yes i made the lineart myselfYou did better than most when they first started.
with more practice you're sure to improve
Also if you made the lineart yourself even more props to you
I'm an honest person, And I will have to say that it sucks ass.
But, With patience, You will only hope to improve your skills.
thx manyou are an honest person and so am i so i have to say that for a first time it looks awesome
i mean
the thing that sucks is when someone takes a manga page
doesnt bother making a lineart of it
just adds a base color with no shades or sh*t
and done
it may look like allot of work was done...but no...not happening