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Now for the next three, you will be dealing powerful strikes that is able to damage tenketsus and organs at the same time.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high- speed strikes before charging they chakra into
their hands and releasing it in a burst.
You will do two forms of Jyuken here, precision and blast. Strike continously the chakra points of the opponent then at the end charge blunt chakra into one of your hand and blast him to oblivion damaging his entrails.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may
jump from a high distance and palm the foe
continually until all chakra points blast.
You will run at full speed towards your opponent(when he is open) then jump and as you land, jab one of his vital organ severing it completely with one hit, otherwise after you run(compulsory), jump and jab continously the tenketsus until they burst.
Quiz: What is the reason behind the bursting of the tenketsus?

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike
with a powerful hit with their palm.
Grab you enemy on the chest with one hand while charging chakra into the other, then sink the chakra into him to damage his internals and send him flying.
 

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This is a neat technique as it's very simple but packs a huge punch. The quick attacks are a nice perk for the initial damage but the finale burst is good for finishing an opponent of.

Like most of the other Gentle Fist taijutsu, this technique is dependent on you getting close to your opponent, or them not being focused enough to keep track of you.

I would counter this on the initial offensive action, the run-up and the 'first strike'. Countering the first strike is crucial to beating a Gentle Fist User.

There are plenty of possibilities to use in coordination with a technique like this. Personally I'd like to overwhelm them so they can't counter in time or use a speed burst to take the advantage. Using a simple jutsu like an elemental pillar to thrust you is a great option.



The pro to this technique is the initial speed burst and jump that go in conjunction with the technique. You could use these to counter a technique with the running and jumping

The con to this technique is how vulnerable you are mid-air, this leaves you open to an assortment of strikes which would be hard to counter mid-air

I'd definitely counter this with a chidori or something, meeting them when they 'land' in front of me and allowing me to kill them.

I would start using this technique as a counter to an earth jutsu that comes from the ground, the initial burst and jump allows me to do that and then I could attack them getting close.

QUIZ

If we burst their tenketsus, then they won't be able to mold chakra, giving us a major upper-hand in the battle against them.



I don't really like this technique but I feel like a pro to it is the killing power. If they are traveling downwards with momentum and you hit them with a powerful palm strike, they are most likely going to be damaged.

A negative to this technique is the room to counter. First you have to be close enough to them and grab their chest and then you throw them into the air and hope they can't form a counter while in the air. The only real bypass to this is if you jump up into them.

A good counter to this technique would be the Earth Style: Hardening Technique. This would allow you to defend from the blows while most likely forming a spike capable of killing the opponent.

A cool technique I would try and use this with is the Hiding Like a Mole technique in order to surprise the opponent if you have a clone and have it pop up behind them
 

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Yea, too much of volume would cause the container to expand past its elastic limit then when they can't expand no more, they burst. The same applies to chakra and tenketsu here.

Any question?
 

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Now to the next one.


(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an
opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist
techniques, it sends chakra into the target to
cause internal damage which will temporarily
paralyze an opponent.

This is a special palm thrust where you release chakra sinking it into your victim's body damaging his internal organ. You don't have to be close, but the full effect is achived when you make contact with the enemy.
Also name an organ you will strike if you are to perform this and what would be the effect on your opponent.
 

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This is a very nice technique. It is simply-written and easy to understand. Also, it is not a complicated move but it is a powerful one. This technique packs a lot of power, if it connects and is well placed, it can easily kill an opponent.

A negative of this is just the directness. This technique's simpleness make it a nice one but also a drawback. The drawback is that it is simple to counter unless your opponent is somewhere else other than right in front of you.

To counter this, like a lot of other Gentle Fist Taijutsu, I would resort to using Intersection Method. It's probably my favorite taijutsu technique because it can be used to counter a large assortment of things.

I would have to use this technique in coordination with another jutsu. There is no way that this jutsu could be used on it's own and you could expect the results you wanted. There is a large assortment of genjutsu's that would be a nice combo with this, as long as you rush into them after taking away/impairing their vision.
 

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I run up to your current location and crouch low to the ground. I then burst up and deliver a powerful right knee into your stomach, forcing you to keel over towards me thanks to the blunt power. Quickly after this, I rear my right shoulder back and deliver a powerful palm strike to your heart, stopping it and killing you.

(Shōshitsu) - Rising Knee
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user will strike their opponent with an upwards thrust with their knee.

(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralyze an opponent.

 

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You did not activate your byakugan so I assume you first attack is coming but the others that requires byakugan active did not happen. Although I won't let them happen so you still have a chance to activate your byakugan.






Nel's byakugan is active passively.



(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All
Seeing White Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description: One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San
Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai
of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have
almost featureless white eyes. When the
Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become
more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is
increased. While having the Byakugan
deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal
eyesight and no special addition to their vision.
While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a
sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly
straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog →
Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with
nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the
right index finger lifted straight up) to activate
their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and
even have it active passively for long periods
of time. Once activated, the user gains access
to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows
upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main
ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete
new detail and dimension to that ability. The
user can not only see chakra and the chakra
flow, but also the circulatory system and even
the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once
activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up
to long-range if he's a master). This field of
vision has only one blind spot, slightly above
the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing
backwards but enables the user to actually even
see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are
so adept and masterfull of precise chakra
control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the
ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific
things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike,
as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as
physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but
also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra
that might be in front of them or other
energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the
user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away.
Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness
regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent,
detecting such intentions and emotions from
others with more ease than most.
Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches
Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over
Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it
passively without spending a move. Because of
its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can
keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when
used against a Byakugan user requires direct
eye contact between enemy pupil and user's
pupil
Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light
or energy
Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of
a 3 Tomoe Sharingan

As you come towards me with the knee strike, Nel would leap just a little bit upward while pressing her right foot on your incoming knee using it as a laucher, propelling herself upward while doing a swift flick and back flip landing both her foot on your lower jaw/chin sending you flying.


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent once on their knee, and then kicks them twice on
their face in rapid succession, sending them
spiraling upwards.
 

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As my knee and your leg counter act, I activate my Byakugan. Quickly thinking, I see you attempt a straight kick at my face (description kind of lacked at this point), not hesitating, I place my right knee that counteracted your leg and slide it back so my body is perpendicular to you. You having missed your kick would not be able to propel yourself away from me so using this to my advantage, I finger thrust the tenketsu of your heart with my left hand (hitting from an angle) and cause it to shut down.

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their heart.

(Dōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. The user can not only see chakra and the chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if he's a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot, slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards but enables the user to actually even see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are so adept and masterfull of precise chakra control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike, as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away. Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent, detecting such intentions and emotions from others with more ease than most.
Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of a 3 Tomoe Sharingan

 

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I perform the seals and activate my Byakugan
ōjutsu: Byakugan) Eye Technique: The All Seeing White Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Byakugan is the kekkei genkai of the Hyuga clan. Bearers of this Dõjutsu have almost featureless white eyes. When the Byakugan is activated, the user's pupils become more distinct, and the veins near their temples bulge as the blood flow to their eyes is increased. While having the Byakugan deactivated, Hyuga ninjas have a normal eyesight and no special addition to their vision. While low rank Hyugas will need to perform a sequence of hand seals ( Horse → Tiger with lifting just index fingers → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse → Dog → Hare → Rat → Boar with nearly straightened fingers → Snake with the right index finger lifted straight up) to activate their Byakugan, Hyuga masters will be able to do so without the need for any hand seals and even have it active passively for long periods of time. Once activated, the user gains access to all of the abilities the Byakugan bestows upon them. While, like other Dojutsu, its main ability is to see chakra and the chakra flow in sentient beings, the Byakugan adds a complete new detail and dimension to that ability. The user can not only see chakra and the chakra flow, but also the circulatory system and even the 361 tenketsu. Added to this ability, once activated the Byakugan grants the user a near perfect field of vision 360º around himself (up to long-range if he's a master). This field of vision has only one blind spot, slightly above the 3rd thoracic vertebrae and facing backwards but enables the user to actually even see his own chakra circulatory system and chakra flow, which explains why all Hyuugas are so adept and masterfull of precise chakra control. The last ability the Byakugan has is the ability to zoom in and out, focusing on specific things, piercing beyond matter and energy alike, as well as chakra. This specific ability allows the user to see pass most barriers as well as physical matter (like rock walls, ground, etc) but also energy, being able to focus beyond chakra that might be in front of them or other energies. The zooming ability is enhanced as the user becomes more adept at using his eyes and can even reach distances above 20kms away. Some Hyugas have shown a great awareness regarding agressiveness as well as killing intent, detecting such intentions and emotions from others with more ease than most.
Note: Activation spends a move from the users own move count but once the user reaches Sannin Rank and has gained mastery over Gentle Fist for 1 month, he can activate it passively without spending a move. Because of its low chakra cost to maintain, the user can keep it active throughout the whole fight as long as he has chakra and stamina to do so.
Note: Genjutsu that requires Eye Contact when used against a Byakugan user requires direct eye contact between enemy pupil and user's pupil
Note: Must be activated to use Gentle Fist (Jyuken)
Note: Cannot be blinded by matter, chakra, light or energy
Note: Its tracking abilities are similar to that of a 3 Tomoe Sharingan
 

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as you activate you byakugan, Nel readies herself and decides to use pure taijutsu and not jyuken. So she would not activate her byakugan, she makes a generic kungfu stance, right foot forward, left foot backwards , left hand behind while her right hand motions you to come bring it on.
 

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I run at you and duck low when I enter a proximity allowing me to hit you, on my way up, I deliver a poweful right uppercut to your jaw.
 

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Please include directions and which limb you are using z.z


As your knee comes up to hit me, I drop my right elbow on your knee, equaling the force and causing a standstilll. I then use this same elbow to deliver a powerful blow to your chin.
 

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you are not making effort and here we go again.
I told you to attack using Jyuken and tai but you prefer to be dragging the whole thing with freeform. Yea, I have all the time ^^


As your elbow clashes with hers, though because you are at the recieving end, you are pushed back a little. Nel would assume a normal Lee Taijutsu stance. Come!
 
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