First sig edit

[KillebIsBeast]

First Sig:

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First Sig Edit:

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First Sig Edit 2:

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I took some of the feedback and tried to fix the first one ...
What do you guys think? And what can I do differently?

 

[KGB Kakuzu]

I kinda like the second edit.....while initially I liked the first edit...the black is too dark.

With the second, we see that there is some sense of darkness present, but Naruto is overwhelmingly present...kind of like he's overpowering it with strength.... kinda cheesy, and maybe not what you're aiming for, but I like the thought of it XD

 

[Edward]

i like the second one, probably cuz i can see the back of the sky and its different shades. overall, amazing sig edits!

 

[SasukeTheViper EMS]

Oho, very nice. The second version looks great! ^^
But I still think you should work on the render placement and the size of the text.

 

[KillebIsBeast]

a think the originally is better :/

Thanks man! Im just trying to get this thing right I am a beginner so the feedback is awesome!

I kinda like the second edit.....while initially I liked the first edit...the black is too dark.

With the second, we see that there is some sense of darkness present, but Naruto is overwhelmingly present...kind of like he's overpowering it with strength.... kinda cheesy, and maybe not what you're aiming for, but I like the thought of it XD

No I definitely wasn't aiming for that ... although naruto is pretty powerful haha so overall the first one? haha

i like the second one, probably cuz i can see the back of the sky and its different shades. overall, amazing sig edits!

Thanks dude ! Its so hard to realize what I need to do here !! But I like the shade in that back as well .

Oho, very nice. The second version looks great! ^^
But I still think you should work on the render placement and the size of the text.

What size do you think would fit this kind of sig? So naruto should be placed in a different part of the sig ? Give me some ideas man ,youre feedback is great.

 

[Shichi]

I like the second one the best

 

[Frozenstein]

well keep practicing, but btw wrong section...

 

[SasukeTheViper EMS]

What size do you think would fit this kind of sig? So naruto should be placed in a different part of the sig ? Give me some ideas man ,youre feedback is great.

I appreciate the sentiment.
I think anything from 18 pt to 10 pt would be great. And yes, Naruto should be like, in the middle of it, and then move the text beside him. (either at the top or at the bottom, whichever you see fits)

 

[KillebIsBeast]

I like the second one the best

Thanks ! Anything in the second I should change?

well keep practicing, but btw wrong section...

Any advice? And im so confused I was told to come to this section lol...

I appreciate the sentiment.
I think anything from 18 pt to 10 pt would be great. And yes, Naruto should be like, in the middle of it, and then move the text beside him. (either at the top or at the bottom, whichever you see fits)

No problem dude. Alright I redo the render and the sig it self . Should I try a different color than yellow? I thought yellow would fit narutos chakara but im not to sure on a good color... Suggestions?

 

[SasukeTheViper EMS]

I was told to come to this section...

No, this is the wrong section;

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is where you should post.

 

[KillebIsBeast]

No, this is the wrong section;

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is where you should post.

Shit... Lol

 

[voids]

Love how you are learning pretty fast, edits look really good, keep it up