[Photoshop] Forever Trapped
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Deidara Bocchi
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Oh well. I'll highlight the text wall. So you can just scan your eyeballs across the message to see what i want you to improvise O_>
It's also good for other GFX:ers that are on the same level as you xd..
Here's my CnC for this one.
I like the colours, but they feel repetitive. . . Same colour in the left corner, in the middle, and in the right corner xd.
Background's fine, but it should have some depth or.. Some more effects put onto it. It feels like there's just a layer, feels kinda cheap and yeah..
Biggest problem here..
The depth. There is NO depth whatsoever. use the sharpen/bluring tools, especially on the background. Also on the render/focal.
So it gets very un-dynamic, and there are also some light fails. Look at her face, it isn't the reflection of a green light which is right in front of her. Don't feel much blending here either i'm afraid.. Feels like there is a bg, a render and a text. No other effects :/, and almost no blending between the render and the bg layer. Needs to be fixed, easiest way is a nice lightsource >_O. Which you don't have either so. Make one, next time...
Text's fine, but i can't help that it also looks un-dynamic when the blue light over the "pp"'s don't stretch out on the entire text, but there's still the same reflect effect of the light all over the text. Looks a lil weird xd.
Needs border, looks unfinished without one.
That is all, i am tired and meh. Ok job, better luck next time >_________O
