[free verse] Black Widow

[Bi0hazard]

she sits alone on her web as shining dewdrops roll down upon it.

Her slender black legs slowly move about, as she spins her web.

her glass like eyes reflects like spectacles in the moon light, as she parts her lip baring her ivory white fangs.

the hair upon her doesn't touch her back, while she rises up sporting her red hourglass.

An artist forever alone...who would ever thought that would be me.​

(this is my first one)

 

[Ciao]

Good job Juana.

 

[Bi0hazard]

than you

 

[Tsuki]

It's a nice freeverse ^^

 

[Yeongwonhi]

ooooohh good so far!

 

[Akai Hime]

It's a nice freeverse ^^

good...............not perfect..................but you are awesome for a starter U_U

 

[izinagi54]

i love it good job

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Nice!!!

 

[Melly]

it's really good

 

[Souji]

very descriptive and full of imagery. Props to you juana

 

[Makoto Yuki]

Brava juana Brava i loved it

 

[Bi0hazard]

Thanks every ***** to you all

 

[Bright Master]

Its really deep how you can relate to the charateristics of a black widow, and you use them to express your emotions as well. If i didin't know any better, I would say that the author feels alone, and though like a black widow, is a great expression of art, feels like it'll be alone for a long time.

I truely love this here. This is more closer to a poem than a song though. Still, I love the message you send here, and its easy for someone to relate to when they feel alone...

 

[Bi0hazard]

Its really deep how you can relate to the charateristics of a black widow, and you use them to express your emotions as well. If i didin't know any better, I would say that the author feels alone, and though like a black widow, is a great expression of art, feels like it'll be alone for a long time.

I truely love this here. This is more closer to a poem than a song though. Still, I love the message you send here, and its easy for someone to relate to when they feel alone...

^_^ thanks you got part of it right

 

[King Cobra]

I really like it great job for your first

 

[Bi0hazard]

I really like it great job for your first

thank you *****

 

[Hori]

wow nice fiction, I dont know how I ended up reading all of it well made

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