[Genjutsu]-Neilson

[neilson]

Zeta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone as the clone advances towards him, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain causing the clone to still see zeta where he stands but makes the clones brain to believe that the clone is still trying to reach zeta inorder words zeta disrupts the clones brain chakra flow casting an illusion/genjutsu on the clone, where the clone still sees himself running straight zeta but in reality he is running in circles,

Strong points

• -this jutsu is very well useful especially when used towards or on a summon
• -the moment of the opponent moving in circles, gives the user time to kill the opponent. -
• - can affect more than one opponent, that is if they are all in range -

Weak points

• - as stated in d discription, it doesn't work on a none moving opponent.-
• - can be easily broken out of once the opponent realizes that he hasn't reach his opponent is time, like lemme say me and my opponent are in short range and I do a dash towards him, and in some seconds I still haven't reached him, I would realize i'm in a gen and do a kai. -
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Combinations and strategies
I would love to use this technique on a swift user...lol. Anyway I would use this technique on a summon, to stall my opponent, but if I have to use it on my opponent I would use fire annihilation destruction so that he/she would move, then cast this genjutsu and then kill him.
ways to counter this technique
To counter this tech one would have to realize he/she is in a gen, and to realize that, the victim would have to search for things that should be around, and especially if the user of the gen position has shifted.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta starts to build his chakra just like before expelling it towards mathias clone as the clone advances towards him, disrupting the chakra flow in his brain causing the clone to still see zeta where he stands but makes the clones brain to believe that the clone is still trying to reach zeta inorder words zeta disrupts the clones brain chakra flow casting an illusion/genjutsu on the clone, where the clone still sees himself running straight zeta but in reality he is running in circles,

Strong points

• -this jutsu is very well useful especially when used towards or on a summon
• -the moment of the opponent moving in circles, gives the user time to kill the opponent. -
• - can affect more than one opponent, that is if they are all in range -

Weak points

• - as stated in d discription, it doesn't work on a none moving opponent.-
• - can be easily broken out of once the opponent realizes that he hasn't reach his opponent is time, like lemme say me and my opponent are in short range and I do a dash towards him, and in some seconds I still haven't reached him, I would realize i'm in a gen and do a kai. -
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Combinations and strategies
I would love to use this technique on a swift user...lol. Anyway I would use this technique on a summon, to stall my opponent, but if I have to use it on my opponent I would use fire annihilation destruction so that he/she would move, then cast this genjutsu and then kill him.
ways to counter this technique
To counter this tech one would have to realize he/she is in a gen, and to realize that, the victim would have to search for things that should be around, and especially if the user of the gen position has shifted.

In theory it would be quite cool to see this technique used on a swift-user. However it would be quite hard to do so because of the speed in which swift release users travel.

( Genjutsu: Jinmon ) - Illusion Technique: Interrogation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: The user of this technique, upon casting on a stationary opponent with physical contact with them, is able to convince the enemy to give away information. However, this will only work on ninja two ranks lower and below than the caster.

After finding a ninja two ranks lower then you (in this case my psuedo-clone) I want you to immobilize him somehow, allowing you to be within physical contact with him to perform this technique. After being in contact with him I want you to release your chakra into him, entering his subconscious. You will then manipulate his senses, allowing you to extract information by merely asking the questions.

 

[neilson]

Zeta starts to build his chakra, upon seeing the psuedo clone of mathias sensei, with immobilization on his mind zeta uses the killing intent on clone,(thos would definitely work since I am 2 ranks higher than my target) allowing me to get within reach of the clone, once in an extreme close proximity I start to build my chakra again channeling it towards my right hand which zeta then use to get a hold on mathias clones head, zeta then releases/injects the chakra he built directly into the clones brain, further more disrupting his brain chakra flow taking control of the 5 core senses, zeta makes the clone see a familiar friend a close/best friend infact in which the clone can open up to, and using this best friend as a vessel for himself(zeta), zeta begin to question him
Zeta:what is mathias favorite food?.....what is mathias favourite drink?...is mathias open for personal students???....has Mathias killed any comrade before?...?...lol

Strong points

• -as stated its a good way to get information from opponents, without killing them, informations which might Change the outcome of a battle.
• -opponent can be easily killed once done with d questioning. -
• - if used on someone 3 ranks below the user I don't think breakig out of this genjutsu would be that easy -

Weak points

• - the opponent must be first immobilized, lacking the right skill would make the use of this genjutsu hard or impossible at most -
• - depending on the type of immobilized jutsu used the opponent might be able to free himself before physical contact Is established. -
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Combinations and strategies
As stated earlier beginning with a killing intent to render my opponent uselessly immobile then using this jutsu and ice done killing him with a raikiri straight to the head or head.
ways to counter this techniqueto counter this genjutsu without the killig intent being used would be somewhat easy, being as all the opponent would have to do is either a nagashi, but first realizing that he/she is in a gen, either by stating something different from reality in the gen.

 

[Mathias]

Zeta starts to build his chakra, upon seeing the psuedo clone of mathias sensei, with immobilization on his mind zeta uses the killing intent on clone,(thos would definitely work since I am 2 ranks higher than my target) allowing me to get within reach of the clone, once in an extreme close proximity I start to build my chakra again channeling it towards my right hand which zeta then use to get a hold on mathias clones head, zeta then releases/injects the chakra he built directly into the clones brain, further more disrupting his brain chakra flow taking control of the 5 core senses, zeta makes the clone see a familiar friend a close/best friend infact in which the clone can open up to, and using this best friend as a vessel for himself(zeta), zeta begin to question him
Zeta:what is mathias favorite food?.....what is mathias favourite drink?...is mathias open for personal students???....has Mathias killed any comrade before?...?...lol

Strong points

• -as stated its a good way to get information from opponents, without killing them, informations which might Change the outcome of a battle.
• -opponent can be easily killed once done with d questioning. -
• - if used on someone 3 ranks below the user I don't think breakig out of this genjutsu would be that easy -

Weak points

• - the opponent must be first immobilized, lacking the right skill would make the use of this genjutsu hard or impossible at most -
• - depending on the type of immobilized jutsu used the opponent might be able to free himself before physical contact Is established. -
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Combinations and strategies
As stated earlier beginning with a killing intent to render my opponent uselessly immobile then using this jutsu and ice done killing him with a raikiri straight to the head or head.
ways to counter this techniqueto counter this genjutsu without the killig intent being used would be somewhat easy, being as all the opponent would have to do is either a nagashi, but first realizing that he/she is in a gen, either by stating something different from reality in the gen.

Question number one: Uruguayan Food
Question number two: Uruguayan Drink
Question number three: Nope ;3

OOC: For the time being we will be doing two-three techniques at the same time. However, you are still required to post the template for each technique.

( Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka ) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target.

ONE OF MY FAVORITE TECHNIQUES! I mean.. yes, a technique I enjoy using. Anyways, the technique will start as any other illusion by following the universal rules to cast an illusion on the target, infusing chakra inside of his system. Inside of the illusion, the target at hand will see a monstrous fire ball descending from the sky above, coming directly towards him to envelop him in fire devastation.

( Genjutsu: Kasumi no Jutsu ) - Illusion Technique: Mist Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an illusionary clone that charges towards the enemy, jumps, then explodes in a cloud of cherry blossom petals which results in confusing the opponent and obscuring their vision, leaving them open for attack.

You will cast an illusion on the target in which he sees a clone being created in front of you. The clone then would start to run towards the selected target, later seeing him jump near his short range as he suddenly explodes into a cloud of cherry blossom pedals, effectively confusing him and blocking their vision.

 

[neilson]

OOC:welcome back from your vacation mathias sensei, hope u had fun. .

Zeta keeps his vision on Mathias(u didn't make a clone :devil, zeta then he starts to build his chakra channeling it towards and into mathias sensei disrupting his chakra flow, focusing on his sense of sight and feel, zeta casts mathias sensei in an illusion where mathias see's a giant fire ball coming down on him from the sky, further more manipulating his sense to feel, causing mathias sensei to feel intense heat as if it is emanating from the fire ball...making him think its an actual fire jutsu.
Strong points

• -this jutsu is a very good decoy, allowing the user to trap his opponent in this jutsu and immediately attack-
• -without well evaluated analysis of the situation this jutsu is hard to break out from, cause it may seem like a fire jutsu as it takes on the characteristics of an actual fire jutsu-
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Weak points

• -this jutsu might be easy to counter being as once the target looks around and can no longer see his opponent, also hearing a secondary attack from the user of this tech, allowing the target to realise its a gen(a secondary attack of lightning like chidori which makes a lot of sound will give away this tech.-
• -it works on a single opponent, this is bad because in a situation where by the target has a partner, the partner could smack him outta the genjutsu-
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Combinations and strategies
I would most likely use this genjutsu when i'm in the air, I will form fake hand seals and use thus genjutsu causing my opponent to look at it like I released this jutsu from my mouth, making my opponent to react with a jutsu which wouldn't take out the flame cause he Is still in a genjutsu, in a situation whereby my opponent reacts with a water jutsu, I will instantly react with a lightning jutsu which will travel through the water and to my opponent.
ways to counter this technique
I would listen for sounds, if I don't hear the sound of a fire jutsu which is that crackling sound, and when I look around and do not see my opponent(even if he did the jutsu while in the air, he has to land eventually), also I react with a water jutsu but the fire ball just keeps coming, I would bite me cheek, or do a nagashi.


Zeta starts to build his chakra again, and still being focused on mathias, zeta releases the built chakra towards mathias, thus once again disrupting his chakra flow affecting his sense of sight, mathias sense see's a clone of zeta appear infront of zeta, the clone then dashes towards mathias sensei and gets close, zeta focuses and releases more chakra to disrupt mathias chakra flow, causing mathias see the clone jump and explodes/poofs into cherry blossoms petals, this blocks mathias vision and leaves him confused as to how the clone did that and why I am he can't see me.
Strong points

• -the user can mask his movements with this jutsu since his opponents vision is obscurred.-
• -the opponent is vulnerable to attacks as he stands confused to what has just happened.-
• -i believe the opponent will still take the same effects of the genjutsu, even if he strikes the clone-

Weak points

• -without even figuring this is a genjutsu an opponent can act in accordance to what he hears. In order words even though his sight is taken away he can listen for a secondary attack and react accordingly. -
• -going through my first weak point, of the user is still in the situation whereby his sight hasn't returned, it will alarm him causing him to thing its a genjutsu and therefore release himself from it.-
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Combinations and strategies
This is actually a useful jutsu, similar to the d rank mist servant or is it the flower petal escape. Well I would use this jutsu when i'm in a tight spot. Or when my opponent advances towards me. Making it easier for the illusion clone to reach him.
ways to counter this technique
Use the sense of hearing, and patience...as explained earlier, that's the only way I know to realize its a genjutsu.

 

[Mathias]

OOC:welcome back from your vacation mathias sensei, hope u had fun. .

Zeta keeps his vision on Mathias(u didn't make a clone :devil, zeta then he starts to build his chakra channeling it towards and into mathias sensei disrupting his chakra flow, focusing on his sense of sight and feel, zeta casts mathias sensei in an illusion where mathias see's a giant fire ball coming down on him from the sky, further more manipulating his sense to feel, causing mathias sensei to feel intense heat as if it is emanating from the fire ball...making him think its an actual fire jutsu.
Strong points

• -this jutsu is a very good decoy, allowing the user to trap his opponent in this jutsu and immediately attack-
• -without well evaluated analysis of the situation this jutsu is hard to break out from, cause it may seem like a fire jutsu as it takes on the characteristics of an actual fire jutsu-
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Weak points

• -this jutsu might be easy to counter being as once the target looks around and can no longer see his opponent, also hearing a secondary attack from the user of this tech, allowing the target to realise its a gen(a secondary attack of lightning like chidori which makes a lot of sound will give away this tech.-
• -it works on a single opponent, this is bad because in a situation where by the target has a partner, the partner could smack him outta the genjutsu-
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Combinations and strategies
I would most likely use this genjutsu when i'm in the air, I will form fake hand seals and use thus genjutsu causing my opponent to look at it like I released this jutsu from my mouth, making my opponent to react with a jutsu which wouldn't take out the flame cause he Is still in a genjutsu, in a situation whereby my opponent reacts with a water jutsu, I will instantly react with a lightning jutsu which will travel through the water and to my opponent.
ways to counter this technique
I would listen for sounds, if I don't hear the sound of a fire jutsu which is that crackling sound, and when I look around and do not see my opponent(even if he did the jutsu while in the air, he has to land eventually), also I react with a water jutsu but the fire ball just keeps coming, I would bite me cheek, or do a nagashi.


Zeta starts to build his chakra again, and still being focused on mathias, zeta releases the built chakra towards mathias, thus once again disrupting his chakra flow affecting his sense of sight, mathias sense see's a clone of zeta appear infront of zeta, the clone then dashes towards mathias sensei and gets close, zeta focuses and releases more chakra to disrupt mathias chakra flow, causing mathias see the clone jump and explodes/poofs into cherry blossoms petals, this blocks mathias vision and leaves him confused as to how the clone did that and why I am he can't see me.
Strong points

• -the user can mask his movements with this jutsu since his opponents vision is obscurred.-
• -the opponent is vulnerable to attacks as he stands confused to what has just happened.-
• -i believe the opponent will still take the same effects of the genjutsu, even if he strikes the clone-

Weak points

• -without even figuring this is a genjutsu an opponent can act in accordance to what he hears. In order words even though his sight is taken away he can listen for a secondary attack and react accordingly. -
• -going through my first weak point, of the user is still in the situation whereby his sight hasn't returned, it will alarm him causing him to thing its a genjutsu and therefore release himself from it.-
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Combinations and strategies
This is actually a useful jutsu, similar to the d rank mist servant or is it the flower petal escape. Well I would use this jutsu when i'm in a tight spot. Or when my opponent advances towards me. Making it easier for the illusion clone to reach him.
ways to counter this technique
Use the sense of hearing, and patience...as explained earlier, that's the only way I know to realize its a genjutsu.

OOC: Thank you, I had a fun time indeed ^_^ however now recuperating from the injury is no fun at all rofl.

Tsk, casting the illusion on me? You've got guts..

( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
Rank: C-S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15-40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. A Sage rank user can dispel Genjutsu up to S-Rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu. The technique can only be used once per turn and the user still needs to fully follow the logic as to why he figured out it was an illusion.

One of the most important techniques you'll be learning under genjutsu. This is a release method, allowing you to break yourself from illusions that do not bind you physically or strong enough ones like MS-level techniques. You will start out the technique by holding the tiger hand seals, focusing your chakra while thereafter disrupting your chakra flow by completely stopping it from flowing momentarily. You will then start u p your chakra flow once again by spiking (increasing) your spiritual energy, allowing your chakra flow to successfully become unbalance, disrupting the opponent's chakra within your system.

Any questions on this technique? It is a very important technique.

 

[neilson]

OOC: sorry about your injury! Get well soon.

Zeta stands still and stays calm as he then brings both his hands together to form the tiger hand seal, zeta focuses on himself, especially on his chakra flow trying to stop it, by first understanding the natural build up and flow of his chakra, zeta then retrace the steps of the natural build up and flow of chakra to the direct source, with than down, zeta stops the flow of chakra(more like closes the door that allow the flow of chakra), with that done, zeta still leaving the flow of his chakra stopped(or leaving the chakra door closed) starts to builds his chakra right from the source, zeta builds a lot of chakra, so much that its forcefully un-stops the stopped flow of chakra(or the built up chakra forces the chakra door open) having the new set of chakra that is forcefully emerging(unbalanced chakra) to push out my opponents chakra that was disrupting mine and causing the illusion
Strong points

• -with this technique one can break out of any genjutsu ranked that is, and not MS techniques/paralysis techs-
• -OT is the most effective, being as it doesn't harm the user in any way, just allows them to break out of the genjutsu, not like biting or cutting or breaking bones of your own-
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Weak points

• -one would think that because they've learnt kai it'll be easier to break out of a genjutsu, but one still need to follow the process of thinking how they knew it was a genjutsu-
• -if the caster is close to the victim of a genjutsu this kai will be useless and also cause the victim a limb, in the process of you and I are standing next to each other(very close) and I cast an A ranked genjutsu on you then you want to break out of it by doing a kai as u try to bring your hand closer I can slice it off(like what itachi did to orochimaru)-
• -this technique takes up a jutsu slot in our RP, thus reducing the amount of technique which might be useful in a fight for that turn.-

Combinations and strategies
Not really much, one must first analyze then come to the conclusion that he/she is in a genjutsu before doing a kai, as for me a kai Isn't something that should be used anytime for all genjutsu, 1 being as it takes up jutsu slots, 2 the user might loose a limb. So sometimes bitting yourself/causing injuries or self mutilation are better
ways to counter this technique
Cast a 2 layed genjutsu on him of the same rank.

No questions

 

[Mathias]

OOC: sorry about your injury! Get well soon.

Zeta stands still and stays calm as he then brings both his hands together to form the tiger hand seal, zeta focuses on himself, especially on his chakra flow trying to stop it, by first understanding the natural build up and flow of his chakra, zeta then retrace the steps of the natural build up and flow of chakra to the direct source, with than down, zeta stops the flow of chakra(more like closes the door that allow the flow of chakra), with that done, zeta still leaving the flow of his chakra stopped(or leaving the chakra door closed) starts to builds his chakra right from the source, zeta builds a lot of chakra, so much that its forcefully un-stops the stopped flow of chakra(or the built up chakra forces the chakra door open) having the new set of chakra that is forcefully emerging(unbalanced chakra) to push out my opponents chakra that was disrupting mine and causing the illusion
Strong points

• -with this technique one can break out of any genjutsu ranked that is, and not MS techniques/paralysis techs-
• -OT is the most effective, being as it doesn't harm the user in any way, just allows them to break out of the genjutsu, not like biting or cutting or breaking bones of your own-
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Weak points

• -one would think that because they've learnt kai it'll be easier to break out of a genjutsu, but one still need to follow the process of thinking how they knew it was a genjutsu-
• -if the caster is close to the victim of a genjutsu this kai will be useless and also cause the victim a limb, in the process of you and I are standing next to each other(very close) and I cast an A ranked genjutsu on you then you want to break out of it by doing a kai as u try to bring your hand closer I can slice it off(like what itachi did to orochimaru)-
• -this technique takes up a jutsu slot in our RP, thus reducing the amount of technique which might be useful in a fight for that turn.-

Combinations and strategies
Not really much, one must first analyze then come to the conclusion that he/she is in a genjutsu before doing a kai, as for me a kai Isn't something that should be used anytime for all genjutsu, 1 being as it takes up jutsu slots, 2 the user might loose a limb. So sometimes bitting yourself/causing injuries or self mutilation are better
ways to counter this technique
Cast a 2 layed genjutsu on him of the same rank.

No questions

Good, just remember that it can't dispel ALL genjutsu, because there are some F-Ranked customs out there, and kai only allows up to S rank dispel. Now, before we move onto the B ranks I would like you to perform the usual battle combination please ^_^

Mathias proceeds to make a clone long range from you.

GO!

 

[neilson]

Yes sir, i'll make your proud...#youbestbeproud

Zeta first watches as mathias makes the clone, he places his right hand on one of his swords in a casual manner, as the clone is made long range to him, zeta starts running towards the clone and extremely fast by expelling chakra through his feet which will serve as a boost making him to cover more grounds and getting into mid range easily, once into mid range zeta sends his chakra through the ground and to where the clone is made, but he keeps on running towards him like he did nothing, seconds later the clone gets encased in a water, thus imprisoning the clone in the water and also drowning him, making the clone desperately gasp for air as his life is sucked out of him.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water.
The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique,
though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Zeta still running towards the imprisoned clone and getting close to short range, immediately casts a genjutsu on the clone after the water prison, making the clone see a giant fire ball coming down at him from the heavens(if he has broken free of the water prison he has this to deal with, if he hasn't he has this and the water prison to deal with), with the clone seeing such massive flame ball, he tries desperately to free himself from the water prison.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and
enveloping its target.

Zeta still running towards the clone and expelling blasts of chakra through hid feet to increase his speed will now be at short range if not very close to the clone, zeta casts a secondary illusion where the clone see's 3 clones of zeta which come out of the ground, making the clone think they are earth clones, 2 clones of zeta stand at both sides of mathias clone and the last one standing infront of hin with their swords pulled out and then running at him, the three clones point their sword at him and run him through with it, thus impaling him in the chest heart area(the clone might have freed himself from the water prison or not but the techniques are all valid).

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This illusion creates numerous illusionary clones of the user that appear to emerge from the ground,
trees, rocks, etc. If these clones are attacked, they appear to multiply. The user can co-ordinate his attacks with the
clones to make it appear as if they are real.

As the clone is stabbed with the sword he is immediately broken out of both gwnjutsu's to see zeta standing infront of him with his(zeta) sword in his(clone) chest and finally the clone poofs.

Sorry for replying late mathias sensei how did I do?....tell me did I RP well? I wanna Learn that.

 

[Mathias]

Yes sir, i'll make your proud...#youbestbeproud

Zeta first watches as mathias makes the clone, he places his right hand on one of his swords in a casual manner, as the clone is made long range to him, zeta starts running towards the clone and extremely fast by expelling chakra through his feet which will serve as a boost making him to cover more grounds and getting into mid range easily, once into mid range zeta sends his chakra through the ground and to where the clone is made, but he keeps on running towards him like he did nothing, seconds later the clone gets encased in a water, thus imprisoning the clone in the water and also drowning him, making the clone desperately gasp for air as his life is sucked out of him.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water.
The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique,
though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Zeta still running towards the imprisoned clone and getting close to short range, immediately casts a genjutsu on the clone after the water prison, making the clone see a giant fire ball coming down at him from the heavens(if he has broken free of the water prison he has this to deal with, if he hasn't he has this and the water prison to deal with), with the clone seeing such massive flame ball, he tries desperately to free himself from the water prison.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and
enveloping its target.

Zeta still running towards the clone and expelling blasts of chakra through hid feet to increase his speed will now be at short range if not very close to the clone, zeta casts a secondary illusion where the clone see's 3 clones of zeta which come out of the ground, making the clone think they are earth clones, 2 clones of zeta stand at both sides of mathias clone and the last one standing infront of hin with their swords pulled out and then running at him, the three clones point their sword at him and run him through with it, thus impaling him in the chest heart area(the clone might have freed himself from the water prison or not but the techniques are all valid).

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This illusion creates numerous illusionary clones of the user that appear to emerge from the ground,
trees, rocks, etc. If these clones are attacked, they appear to multiply. The user can co-ordinate his attacks with the
clones to make it appear as if they are real.

As the clone is stabbed with the sword he is immediately broken out of both gwnjutsu's to see zeta standing infront of him with his(zeta) sword in his(clone) chest and finally the clone poofs.

Sorry for replying late mathias sensei how did I do?....tell me did I RP well? I wanna Learn that.

OOC: Don't worry, it was not late at all.

You RP'd quite well, however the actual combination was not very effective, and I will explain the reason why. You continued to run towards my clone's short range (which I have to applaud, not most people go for short range anymore), however due to the illusion you placed my clone in, its not very effective, why? Well, because the fire balls illusion takes up quite a vast area around the opponent, causing him to believe you would in turn would also be effected by the fire.

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Would you please mind tweaking your current combination please? Aside from that, you did quite well. Its just a matter of re-arranging moves and combinations.

 

[neilson]

Yes sir...though it hurts but criticism is essential.

Zeta first watches as mathias makes the clone, he places his right hand on one of his swords in a casual manner, as the clone is made long range to him, zeta starts running towards the clone and extremely fast by expelling chakra through his feet which will serve as a boost making him to cover more grounds and getting into mid range easily, upon entering mid range zeta sends his chakra through the ground and to where the clone is made, but he keeps on running towards him like he did nothing, seconds later the clone gets encased in a water, thus imprisoning the clone in the water and also drowning him, making the clone desperately gasp for air as his life is sucked out of him.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water.
The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique,
though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Zeta still running towards the imprisoned clone and getting fully into mid range, immediately casts a genjutsu on the clone after the water prison, making the clone see a giant fire ball coming down at him from the heavens(if he has broken free of the water prison he has this to deal with, if he hasn't he has this and the water prison to deal with), with the clone seeing such massive flame ball, he tries desperately to free himself from the water prison.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and
enveloping its target.

Zeta stops running towards the clone and expelling blasts of chakra through his feet thus stopping in place at mid range from where the clone stands looking up to d sky at the giant fore ball which is an illusion, zeta performs the snake hand seal as his opponent stands there staring at the illusionary fire ball, zeta after forming the Snake hand seal stretches out his right hand arm and from his palm he emits a lightning spear that travels extremely fast, the spear is aimed at the head of the clone, as the clone tries to break out of the genjutsu he is pierced in the head by the spear and killed. Thus poofs.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their
hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is
great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of
spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique
to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as
Raikiri.

Better?

 

[Mathias]

Yes sir...though it hurts but criticism is essential.

Zeta first watches as mathias makes the clone, he places his right hand on one of his swords in a casual manner, as the clone is made long range to him, zeta starts running towards the clone and extremely fast by expelling chakra through his feet which will serve as a boost making him to cover more grounds and getting into mid range easily, upon entering mid range zeta sends his chakra through the ground and to where the clone is made, but he keeps on running towards him like he did nothing, seconds later the clone gets encased in a water, thus imprisoning the clone in the water and also drowning him, making the clone desperately gasp for air as his life is sucked out of him.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water.
The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique,
though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

Zeta still running towards the imprisoned clone and getting fully into mid range, immediately casts a genjutsu on the clone after the water prison, making the clone see a giant fire ball coming down at him from the heavens(if he has broken free of the water prison he has this to deal with, if he hasn't he has this and the water prison to deal with), with the clone seeing such massive flame ball, he tries desperately to free himself from the water prison.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion where the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and
enveloping its target.

Zeta stops running towards the clone and expelling blasts of chakra through his feet thus stopping in place at mid range from where the clone stands looking up to d sky at the giant fore ball which is an illusion, zeta performs the snake hand seal as his opponent stands there staring at the illusionary fire ball, zeta after forming the Snake hand seal stretches out his right hand arm and from his palm he emits a lightning spear that travels extremely fast, the spear is aimed at the head of the clone, as the clone tries to break out of the genjutsu he is pierced in the head by the spear and killed. Thus poofs.

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their
hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is
great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of
spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique
to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as
Raikiri.

Better?

Yeah that was better in terms of making the fire illusion fit a bit more. However I want to point out a single detail.

as the clone tries to break out of the genjutsu he is pierced in the head by the spear and killed. Thus poofs.

Never describe your opponent/target dying or being injuries, you are unable to know that until he has had the chance to counter the assault. However you are able to state the possible outcomes of what might happen if he does not defend correctly. Do you know what I mean?^^

 

[neilson]

Yeah that was better in terms of making the fire illusion fit a bit more. However I want to point out a single detail.



Never describe your opponent/target dying or being injuries, you are unable to know that until he has had the chance to counter the assault. However you are able to state the possible outcomes of what might happen if he does not defend correctly. Do you know what I mean?^^

Yes sensei I know what you mean, in order words I would have stated "zeta watches mathias clone try to break out of the genjutsu(either using kai or self mutilation), zeta then release a lightning spear from his right hand palm aimed at the clones head, once released zeta watches the spear travel to see if his lightning spear would hit the clone and make it poof" I can also add if he doesn't dodge well but I feel that's too much detail.