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(Tsubaki no Ken-Sennin)Dance of the Blade Sage
Type:Nin-kentaijutsu
Background:
Once there was a girl who went by the name of Penny. She was a well-known fighter of her age, being an exception swords master but trouble was she wanted to learn how to be a puppeteer. She tried to make the two of the work but she couldn’t find a common ground between the two, so what she did was come out and asked for help. Now one knew how to achieve such a feature, but then she meets a man who was named for some reason but told Penny he can help her dreams a reality.By merging the two styles and adding a twist to it, he recreated his idea into what Penny now uses called the Dance of the Blade Sage. She became far known around the world for her usage of the style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Dance of the Blade Sage is a style that revolves around the usage of special designed ninja wire and swords. The style is similar to that of the puppet technique, where the user manipulates the wires to control the swords that they wield. Once activated the user is able to freely manipulate the blades.
The style uses a method similar to how Hidan used is scythe, having the end of the handle attached to a spool on his back. Dance of the Blade Sage uses a similar concept but instead of just one sword, the user is able to manipulate up eight blades at once. These blades when out of reach of the user can be manipulated as well through chakra to levitate the swords. This done through a method similar to the (Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades but instead of manipulating the blades, the user does so to the ninja wire,now being able to control them more freely.
The wires are made of special wire which can’t be cut so easily, making usage of the style easier. Once the swords are removed from storage (which is usually on the users back in a special case) the user can also use elemental chakra in the blade. This is done by channeling chakra into the blade’s wires and flowing the chakra into the sword itself. Lastly the swords can also obtain elemental chakra in them. The user will manipulate chakra into the swords and using mental commands, can ignite or infuse chakra into the swords with ease.
The swords are kept on a case on the user’s back, which also contains the spool to retract the wires of the swords. The case is made of metal that can absorb chakra, so that the user can channel chakra into the wires through the case and into the swords, which is done very quickly.
The activation of this style is done passively through sheer chakra flow alone. The user can also perform strong fist or other style in between usage of the style.
Sample of the style being activated
Entire style can be seen here:
Starting from: 2:13- 3:11
The swords of this style are not long, each being roughly the length of a wakizashi being about 30 centimeters long. This allows for easier transport of the blades and more lighter when used in combat.
Example Techniques:
(Tsubaki no Ken-Senin: Kakusa Retabukiko)Dance of the Blade Sage: Hidden Armory
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short - mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description:
Once the style has been activated, the user will manipulated chakra into the blades, applying the camouflage technique to each sword, allowing them to blend the swords in with the environment around the blades to allow for sneak attacks with ease.
(Tsubaki no Ken-Senin: Kinkyuu Hinan)Dance of the Blade Sage: Emergency Evacuation
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description:
The user manipulate two of there swords, and using the spool while launch them to a near by solid structure. Once done, the user will channel there earth chakra quickly through out the body to decrease there weight by half, then using the spool will retract themselves. Due to the user being lighter the spool will bring the user along with them and bring them out of harms way. This is done quite fast, allowing the user time to avoid a echnique, simply by getting out of range. The user can also use it to get close to enemies behind of them fast. Once done the use's weight is returned to normal.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have mastered basic five elements
-Must have completed kenjutsu and ninjutsu training
-Masters of this style has well rounded chakra control
(Tsubaki no Ken-Sennin)Dance of the Blade Sage
Type:Nin-kentaijutsu
Background:
Once there was a girl who went by the name of Penny. She was a well-known fighter of her age, being an exception swords master but trouble was she wanted to learn how to be a puppeteer. She tried to make the two of the work but she couldn’t find a common ground between the two, so what she did was come out and asked for help. Now one knew how to achieve such a feature, but then she meets a man who was named for some reason but told Penny he can help her dreams a reality.By merging the two styles and adding a twist to it, he recreated his idea into what Penny now uses called the Dance of the Blade Sage. She became far known around the world for her usage of the style.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
Dance of the Blade Sage is a style that revolves around the usage of special designed ninja wire and swords. The style is similar to that of the puppet technique, where the user manipulates the wires to control the swords that they wield. Once activated the user is able to freely manipulate the blades.
The style uses a method similar to how Hidan used is scythe, having the end of the handle attached to a spool on his back. Dance of the Blade Sage uses a similar concept but instead of just one sword, the user is able to manipulate up eight blades at once. These blades when out of reach of the user can be manipulated as well through chakra to levitate the swords. This done through a method similar to the (Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades but instead of manipulating the blades, the user does so to the ninja wire,now being able to control them more freely.
The wires are made of special wire which can’t be cut so easily, making usage of the style easier. Once the swords are removed from storage (which is usually on the users back in a special case) the user can also use elemental chakra in the blade. This is done by channeling chakra into the blade’s wires and flowing the chakra into the sword itself. Lastly the swords can also obtain elemental chakra in them. The user will manipulate chakra into the swords and using mental commands, can ignite or infuse chakra into the swords with ease.
The swords are kept on a case on the user’s back, which also contains the spool to retract the wires of the swords. The case is made of metal that can absorb chakra, so that the user can channel chakra into the wires through the case and into the swords, which is done very quickly.
The activation of this style is done passively through sheer chakra flow alone. The user can also perform strong fist or other style in between usage of the style.
Sample of the style being activated
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Entire style can be seen here:
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Starting from: 2:13- 3:11
The swords of this style are not long, each being roughly the length of a wakizashi being about 30 centimeters long. This allows for easier transport of the blades and more lighter when used in combat.
Example Techniques:
(Tsubaki no Ken-Senin: Kakusa Retabukiko)Dance of the Blade Sage: Hidden Armory
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short - mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description:
Once the style has been activated, the user will manipulated chakra into the blades, applying the camouflage technique to each sword, allowing them to blend the swords in with the environment around the blades to allow for sneak attacks with ease.
(Tsubaki no Ken-Senin: Kinkyuu Hinan)Dance of the Blade Sage: Emergency Evacuation
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C-Rank
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:N/A
Description:
The user manipulate two of there swords, and using the spool while launch them to a near by solid structure. Once done, the user will channel there earth chakra quickly through out the body to decrease there weight by half, then using the spool will retract themselves. Due to the user being lighter the spool will bring the user along with them and bring them out of harms way. This is done quite fast, allowing the user time to avoid a echnique, simply by getting out of range. The user can also use it to get close to enemies behind of them fast. Once done the use's weight is returned to normal.
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Additional effects and Restrictions:
-Must have mastered basic five elements
-Must have completed kenjutsu and ninjutsu training
-Masters of this style has well rounded chakra control
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Demon God's Fist - Pencak Silat[/CENTER]
Type: Nintaijutsu
Background: Pencak Silat is an martial art specializing in decisive blows and guerrilla tactics. Pencak means Dance or Distraction, and Silat means Attack. It was developed in the Land of Fangs to ward off suppression and succeeded at one point in driving invaders from the Land of Claw, via a resistance led by Silcardo Jenazad (a native of the Land of Fang). The style became so notable that shinobi and martial artists from other countries frequently visited the Land of Fangs solely to train in the craft. Something that was accomplished by many, however it is yet to be heard of anyone trianing directly under Silcardo Jenazad, a complete master.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style has a plethora of moves that could be considered "dirty", like the "Jurus", a set of 18 combo attacks in a single attack (technique) meant to go for vital areas like the eyes, throat, and groin for kill. But has direct and unpredictable approach as well. There seems to be a large number of moves preceded by a jump, as well. However the style is not so simple, experts in the art began to progress it's nature and mixed Earth Ninjutsu into the craft, perfecting the style; through Doton chakra. The user uses Doton chakra by making their skin robust, sharp and abrasive, with a dark almost entirely black tone of color. This allows for even the smallest contact to result in skin cutting, capable of doing penetrating damage, shredding flesh, piercing targets. Essentially making their limbs become virtual shredding hammers. This allows them to even grab the ground firmly to the point of shattering it within the scope of their grip. When entering the style the user adopts a slighlt bent knees position with one arm placed above his head, palm facing out and their dominant hand is closed in a fist, lifted to mouth level.
Additional effects and Restrictions:
Must have mastered Basic Taijutsu.
Must have mastered Basic Ninjutsu & Earth Release.
User's hand and feet become more resilient in receiving attacks and blocking.
The user's hands become accustomed to the style, remaining slightly abrasive by nature. This makes their freeforms attacks have a minor cutting/abrasive edge.
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Demon God's Fist - Pencak Silat[/CENTER]Type: Nintaijutsu
Background: Pencak Silat is an martial art specializing in decisive blows and guerrilla tactics. Pencak means Dance or Distraction, and Silat means Attack. It was developed in the Land of Fangs to ward off suppression and succeeded at one point in driving invaders from the Land of Claw, via a resistance led by Silcardo Jenazad (a native of the Land of Fang). The style became so notable that shinobi and martial artists from other countries frequently visited the Land of Fangs solely to train in the craft. Something that was accomplished by many, however it is yet to be heard of anyone trianing directly under Silcardo Jenazad, a complete master.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style has a plethora of moves that could be considered "dirty", like the "Jurus", a set of 18 combo attacks in a single attack (technique) meant to go for vital areas like the eyes, throat, and groin for kill. But has direct and unpredictable approach as well. There seems to be a large number of moves preceded by a jump, as well. However the style is not so simple, experts in the art began to progress it's nature and mixed Earth Ninjutsu into the craft, perfecting the style; through Doton chakra. The user uses Doton chakra by making their skin robust, sharp and abrasive, with a dark almost entirely black tone of color. This allows for even the smallest contact to result in skin cutting, capable of doing penetrating damage, shredding flesh, piercing targets. Essentially making their limbs become virtual shredding hammers. This allows them to even grab the ground firmly to the point of shattering it within the scope of their grip. When entering the style the user adopts a slighlt bent knees position with one arm placed above his head, palm facing out and their dominant hand is closed in a fist, lifted to mouth level.
Combat Stance:
Hands and Legs under influence of Pencak Silat's abrasive nature:
This is done by channeling chakra and materializing the robust nature of rock through their limbs, or manually removing the earth from the ground or from existing techniques for offensive and defensive purposes; such is the nature that it can parry and break regular blades, swords and other weapons bare handed. It is a formidable martial art, showing strength against Karate, and able to adapt to anything, any form of terrain or surface to keep balance and accommodate with the style, with a large amount of techniques and high speed movement. Being complicated and bizarre. The technique is perfected through the waving of ones body and limbs before attacking. Unlike Drunken Fist the user does not appear willow or wavering, however they hold flexibility and dexterity of the same level, due to the round and jumping patterns they utilize with both arms and legs, unlike the stumbling and unbalanced rythm of Drunken Fist, this form of unpredictability relies more on deceiving the opponent with our limbs. To better understand in picture what i'm aiming for, look at the second spoiler above. Providing equally useful unpredictable movements simply by hiding their real intentions with hand patterns.
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Supreme Silat ( Expert Master of the Style)
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Expert (Learning the advanced techniques)
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Disciples (Learning the basic techniques)
Example Techniques:^
Expert (Learning the advanced techniques)
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Disciples (Learning the basic techniques)
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Rolling Grinning
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A powerful Silat move that involves the user striking at the victim's vital points whilst spinning around the victim either by jumping over them or dashing at them, making it near impossible to dodge once the intial blow has been landed and the user begins circling the target. The targeted areas are mainly the eyes, neck, ribs, and other vital parts of the body. With the hands enhanced by the Pencak Silat's special rocky nature, the user's blows aside from being stronger also slash and tear apart the skin and clothing of the effected body parts. Dealing up to a toral of 8 strikes. The user finishes with a close fist into the gut. The technique's effectiveness is dependant on the user's speed and if they so wish they don't to circle the target, but rather keep attacking the same side unpredictably.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Ground Split Drop
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user adopts a side-facing stance and firmly prepares himself. After turning his hands pitch black and coating them in abrasiveness, they leap at the target using chakra to push off the ground faster. Closing the distance inbetween with a single step in an instant, keeping their arms inside their area upon nearing the target the user extends the attack arm outward. Smashing it into the target's chest, the blow strong enough to send an adult person backwards a considerable distance and breaking several rib cages. Alternatively done as a kicking attack instead of a fist, having the user striking upside down and kicking his opponent with a side kick to the face with a rapid spin on their standing hands. In this case the legs are coated as well.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Nine Strikes One Kill
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user channels Doton chakra throughout their hands and knees. Creating Pencak Silat trademark appearance, they then charge at the target using their knuckles and knees as the main weapon to deal numerous strikes around the target's chest and torso. Pushing them back and carving their knuckles into the flesh with each strike, fracturing minor bones in the process. The user lands a total of 8 strikes, finishing with a 9th final strike extending their hand out straight, in the form of a spear and piercing the target's torso area. Gruesomely coming out from their back, shredding numerous interal organs in the process.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Whirling Stone
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user brushes and slides their hand or leg through either a pre-existing earth technique or from natural rock and using the Pencak Silat trademark ability to add earth into their skin they lift part of the rock and shape it into formidable and sharp gauntlets or boots in order to land stronger blows capable of shattering bones and rupturing internal organs; these can have a normal look, or resemble a wolf's head, snake, etc. The technique is strong enough to play in equal grounds with other elemental techniques following Earth's strength and weaknesses. The technique is one of the few Pencak Silat that have wider range, as the user can shoot these accessories as rapid projectiles. The user can only use earth techniques made by the opponent if they are B rank or lower, even to the point of stopping the technique by infusing their arm with earth chakra and forcefully stealing the rock from the jutsu.
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A powerful Silat move that involves the user striking at the victim's vital points whilst spinning around the victim either by jumping over them or dashing at them, making it near impossible to dodge once the intial blow has been landed and the user begins circling the target. The targeted areas are mainly the eyes, neck, ribs, and other vital parts of the body. With the hands enhanced by the Pencak Silat's special rocky nature, the user's blows aside from being stronger also slash and tear apart the skin and clothing of the effected body parts. Dealing up to a toral of 8 strikes. The user finishes with a close fist into the gut. The technique's effectiveness is dependant on the user's speed and if they so wish they don't to circle the target, but rather keep attacking the same side unpredictably.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Ground Split Drop
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user adopts a side-facing stance and firmly prepares himself. After turning his hands pitch black and coating them in abrasiveness, they leap at the target using chakra to push off the ground faster. Closing the distance inbetween with a single step in an instant, keeping their arms inside their area upon nearing the target the user extends the attack arm outward. Smashing it into the target's chest, the blow strong enough to send an adult person backwards a considerable distance and breaking several rib cages. Alternatively done as a kicking attack instead of a fist, having the user striking upside down and kicking his opponent with a side kick to the face with a rapid spin on their standing hands. In this case the legs are coated as well.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Nine Strikes One Kill
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user channels Doton chakra throughout their hands and knees. Creating Pencak Silat trademark appearance, they then charge at the target using their knuckles and knees as the main weapon to deal numerous strikes around the target's chest and torso. Pushing them back and carving their knuckles into the flesh with each strike, fracturing minor bones in the process. The user lands a total of 8 strikes, finishing with a 9th final strike extending their hand out straight, in the form of a spear and piercing the target's torso area. Gruesomely coming out from their back, shredding numerous interal organs in the process.
(Kenmashajin: ) - Pencak Silat: Whirling Stone
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user brushes and slides their hand or leg through either a pre-existing earth technique or from natural rock and using the Pencak Silat trademark ability to add earth into their skin they lift part of the rock and shape it into formidable and sharp gauntlets or boots in order to land stronger blows capable of shattering bones and rupturing internal organs; these can have a normal look, or resemble a wolf's head, snake, etc. The technique is strong enough to play in equal grounds with other elemental techniques following Earth's strength and weaknesses. The technique is one of the few Pencak Silat that have wider range, as the user can shoot these accessories as rapid projectiles. The user can only use earth techniques made by the opponent if they are B rank or lower, even to the point of stopping the technique by infusing their arm with earth chakra and forcefully stealing the rock from the jutsu.
Must have mastered Basic Taijutsu. Must have mastered Basic Ninjutsu & Earth Release. User's hand and feet become more resilient in receiving attacks and blocking. The user's hands become accustomed to the style, remaining slightly abrasive by nature. This makes their freeforms attacks have a minor cutting/abrasive edge.
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You just did, you ought to read the CFS itself (it's rather short anyway) and let me know if you want an explanation of it, in case anything was not understood fully. But other than that, we will do this on a technique-by-technique basis. Thus, we will review the customs one by one as they get approved, but the style is already yours. Both of you are Disciple rank. Your limbs are now abrasive by nature, your freeform/taijutsu attacks have shredding and cutting damage. Doesn't mean much, but poking someone's eye would be a potential one shot, instead of a crying eye only.
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