Fullmetal Alchemist ll FanArt ll (First Attempt)

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

:hey: NB,

I recently found Fullmetal Alchemist on my quest to cure my boredom. I got hooked on this anime from the first 3 episodes ! ^^


I finally got some new pencils to add to my drawings, due to my excessive smudging from my previous ones...

This piece probably took me about +3.00 ! ^^


The Materials I used were:

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1. B Pencil
2. 2B Pencil
3. 6B Pencil
4. Eraser

Here it is:

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What do you think ? Any and all feedback is appreciated

Thanks ^^​

 

[OhReary]

Looks pretty good, kinda jagged though

 

[Kristjan]

nice work

 

[Awkward Linguist]

nice. + rep

 

[Aze]

I like it + rep.


Tried to do something with coal?

 

[~Yubel~]

Nice.

 

[Yuka]

Nice drawings

 

[Hattake Ryuzaki]

very good +rep

 

[Frozenstein]

not too shabby. but his face is a little bit weird and you should do something with the shading.

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

I like it + rep.


Tried to do something with coal?

If you mean charcoal, yes. Although I prefer the pencil...
Thanks, Glad you like it ^^

not too shabby. but his face is a little bit weird and you should do something with the shading.

Not sure what you mean by 'do something with the shading' ?

Add more shading ? Or something else ?

 

[Rorasa]

it looks perfect to me great job

 

[ElementNami92]

Good work! I've saw this show before...I wanted to see more but it looked kinda...weird lol. Nice drawing though.

 

[Legendary Broly]

Nice drawing again bro
It just the outlines again ? I think it needs to be bolder so it stands out?
Maybe you can practice using drawing pens ? .. Its a little annoying when you make a mistake but yeah maybe give it a go or use a darker pencil when going over the outlines ?
I think its the outlines .. I just cant put my finger on the problem that's making it so light ? but yeah hmm I do think its the outlines ..
keep up the good work ^.^

 

[Frozenstein]

If you mean charcoal, yes. Although I prefer the pencil...
Thanks, Glad you like it ^^

Not sure what you mean by 'do something with the shading' ?

Add more shading ? Or something else ?

make it smoother on the right hand and the trousers. it's a bit rough to me.

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

make it smoother on the right hand and the trousers. it's a bit rough to me.

All right,

Thanks for the feedback ^^

 

[Yugure]

Looks great bro!

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

Looks great bro!

Thank you ^-^

 

[+Kyon+]

very good job keep it up.

 

[Scooby Doo]

Very good

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

Thanks ^