HiraishinFTG
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Hey guys, if you're taking the time to read this, thank you. I'm still trying to get better at my writing, and gauge what people think. This is one of the few poems I've actually written from the heart, to describe the wonderful (and quite out of the ordinary) feeling I've had today once I realized that I was not bound to the path I set for myself in life, and that I could literally choose to do anything. I named it "Freedom". Tell me what you think! Thanks! =D=D
Freedom is a breath of summer wind, a blasting gale
A drop in a still lake, a flood of these possibilities
That circle, rank on rank, on fire with crackling energy
A radiant inner peace, wise as the forest, soft as a sound.
Inside a perfect knot is tied, as heart and mind bind tight as one
For when there is no destination, destiny always finds a way
To be free ignites the color in your eyes, to walk with brighter clarity
A rainbow has eight paths, but it is only beautiful to behold all of them.
Freedom is fire.
Freedom is white.
Waiting to be painted.
To show its true colors,
That were inside you,
All this time.
A Masterpiece.
At peace.
Freedom is a breath of summer wind, a blasting gale
A drop in a still lake, a flood of these possibilities
That circle, rank on rank, on fire with crackling energy
A radiant inner peace, wise as the forest, soft as a sound.
Inside a perfect knot is tied, as heart and mind bind tight as one
For when there is no destination, destiny always finds a way
To be free ignites the color in your eyes, to walk with brighter clarity
A rainbow has eight paths, but it is only beautiful to behold all of them.
Freedom is fire.
Freedom is white.
Waiting to be painted.
To show its true colors,
That were inside you,
All this time.
A Masterpiece.
At peace.
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