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Loome

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I will write a prediction. It is my second if i am not mistaken, so don't be mad at me, I don't know if my fanfictions writer skills are good for predictictiong. Nor my English skills are.

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Army fights against Madara and Juubi. Sakura is healing Kakashi, Naruto is making some clones, preparing Rasenshurikens. He lauches them but Juubi isn't damaged from them. During the fight, Naruto gained lots of injuries, that seem to make a presence after launching the Rasenshurikens. The army is fighting, but Juubi doesn't take any big damage after these attacks. Sakura finishes healing Kakashi, that goes back to his place, preparing the Mangekiyou. Naruto falls in his knees, one of his wounds opened more, causing him pain.
N=Naruto
O=Obito
K=Kakashi
S=Sakura
M=Madara, and I will tell the rest if there are more, during the prediction.
N: Aaargh, it hurts dammit!
Sakura gets Gai next to Naruto and begins healing them. During this, Naruto and Sakura are talking, while Obito is paying attention to them, and Gai is murmuring some stuff no one will ever know.
N: Thanks, Sakura-chan!
Obito is looking at them as Naruto gets back on his feet, leaving Gai to be healed more. In Obito's mind, memories with Rin and Team Minato are coming back to life. Madara notices Obito's nostalgia.
M: What the **** is wrong with you, Obito?
O: Nothing. I was just thinking how to take down this bunch of fodders. It is just too much fodders per square meter(this is actually my own phrase, i use it a lot).
M: I will let Juubi charge a big Bijuu Bomb. It should be enough for most of them. They are weak.
O*thinking*: So, Naruto, that is your team mate...
Naruto charges a Rasenshuriken again.
O*thinking*: You are just like me...
Naruto is almost done.
O*thinking*: Yet you say you won't ever become a villain...
Naruto raises his hand, with the rasenshuriken above it.
O*thinking*: But today I will prove you wrong!
The rasenshuriken is released, targeting Obito, that got on the ground.
O*thinking*: Today you will witness...
Obito absorbs the Rasenshuriken, and gets a kunai in his hand.
O*thinking, filled with hatred*: The worst scenario in your life!
Obito makes a hand seal, but Naruto doesn't see it because of his speed. Obito gets behind Naruto, with him not even realising. After two senconds, he feels the cold kunai touching his neck. He is shocked, as he stops moving. A scream is entering his ears.
Naruto talks with Kurama in his head.
N: What the **** is taking you so long?
Kurama: I can't do it just by clapping hands, so I need three more minutes. Wait for me.
Back to the fight: Naruto looks around, without moving his head. He was surrounded by Obito's clones. Obito turns Naruto to see what the hell is with the screaming he heard, still with the kunai touching his neck.
O: Don't move any of you, fodders! I will kill them both if you do!
Naruto is shocked, seeing who is Obito's clone attempting to kill.
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Dreckerplayer

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The dialogue...needs some work.

need more, need better,

and usually each chapter ends with something exciting, but in this prediction, I see people falling asleep.

Is this your first prediction?
 

Ghost of Uchiha

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U made a mistake tho ... obito has seen sakura before
 

Loome

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The dialogue...needs some work.

need more, need better,

and usually each chapter ends with something exciting, but in this prediction, I see people falling asleep.

Is this your first prediction?

Basically yes.
 

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it started good, then it goes down..
I liked the part where obito thinks about naruto.

but gj anyway.
 

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Stop making these threads....
 

dirklyn

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Close this very thread plzzzzzz
 
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