[Romance] Gangster's love

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Girl , you are the first
The one who made me
Fall in love
One i loved for first time
I came to you
I never thought
You will bring my death
To me

You asked me to stay
Then i saw
Cops surrounding me
You were aiming
A gun at me
Bullets was going through my body
If it's not you
I would have shoot you there
I just stayed looking at your eyes

The pain in my heart
Is this your love
Is this the love i wanted
Is only a bullet to my heart
I don't hate you , It's because i love you
Look at my eyes , that's not closed
You will find love in them
Even in my death

 

[Princessu Kaaantchan]

No self respecting gangster would rhyme about that.

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

No self respecting gangster would rhyme about that.

No gangster respects himself.

 

[Princessu Kaaantchan]

No gangster respects himself.

I do .

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

I do .

Then a gangster, you are not.

 

[Sefirosu Masamune]

No gangster respects himself.

Silly mortal, the only thing a gangsta thinks about and respects himself. gangstas are too selfish not to respect themselves.


and OP. drop the ER and ad an A. sounds more gangsta that way


jk

 

[GreyWizard93]

No gangster respects himself.

..lol

Then a gangster, you are not.

..LOL


Its a good poem by the way.

 

[Sefirosu Masamune]

ohh yess and i do love the poem. very unique to say the least

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

Silly mortal, the only thing a gangsta thinks about and respects himself. gangstas are too selfish not to respect themselves.

Thinking only about yourself ≠ respecting yourself

If they did respect themselves, they would not longer try to be a "gangster".

@OP -> I did like the poem though ...

 

[Princessu Kaaantchan]

Then a gangster, you are not.

Not gonna lie I am quite a gangster.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

No self respecting gangster would rhyme about that.

That's why i rhyme about it man .

 

[Sefirosu Masamune]

Thinking only about yourself ≠ respecting yourself

If they did respect themselves, they would not longer try to be a "gangster".

@OP -> I did like the poem though ...

lol thats not entirely true. you cant speak for every gangmember. thats just down right judgemental ^_^

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

Not gonna lie I am quite a gangster.

:snick: That's cute

lol thats not entirely true. you cant speak for every gangmember. thats just down right judgemental ^_^

HEY! Being judgement is fun!

 

[Sabaki]

Really? What are you, a woman? Writing whimsical poetry and shit? Go and masturbate, you child.​

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[Sefirosu Masamune]

Really? What are you, a woman? Writing whimsical poetry and shit? Go and masturbate, you child.​

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What man even knows how to use that word? your testosterone should have prevented you from spelling and using that word in a sentence lol

 

[Uchiha Josephus]

Really? What are you, a woman? Writing whimsical poetry and shit? Go and masturbate, you child.​

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LMAO!!! what?! XD

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Really? What are you, a woman? Writing whimsical poetry and shit? Go and masturbate, you child.​

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Kid control yourself and stop whining . poetry have no limit and i write what i want not what you want . stop masterbating find a girl instead .

 

[Sabaki]

Kid control yourself and stop whining . poetry have no limit and i write what i want not what you want . stop masterbating find a girl instead .

Either way, your poetry is mediocre as shit.​

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[Noni]

Damn that was a good poem, deep i like it.