[Approved] First bio, take it easy on me..

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Name:Agis Nara
Nickname:Agis
Gender:Male
Age:19
Clan:Nara

Looks: Agis is about six foot even with messy light brown hair that frames his faces and falls just into his light blue eyes, and is parted just above his right. The only blemish in his overall handsome appearance is a large scar running down his face, the scar runs from a little above his right eyebrow, down the bridge of his nose and ends under his left eye. He wears a black leather jacket lined with white fur, a regular white t-shirt underneath, regular black pants, black boots, and black gloves. He also wears three belts to hold two of his three swords, one of which is buckled with a lions head clasp, and a chain necklace featuring a roaring lion head facing to the right with a gothic style cross forming out of the bottom through its hair. His third sword, unlike the other two katanas, is a double edged, slightly long, all black tanto. He is usually seen wandering with his red stallion who he seldom rides but uses to carry his various items, such as umbrellas, and bundles of weapons.

Personality:Mostly Agis spends his days wandering through dark forests and meditating in caves, training and studying as he travels. He has an upbeat humorous personality and has many friends but enjoys keeping his thoughts to himself and spending time alone to get to know his own self better, finding solace in the peace and quiet. Despite being part of a clan with very prestigious skill and techniques, he tries his utmost to expand on these techniques, make them better, more versatile, and not have to depend on them, as well being well-versed with many different types of weapons. He has strong will-power and motivation and is ready to do whatever he must to become stronger.

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Village Info

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:Jounin
Specialty:none
Elements:Water, Fire, Wind, Earth (needs training)
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:Ever since Agis was young he enjoyed making weapons and using his shadows to throw them and wield them. Always wishing he could become a master weapon maker, constant was his thirst for knowledge and skill of smithing. Having been a fairly skilled ninja since a young age he rose through the ranks quickly, and become a reliable asset to the village. He graduated the academy at 8, was a chunin by the time he was 10, and made jounin shortly after turning 13. At behest of the Hokage he joined the ANBU black ops directly under the Hokages command. Four years passed and he carried out many missions that he wishes he could forget. Similiarly to Kakashi the Hokage saw this and relieved him of his duties as an ANBU member. Giving him permission to wander the neighboring lands, to gather intel, ward off battles, and act as unnofficial ambassador between village and surrounding lands. He left on his journey when he was seventeen, and now two years have passed.
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Lost:0


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And a problem is there. When you listed the elements, put beside it this thing "Requires Training". And also remove both the specialties and replace it with "None". Since you did not start any training, you are not allowed to have any specialties or elements.
 

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And a problem is there. When you listed the elements, put beside it this thing "Requires Training". And also remove both the specialties and replace it with "None". Since you did not start any training, you are not allowed to have any specialties or elements.
Ok, thankyou!
Is that better?
 
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