"Forget Me"

Uchiha Jin

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I have created a new series i will be calling "Forget Me" Here is the synopsis
Give me some feedback.



Synopsis: Toshiro Hiramatsu was born with an ability, an ablity like no one has ever seen before in his time. He plans to use this ability to cause a revolution to stop the corruption of his country's government.
He will stop at nothing until the power of "decision making" is in the hands of the people like it rightfully should be. The government kills it's own citizens and cause natural disaters for personal gain behind closed doors, attempts to write it off as an "accident"
or another country's doing. They poison their people with lies of these events to keep them blind, deaf and dumb to whats really going on.Toshiro Hiramatsu intends to use his ability to
change his country, and hopefully other country's will take notice and follow suit, so the whole world can participate in the revolution and take the power back.
 

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What is his ability.

Its still being worked on, but i have the general idea of what it does, i left it out intentionally, maybe people will want to know what it is and tune in.
 

Desanto

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I kind of want to know about this "ability". You got me thinkin !
 

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Government Corruption stories are pretty cool.

I really liked code geass and The enis lobby arc from One piece
 

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sounds like code geass

Thats why i havent released any chapters yet im trying to distance it from code geass believe me i already thought of the similarities and its difficult to fix once you already have a solid idea.
 
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