(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style: White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high-speed strikes before charging they chakra into their hands and releasing it in a burst.
Use palm strikes for the series, and then final blow with more chakra, to affect several organs at once and blow your opponent backwards.
(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may jump from a high distance and palm the foe continually until all chakra points blast.
Same thing...
(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike with a powerful hit with their palm.
(Hakke Saikou Kaze) – Eight Trigrams Ultimate Wind
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user will strike the enemy with Eight Trigrams Empty Palm three times, sending them crashing into a plateau of stone, before using it again to collapse the plateau onto the enemy.
(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralyze an opponent.
Same thing...
(Hakke Hazangeki) - 8 Trigrams Mountain Crusher
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A(+65 if used as an attack)
Description: An up close attack were the user pushes a huge amount of chakra into there opponents body that destroys the internal organs and can level any wall.
(Hakke Kūhekishō) - Eight Trigrams Air Wall Palm
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A variant of the Eight Trigrams Empty Palm. Where two gentle fist users attack alongside each other sending a wave of chakra from their palms with great force.
Note: Can be used with a clone to make the second user.
Same thing, just more powerful. Remember if you touch the opponent, no matter the characteristic of the technique, it will affect the opponent internally (and may also affect externally). If you don't touch, it will most likely only affect externally.
(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.
You know where all the gates are? Tell me.
(Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user forms two large lion-shaped shrouds of chakra around their hands, then thrusts them forwards at the opponent in a spinning motion to confuse and throw off the opponents aim before striking them.
(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.
(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.
This are all basically the same as others above, just more flashy and more powerful. Btw, draining the chakra means your opponents' chakra is cut short, it doesn't mean you suck them like Zetsu.
(Hakke Hazan Hogeki) – Eight Trigrams Crumbling Mountain Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user strikes the enemies vital area whiles discharging chakra within the enemies body until it bursts from his back into the form of a small thin beam that rapidly enlarges into a massive mountain-destroying wave of chakra.
Nice, eh?
Questions?
oh stop it... (please continue) ^^Its easier for me because of my knowledge of anatomy but i still have tons to learn from you before i can even assume i'm your equal let alone teach you.
As for the gates (i'll try telling them by heart so bare with me):
1st gate if the gate of opening and is located in the brain. Basically, releasing this gate enables you to bypass the subconscient self-preservation limit your brain imposes on your muscle. This way, albeit damaging yourself, you actually input full power on your muscles with disregard to safety.
2nd gate is the gate of healing and its also located in the brain (i think parallel to the 1st gate). When released it makes you "fresher" and has a "healing" effect on your body momentarily.
3rd gate is the gate of life and its located in the spinal cord at the base of the neck (give or take). Once released it turns the skin red. Dunno much about this one.
4th gate is the gate of pain. its located in the spinal cord, below the 3rd gate and proximately parallel to the heart. it increases power and speed i think.
5th gate is the gate of...hum...limitation i think. its below the 4th and 3rd gate, following the same line as the spinal cord but on the beginning of the abdomen. I think it releases limits?
6th gate is the gate of view. this one increases further the power and speed of the user and is located near or in the stomach. not sure
7th gate is the gate of wonder. its located in the abdomen, in the lowest part (basically int he base of the spinal cord) and it increases also power.
8th gate is the gate of death. located in the heart. releases all control over the chakra and enables full use of it but ending in death.
Sorry but my knowledge of the gates is limited... :/
one thing though. If my opponent strikes me with some sort of elemental enhanced strike (chidori, earth fist, etc) can i use the burst of chakra from my palms to block it or overcome it? or does the chakra we use only take effect inside the enemy body?
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Its easier for me because of my knowledge of anatomy but i still have tons to learn from you before i can even assume i'm your equal let alone teach you.
As for the gates (i'll try telling them by heart so bare with me):
1st gate if the gate of opening and is located in the brain. Basically, releasing this gate enables you to bypass the subconscient self-preservation limit your brain imposes on your muscle. This way, albeit damaging yourself, you actually input full power on your muscles with disregard to safety.
2nd gate is the gate of healing and its also located in the brain (i think parallel to the 1st gate). When released it makes you "fresher" and has a "healing" effect on your body momentarily.
3rd gate is the gate of life and its located in the spinal cord at the base of the neck (give or take). Once released it turns the skin red. Dunno much about this one.
4th gate is the gate of pain. its located in the spinal cord, below the 3rd gate and proximately parallel to the heart. it increases power and speed i think.
5th gate is the gate of...hum...limitation i think. its below the 4th and 3rd gate, following the same line as the spinal cord but on the beginning of the abdomen. I think it releases limits?
6th gate is the gate of view. this one increases further the power and speed of the user and is located near or in the stomach. not sure
7th gate is the gate of wonder. its located in the abdomen, in the lowest part (basically int he base of the spinal cord) and it increases also power.
8th gate is the gate of death. located in the heart. releases all control over the chakra and enables full use of it but ending in death.
Sorry but my knowledge of the gates is limited... :/
one thing though. If my opponent strikes me with some sort of elemental enhanced strike (chidori, earth fist, etc) can i use the burst of chakra from my palms to block it or overcome it? or does the chakra we use only take effect inside the enemy body?
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Hum... Not sure I understand what you mean, but in a direct confrontation, the power of Gentle Fist (Basic Chakra manipulation) would be one rank lower than an Elemental Attack. So I'd say same rank would block it but injure you nonetheless. But the main moto of the Gentle Fist is to deviate and deflect, and then strike efficient and deadly once your opponent's defenses drop.
Did I answer your question?
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Secong Gentle Fist Form: Razor Chakra
Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.
I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.
You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.
Now you will focus chakra on your hands, but instead of releasing it all at once through the palm, I want you to keep releasing it steadily through your ring and index fingertips. I want you to create a tiny but sharp chakra knife from your fingers. With this form, your chakra will be more localized, and thus will have more physical power. It will be able to cut through the skin, though harmlessly, and affect the Chakra Points inside which you can see with your Byakugan. With this technique, you will not be able to affect organs, but you will be able to aim for thin nerves and veins, especially in weak parts of the body such as the inside of the elbow, the wrists, the armpits, etc.
I want you to imagine that an opponent is throwing all his weight into a right hook. I want you to lean to the left, to dodge his fist, and hit his wrist with your chakra knife. Then step forward and hit his arm pit as you place yourself behind his right shoulder, and then I want you to slam your palm on the back of your head.
You know the drill, I want to know the exact nerves you're aiming for (and area on the brain), and the consequences of such hits. You can compliment this move with a couple of knife fingers to the chakra points around his arm and shoulder, to close the chakra system of his right arm.
Right!
*As my opponent is throwing me a right handed upper hook, i lean to my left (his right), dodging sideways. As i do this i focus chakra in my ring and index Left fingers to form a thin chakra blade, while using my right hand to guide his hook to the my side. As my right hand is "holding" (with no grab) his right one, i hit his wrist with my left hand, using the chakra blade to sever his tendons and nerves,leaving his hand completely useless. As i retract my left hand i keep the thin blade active and take the chance to do more damage. I aim at several muscle fibers nearby, 3 chakra points and end with severing his elbow ligaments and nerves, completing a total of 7 quick hits up his right forearm. As this is done i keep moving sideways and to his back. In this movement i use my right hand with that same effect and creating a similar blade while aiming at his armpit. This severs deep nerves that both control the movement of his arm and his breathing by disabling his use of the toracic right intercostal muscles. As i finish this jab i'm already in his back, spinning right to build momentum into my right hand. As i do this i focus chakra into my right palm and use the rotation momentum to do a powerful palm slam to his head from behind and releasing a burst of chakra into his brain, targeting the occipital lobe. This would disable his vision completely. With the power of the palm slam and without vision he would be completely thrusted forward into the ground, face first with only use of his left arm. All of the movement is done while i side step to my left (his right) while dodging/deflecting his right hook*
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Question, this is similar to the chakra scappel technique right? although thinner, smaller and more precise right?
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Yes, but severely toned down. Instead of severing the nerves and tendons, it rather injures them, achieving the same or similar results, but without being permanent, whereas chakra scapel would allow you to severe the tendons/nerves and even muscles completely, if aimed properly. This is so because the nerves and tendons are protected by muscles flesh and skin, so the tiny blade isn't enough to severe through them completely.
This technique is most suitable to hit the chakra points, injecting a little bit of chakra there to open them or close them. You do not require profound knowledge over this, nor has it been revealed in the manga, so you are allowed a certain freedom and creativity over the effects this technique does to the chakra and chakra pathway. So you can say you open a few select chakra points, without specifying much, forcing the body to surge a blast of chakra through the arm of your opponent, which would make him loose control over a jutsu he could be holding at the moment, numbing or actually injuring his hand ( Failed Chidori or Rasengan, for example). Likewise, you can close the chakra points, making such jutsus vanish and preventing or limitating your opponent from releasing chakra through that arm for a couple of turns (max 2 without a technique), and thus preventing handseals. No chakra should mean a bit of exhaustion whereas a burst of chakra would leave an uncomfortable tingling sensation, I'd say.
These can be allying to injures to the tendons and nerves, limiting movement and causing physical exhaustion, turning the arm useless.
Whoever says arm, says any other limb, it's up to your creativity.
If you do not have questions, I want you to give me 2 combos with the second form only and a 3rd combo with a mixture of both forms.
Dam computer froze on me. Had to do it all over again...
*I do 3 clones, Abe, Homer, Bart. Abe charges at me with a left round about kick. As he approaches, i use my right hand to support myself a bit on his leg while cartwheeling above it to the my right. As i'm jumping and cartwheeling i become inverted and head down while still facing him. I charge chakra into my left hand, creating a tiny blade within my indicator and middle finger. I target his knee with 2 quick jabs, damaging his nerves and ligaments. I then target 5 chakra points from his knee upwards, all on his tigh. I open them as i jab each one. I then land on the ground to see him supporting his weight on his Left Leg. As he does this, he charges chakra into it as normally would happen when a taijutsu master fights, trying to get more speed. As the chakra is channeled, its released from the opened chakra points, as a burst that burns his quadriceps and vastus lateralus muscles damaging them to a point that he becomes unable to stand. I stand there as he tumbles to his left, unable to use his leg*
*Homer charges in revenge to deliver a powerful right handed full punch targeting my chest. I use my left hand,while focusing chakra on my legs to proprel me and increase my jump, doing a frontal flip above him, while using his fist as the central point for my flip. As i take "flight" i become inverted above him. I use my perfect vision and my speed and agility to do a set of 8 jabs, closing most of the chakra points on his right arm and his shoulders, leaving him unable to charge chakra into them, and thus unable to do handseals. As my flip is progressing i'm starting to face the sky so immediately i twirl my body so that when i land behind him, i'm facing his back which happens only a fraction of time later. As i land i jump on to him, delivering 10 jabs from his neck to his..."sulco intra nadegueiro" down his spinal cord. These quick pinpoint jabs are targeting several nerves, specially those that control his reflexes and both voluntary and involuntary muscles. This leaves him paralyzed and unable to move, while losing control over his sphincters, soiling and pissing himself while tumbling forward face first into the ground*
*Bart, enraged, charges at me with a high jump and expecting to land a downwards leg slam on my head. I move to the right, dodging his downwards slam, while charging chakra into my palms and spinning. As i spin i end facing his left side with him already facing me. I charge a him in a burst of speed and deliver a left palm slam on his incoming right fist. My objective is not to stop his punch but to release a burst of chakra through his arm that damages his muscles, his veins, his arteries and his nerves, numbing and injuring his arm severely. As soon as the chakra is done, my arm is already retracting due to the momentum of his forwarding fist. I was already preparing a counter attack do send him back as i do a Left palm trust into his lower abdomen, damaging his intestines and blatter, making him soil and piss himself due to the contraction of his intestines and blatter from the chakra. His own momentum is stopped and he is thrown backwards. As this happens i charge chakra into my fingertips, creating 2 tiny blades, one for each hand. I quickly set 25 targets on my head, all chakra points. My goal: to open them all. I do a mesmerizingly fast set of 25 jabs opening chakra points through his torax, neck, abdomen and arms. This accompanies his backwards movement while i keep charging forward. With the last jab i charge chakra into both my palms and retract them low, with the fore ams to the side of my body. I charge them with all my might, releasing a massive burst of chakra on to his body on contact. The chakra, while damaging his lungs and heart on its own, creates an overload on his chakra network forcing chakra to forcefully get out through the opened chakra points. This massive burst of chakra from 25 chakra points, burns through his muscles, skin, organs, nerves, etc leaving him bruised and severely damaged from the inside out, with only minor contusion-like marks on his skin. The double palm slam is so strong he end up flying backwards with viciously force*
This last one isn't very good, sorry.
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Sounds pretty good, don't worry.
This are the techniques that can be used if you understand the second form (you will notice that I'll repeat some of the jutsus I gave you on the first form. This means that you can describe the way you preform said techniques every way you want, choosing to use the techniques as a palm strike or a finger blade)
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Instead of doing 16 palm strikes, use 16 finger thrusts. Likewise, you can mix palm strikes and finger thrusts, like the combo I made you preform.
(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
Randomly thrust your fingers on 64 chakra points.
(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
same.
(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.
Though more efficient with palm strikes, you can also try to preform 3 finger thrusts on the shoulder or neck area, for more localized damage which would still be quite usefull. Though with palms strikes the fatality is easier and you don't have to think as hard (Back of the lungs, back of the heart, back of the head etc).
(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128 Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after the opponent is hit by it.
(Hakke Sanbyakurokujyuuisshisa) - 8 Trigrams 361 Strikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack that closes 361 tenketsu and seals chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.
(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.
You can preform finger thrusts for the initial barrage. Or combos, of course.
(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.
Same, initial barrage can be preformed anyway you like. As in the previous technique, only the final blow must be done with the palms.
Questions? Afterwards we move to the 3rd and final form.
This are the techniques that can be used if you understand the second form (you will notice that I'll repeat some of the jutsus I gave you on the first form. This means that you can describe the way you preform said techniques every way you want, choosing to use the techniques as a palm strike or a finger blade)
(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Instead of doing 16 palm strikes, use 16 finger thrusts. Likewise, you can mix palm strikes and finger thrusts, like the combo I made you preform.
(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra flow for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
Randomly thrust your fingers on 64 chakra points.
(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
same.
(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then strikes them thrice on the back, sending them flying.
Though more efficient with palm strikes, you can also try to preform 3 finger thrusts on the shoulder or neck area, for more localized damage which would still be quite usefull. Though with palms strikes the fatality is easier and you don't have to think as hard (Back of the lungs, back of the heart, back of the head etc).
(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128 Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after the opponent is hit by it.
(Hakke Sanbyakurokujyuuisshisa) - 8 Trigrams 361 Strikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack that closes 361 tenketsu and seals chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.
(Hakke Kasui Hirate Nami) – Eight Trigrams Stream Palm Wave
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user attacks the enemy target with a two handed Gentle Fist several times from all angles before dashing in front of them and charging chakra within their palms and striking the enemy, draining their chakra.
You can preform finger thrusts for the initial barrage. Or combos, of course.
(Hakuro Tenbu) – Heavens Dance of Hazy White
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (- 15 to user from explosion)
Description: The users hand turn white, with chakra coating and flowing through them. Then they take several swipes at the opponent, and finishes by bringing together both their hands. This creates a large explosion that damages and knocks back the opponent.
Same, initial barrage can be preformed anyway you like. As in the previous technique, only the final blow must be done with the palms.
Questions? Afterwards we move to the 3rd and final form.
Hum, one question: in our RP what significance does reducing the chakra of your enemy have? I mean, we rp as if we have infinite chakra, so won't that "side effect" be...useless?
Other than that i have no questions.
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Weakness, slow handseal and jutsu making speed, it should remove the "speciality" bonus of less handseals for a certain element. In my opinion, it should also reduce the rank one can use, such as no Forbidden and maybe S rank, but that part is a stretch, for it should prevent the opponent from using complex jutsus.