For what it's worth? chapter I

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It's been a month since the 4th shinnobi war has ended. All villages have suffered great loss and it's consequences are seen everywhere. Mothers crying on the graves of their children, people starving...

In Konohagakure, they've just burried Lady Tsunade and the other war victemes, so the villageres were heading their homes. Naruto was stopped by Lee.
"Don't worry Naruto. It's going to be fine." he said with a forced smile
" No it won't. Everything has changed nothing is going to be fine." Naruto said with a rough tone while his eyes were drowning in a flood of emotions.
Lee's face lost the half-smile and turned sad. " You're right. Who am I fooling? Only God knows what's going to happen to us now..."
The two friends then gazed into the horison. It was dark and cloudy. As if it was saying new troubles are yet to come.

Naruto sudenlly turned arownd. He saw Hinata and her sister both crying and came to them.
"Hinata...Hanabi... I'm sorry for your loss." he said not looking into Hinata's eyes because it was too disturbing seeing her in such a condition, she couldn't even breathe normally.
" Thanks..." said Hanabi. " Hinata nii-chan, are you ok? " added the young girl when she saw her sister crying even lowder.
"Hey, Hanabi, would you mind leaving us just for a sec? " sudenlly Naruto aksed.
She looked inot her sister and, seeing a comfirmative reaction, went away.
"Hinata, calm down. Talk to me...is there anything I can do? "
" N-Naruto...I've lost many people that I love Father, Neji, Kiba-kun, Shino-kun.... You and Hanabi are the only ones left.. I-I want to know you'll be here, I don't want to loose you..." said the girl with a tremulous voice. On her pleasent surprise, Naruto gently whiped her tears and kissed her " I will always be with you, don't doubt it..."

7 years later:​

The sownd of infant crying has spreaded across the Hyuuga main house. Hinata wakes up and shakes Naruto, who is now her husband. " It's your turn mr. Hokage " "But-" he didn't get to finnish because she pushed him out of the bed " Ok, but just this time ". Hinata gigeled.

As Naruto walked into the childrens woom he saw a boy with a headless princess doll in his hand laughing and a little girl literally drowning in tears. " Oji, what have I told you a bout picking on your sister?!!!1!!1" ( and yes Naruto is the one acting like a neurotic mother XD)
The 5 year-old boy who really resembeled on his lait uncle, Neji, only with purple spiky hair did the troll face and said "I don't remember..." Naruto snaped but before he could say anything a girl who resembles him a lot, but with violet silky hair said " Daddy, he lies, you know? " "She's telling me I'm a liar!" "You do lie" and the fight between the relatives continued in it's previous way... Naruto was so irritated that he started to twich... " Sotp it already! You're both suposed to be asleep anyway!"
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The kids emidiatlly stopped and went to bed. "Good night Oji. Good night daddy." said the girl " Good night Ai." Naruto said while tucking her in. "I know your not deaf" he told to his son. " Ok, good night. "




Be free to tell me what you think! :yayy:
 
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Great work just don't be in hurry in order to avoid some spelling mistakes ......... :hint:

great and amazing work....... I would love to read more of them from you now on :win::win:
 
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You should pay more attention to spelling and grammar.
It was too short IMO, and all we got to know is that Naruto has become the hokage and has 2 children from Hinata. It's not much of a plot so far :/ But keep up the good work ^^
 

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Nice. You put some effort into this. Repped.
Thanks :D
nicely written Naruhin ftw :)
Thank you ^^
Spelling >.>
Yeah :sweat: sorry about that!
Great work just don't be in hurry in order will avoid some spelling mistake ......... :hint:

great and amazing work....... I would love to read more of them from you now on :win::win:
:sweat: sorry for that :/
Awwwwww thanks :yayy:
You should pay more attention to spelling and grammar.
It was too short IMO, and all we got to know is that Naruto has become the hokage and has 2 children from Hinata. It's not much of a plot so far :/ But keep up the good work ^^
Again XD I'm so sorry about that :(
It's not much so far, but just wait and you'll see! :snick:
And thaks :D
 
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