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Scene starts with Kabuto and co
20 minutes before...
Orochimaru : Sasuke...
Kabuto : Orochimaru-sama, go help the Sandaime, it is no time to stand here! Team Taka, you too!
Suigetsu : And you? What is your plan?
Kabuto : I have something to do, for someone.
Suigetsu : Huh?!
Scene changes to Naruto and co
Kakashi : Everyone, be careful, he arrives!
Naruto/Sakura : Yes!!
Obito is showing, controlled by Zetsu, a hand on Madara's shoulder, Madara have his two Rinnegans.
Obito : Don't care about me, he is still manipulating my body, i...i can´t move on my own... Kakashi! It was his fault he did the same on Rin, he was the one who kill him!!!
Kakashi : What did you say? Is that true?
Madara : Yes, and i must say that it was really beautiful!
Naruto : Obito, hold on, we will save you!!
Obito : Gwaargh... I... I...
??? : You can do it...Obito! Because i know you and forever, i will trust in you.
Obito is showing, tears appears on his eyes, Kakashi is chocked.
Kakashi : Im...Impossible!!!
Obito : RINNN!!! Raaaaah!!!
Zetsu is repelling with an impressive speed.
Madara : How can you do this?!
Madara run to Obito, he wants to empale him but Sasuke stops him with Naruto and Sakura.
Sasuke : You are stronger than before! Naruto, Sakura, are you ready?
Madara : Brats, one minute from now, it is your time left.
Obito : Rin, i'm sorry, i am a criminal, i start this war...
Rin : Obito, you'are still the same for me, i love you, you are lovely now, you known?
Obito : ... I don't merit your love, i' m just a trash...
Rin : Don't say that, it is false!
Obito : I'm dying, Rin, i can't live now.
Rin : Obito...
Obito : But before, i have two gifts.
Kakashi/Rin : ?!!
Obito : First, your destiny wasn't to die Rin, i have a few chackra but i can do this... Give you my life!
Obito starts his handseals, Rin wants to stop him but he continues.
Rin : Kakashi, help me!!!
Kakashi : ...
Obito : Think about Kakashi, he was alone during 18 years, you can't let him alone! Then, i will give my sharingans power to you Kakashi, during all this time, i think that the Uchiha's Power is in your blood now, you will be able to activate your left sharingan but with something new!
Obito is smiling, giving his life to Rin and his power to Kakashi, his eyes are closing slowly. Rin are crying.
Rin : OBITO, i love you, i love you!!!
Kakashi (activating his new MS) : Now, we must defeat Madara. Rin, come with me, we must beat him... for Obito ( Thank you, my friend, i will hold my promise this time).
Kakashi is shown with Rin in the last page, ready to fight ( I precise that Rin came back to life with a 30 years old body)
What do think about this? Sorry for mistakes, i'm french and i'm learning english.
20 minutes before...
Orochimaru : Sasuke...
Kabuto : Orochimaru-sama, go help the Sandaime, it is no time to stand here! Team Taka, you too!
Suigetsu : And you? What is your plan?
Kabuto : I have something to do, for someone.
Suigetsu : Huh?!
Scene changes to Naruto and co
Kakashi : Everyone, be careful, he arrives!
Naruto/Sakura : Yes!!
Obito is showing, controlled by Zetsu, a hand on Madara's shoulder, Madara have his two Rinnegans.
Obito : Don't care about me, he is still manipulating my body, i...i can´t move on my own... Kakashi! It was his fault he did the same on Rin, he was the one who kill him!!!
Kakashi : What did you say? Is that true?
Madara : Yes, and i must say that it was really beautiful!
Naruto : Obito, hold on, we will save you!!
Obito : Gwaargh... I... I...
??? : You can do it...Obito! Because i know you and forever, i will trust in you.
Obito is showing, tears appears on his eyes, Kakashi is chocked.
Kakashi : Im...Impossible!!!
Obito : RINNN!!! Raaaaah!!!
Zetsu is repelling with an impressive speed.
Madara : How can you do this?!
Madara run to Obito, he wants to empale him but Sasuke stops him with Naruto and Sakura.
Sasuke : You are stronger than before! Naruto, Sakura, are you ready?
Madara : Brats, one minute from now, it is your time left.
Obito : Rin, i'm sorry, i am a criminal, i start this war...
Rin : Obito, you'are still the same for me, i love you, you are lovely now, you known?
Obito : ... I don't merit your love, i' m just a trash...
Rin : Don't say that, it is false!
Obito : I'm dying, Rin, i can't live now.
Rin : Obito...
Obito : But before, i have two gifts.
Kakashi/Rin : ?!!
Obito : First, your destiny wasn't to die Rin, i have a few chackra but i can do this... Give you my life!
Obito starts his handseals, Rin wants to stop him but he continues.
Rin : Kakashi, help me!!!
Kakashi : ...
Obito : Think about Kakashi, he was alone during 18 years, you can't let him alone! Then, i will give my sharingans power to you Kakashi, during all this time, i think that the Uchiha's Power is in your blood now, you will be able to activate your left sharingan but with something new!
Obito is smiling, giving his life to Rin and his power to Kakashi, his eyes are closing slowly. Rin are crying.
Rin : OBITO, i love you, i love you!!!
Kakashi (activating his new MS) : Now, we must defeat Madara. Rin, come with me, we must beat him... for Obito ( Thank you, my friend, i will hold my promise this time).
Kakashi is shown with Rin in the last page, ready to fight ( I precise that Rin came back to life with a 30 years old body)
What do think about this? Sorry for mistakes, i'm french and i'm learning english.
. And thanks Tenasa Uchiha. Mine is a little incomplete too, i forgot the fight with Madara...
